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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 96)

kclovearshi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 10:24am | IP Logged

The highlight of the update has to be the Brawl, but seriously? that's how teen boys resolve their differences? in this case the bestie betrayalLOL This was as shocking to me as Manorama asking for Payal's hand in marriage Wink toh Saiyu Patel, you are really packing a punch in every update LOL

Speaking of Payal's hand in marriage, the reaction of Gupta household was as expected except Payal.! Woh sharamse pani pani nai hui instead is skeptical just like us; the smart readers LOL
Anjali's explanation, I felt thodasa direct tha that her sasuraal is poor but they all took it in a stride!!
(Haan Dr.AALUSLOLWA tu sahi nikli LOL) Mereko abhi bhi doubt hain even after Anjali and Aman's insights into Not-a-K-vamp-Mamiji and her asli iraade LOL Looks like Kavitha(Canapoem) came very close to her guessing (#3) Tongue

You have a pic for Aman? I want to see him; esp. after knowing half the school unpar marti hain; is it just girls?LOL Loved his convesration with both Khushi and Arnav LOL

Your dress sense is Super Big smile

And I hate Manorama even if she is Not-a-K-vamp-Mamiji Dead She has separated out beloved pair, now Khushi wont even hug him properly Angry

ps: Unres'ing is very stressfulLOL

Edited by kclovearshi - 29 January 2015 at 2:08pm

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mints23 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Superb update Saiyyu... I lot of communication between a lot of characters happened in this chapter. It was required to clarify their thoughts and situations. We got a glimpse into the head of Anjali, Shyam, Garima, Akash, Payal, Aman, Khushi and Manorama... all in one chapter. However, I want a sneak peak into Arnav's head too... Did he actually see Khushi kissing Aman? Is there going to be a leap... after college wala? Anyways... will re-read like always and get back with a detailed comment... Abhi too much sleepy!! Sleepy

Edited by mints23 - 28 January 2015 at 11:03am

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kushiarnav1 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 10:29am | IP Logged
wondering why manorama auntyji is after kushi????/always thinking wrong about her...

why this negativity negativity?...

Edited by kushiarnav1 - 28 January 2015 at 10:55am

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MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Reserved..Will Unreserve Soon...Smile

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canapoem IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 10:32am | IP Logged
One thing Manorama is bang on and that is Payal is the most sensible person in this whole story. 
Either be it questioning her family about the sudden motive behind Mami's proposal or supporting and understanding Arnav and Khushi or giving Akash support when he feels low about his attitude towards Arnav, Payal you are always there at the right time at the right place to handle situations and Payaliya, you stole my heart away. No wonder Manorama has gone fida over her.

And I understand the logic behind Manorama's behaviour and Saiyu's secret finally.

Manorama is ok if a poor but sanskari girl becomes their house bahu. She does not care for money if the girl is decent, well behaved etc etc. But she got pissed off that Anjali married a poor guy. So the logic is that any status girl is ok to marry her rich son as long as she meets the credentials similarly daughters from their families should only marry richer guys. So guy should be basically richer than the girl. 
What a theory!!! I should be granted PhD for understanding her logic. LOL

Looks like Shyam and Anjali were so much into each other that their respective sisters and brothers found their sibling love in each other. Akash found his sister in Khushi and Payal found her brother in Arnav. LOL

Aman is such a sweet heart. He talked to Khushi in such a mature way.
But LOL loved the way Arnav and Aman sorted their differences out. Boys will be boys , always stupid!!!!!

Manorama, enough of your hatred towards Khushi and accept her too.Wink

Edited by canapoem - 29 January 2015 at 11:36am

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TwilightStar_JP IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Late by a page

I love payal and Arnav's bonding! Bas.

Aman and Arnav what eh way to patch up!

I'm not talking about maami!

Payal is cent % right about her analysis with respect to all that's happening now from maami's side!

Aman and Khushi's convo was a breather! Also aman's views are a fresh set of thoughts and he might help the family!

That's about it I guess! Ntn else to say! I'd rather wait for sometime till the story takes a leap or something or is zoomed from Delhi!


Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 29 January 2015 at 9:33am

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crazyweird Senior Member

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Very nice update
Whats with mami not liking khushi
You got me intrigued

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-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 10:49am | IP Logged
I dont like Manorma at all
Always thinking bad of Khushi

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