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lalarukh IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 January 2015 at 4:04am | IP Logged
oh my my thats pleasant surprise manorma thought she not really a vamp u see...hehehe...payal and akash...loved this twist...:)..
hyee arnav in white kurt a ...ufff yum yum :)...loved the sobbing khushi ...its so natural how it hurts to ignore or being ignored by ur portrayed ...awesome update :)

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robinhood008 Goldie

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Posted: 23 January 2015 at 4:07am | IP Logged
That was an amazinggg update!!!

The answer to your question...yes I still like manorama even after what she did with arshi...and yess I've given explanation fr that too

But after reading this update I've started liking her a bit too

Whi wouldve thot that she'll be the one to fix payash alliance

I'm sure payal must have definitely given her a ARE YOU SERIOUS look...Hahahaha

Well I must say that now I'm having more interest in payash alliance via manorama than the actual leads of the story

Well maybe bcz I knw that ib the end they'd be together
But payash coming together this way was relli unexpected...this is THE TWIST fr me

Loved it to bitsss!!!

Amazinggg update!!!

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barsha_dash IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 January 2015 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Awesome update...Manorama asking Payal's hand for Akash came as a shock to me. Eager to know what happens next...a lil sad for less Arhi scenes.

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Downhill IF-Addictz

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Posted: 23 January 2015 at 4:15am | IP Logged
simply fabulous
loved it
fatima2603 Goldie

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Posted: 23 January 2015 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Loving the story. I feel so sorry for arnav n khushi. I hope manorma realises the error of her ways. Shes got a personal vendetta against khushi and it's not right! Im shocked she's suggesting payal and akash to get married 

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aquagal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 January 2015 at 4:54am | IP Logged
For you Note: I don't keep much emotions in my stories other than some chick flick type romanceWink. I feel the lack of depth in my stories. I need to work on it. Yeah yeah... epilogue mein bring on the leap Tongue
My name is Aayat (penname hi sahi #facepalm). Ek songs hi hain jismein mera dimag average se thoda fast chalta hai and it makes me think if I should consider changing my field  LOL
Akash was silently observing Payal. Embarrassed
"When he was returning, he had passed by her closed candle store 'Waxing Moon' and had subconsciously wondered what Payal usually does on her weekly off when not organizing a godh bharai rasam for her sister-in-law. However, she was surprisingly here at his hotel. He quickly figured out that she was partaking in the 'Nainital Unveiled' exposition being held at the Raizada hotel by some private benefactors. His feet automatically directed him towards her but before he could walk upto her and greet her, his assistant came up to him and directed him to the private elevators in time for the meeting. With a last look at the oblivious Payal, Aakash shrugged and walked away."
Dhyaan se dekhiye upar red bold words ko..yeh apni kahani khud bayaan karte hain.. LOL
Akash's subconscious mind is already attracted to Payal. He thinks about her when something related comes up and he walks up to her without any thought. Ok..almost walked up to her, but yeh almost hi toh sab prem kahaniyon ka symbol haiWink He also looked at her before walking away, couldn't help himself hai na..Embarrassed And now please concentrate on blue words... This is what we call as interruptionTongue. So Akash and Payal now have all ingredients ready for a beautiful love story... Embarrassed

There are people who are lactose intolerant and here is our Mami who was known to be Guptas Intolerant. But Payal is an exception for her too. Mami likes or doesn't dislike Payal but still it affects her that Payal doesn't expect any favor or act of kindness from her. I just want to know one thing "Mamiji ko kya farak padta hai dammit" Tongue Janta jawaab chahti hai... Tongue

Awww... my poor darling Khushi but she isn't going to be like this for long. She is going to be rich and happy soon Wink
Savita seems very much interested in Aman. Aman deserves a nice girl too and may be once he gets true love he will forgive Arnav too.
I love Arnav in white and I loved Khushi's this suit too otherwise they always decked up Khushi in aiwein hi clothes. But sadly yeh suit sirf 2 minutes k liye aayaConfused Bhala ho tumhara and asrcraze ka is eyetonic ke liye.
Khushi will brood and it's all Mami's fault. How happy she is seeing the development!! huh!!!
But she loves Anjali so much. I'm happy for that. She isn't a bad person as such, just a mere mortal with her flaws.
Khushi is quite attentive even while brooding. The eyelock!!! Heart Arnav should now get a hint that all her feelings are not lost. The love, care and attraction are still there. But I don't know if he will comprehend it. Waise it's difficult for anyone to understand unless the person is one with the power of reading minds of others.
Garima  was waiting for reaction from Mamiji and what a reaction she got from her!!! I can imagine Garima going all speechless muttering few words like "Yeh... kya... hum..." LOL
I guess this is all a reaction of Mami meeting her friend with her granddaughter and Payal at the same venue. Also may be she really faraked Payal thinking her as such an unkind person.
Akash ke proposal se pehle Mamiji ka proposal- choke toh hona hi tha!! Now he can easily ask Payal about what she does in her weekly offs on their first night if only Payal agrees to this rishta. I have a feeling she will refuse it. (Yeah I have lots of feelings you see). And may be this will cement Mami's thought of having Payal as her daughter-in-law.

Edited by aquagal - 23 January 2015 at 4:56am

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EchTee IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 January 2015 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Awesomely written

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sushna IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 January 2015 at 5:35am | IP Logged
So damn good...
Hope arhi also come together...
Thanks for pm

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