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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 88)

rith123 Goldie

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Posted: 22 January 2015 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
What is Manorama up to? I am no more ambivalent, I'm sort of leaning towards I don't really like this woman. 
Khushi's concern for Arnav is sweet. Why can't they just talk to each other? *sigh*
Please tell me there is a happily ever after for them. I can't deal with unhappy endings.
Also, go Payal and Akash.
Uff. But, Manorama.

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Simifiction Groupbie

Joined: 27 October 2013
Posts: 79

Posted: 22 January 2015 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
Hi! A new reader here! You write so well, your writing style and narration is awesome. Completely loving the updates, with each one leaving me for wanting more! Thanks a lot for a great story!

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Phoenixrises Senior Member

Joined: 02 November 2012
Posts: 421

Posted: 22 January 2015 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
Amazing update! Can't believe the twists and turns you're making this story go through!!
Thanks for the PM!

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mahrusweety IF-Rockerz

Joined: 11 July 2013
Posts: 8348

Posted: 22 January 2015 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
that was mindblowing update
just like manorama blow us with the proposal of akash and payal Shocked
really how come she changed in an instance
though she don't dislike payal
but did she forgot that payal is a gupta tooo

sooo shocking
akash chocking

awww khushi is in total missing state for arnav
and arnav is in total ignoring state towards khushi
alll credit goes to Sheeetttaall Angry

hope she don' t even get aman too
and will be happy if khushi's friend got aman
who is observing his heart broken state too keenly

continue soon

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-prodigy- Senior Member

Joined: 09 April 2014
Posts: 225

Posted: 22 January 2015 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
What ! Stern Smile ,I mean what is manorama doing ?? She is not that kind of evil person to take revenge by acting innocent is she?why did she offer marriage proposal:/
If her intention is good ,if she truly likes payal for akash then why not accept khushi for arnav ?!? Is it becoz khushi and payal are different ? Payal is polite whereas khushi rebel thing?she doesnt like Guptas na .. Then what changed. I'm totally baffled ..
So eagerly waiting for next update :)

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bablubli Groupbie

Joined: 20 September 2012
Posts: 149

Posted: 22 January 2015 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Arre Rasgulla...ab yeh kya googly phenka Manorama ne? Jaanne ke liye, of course, padhthe rahenge...aap likhthe rahiye.. :)
But seriously sweetheart, I am so sorry for not having commented on the earlier chapters. I haven't read them thoroughly yet...I keep thinking that I need to do justice to your beautiful story by at least reading it properly before putting up my comments..par ab tak ho nahin paya so sorry! Unhappy

But I couldn't resist peeking in when I saw a new chapter. I just had to comment with that last line surprise you threw at us!!

Will get back to this story over this extended weekend...pucca promise...Arnav ki kasam!

Thank you so much for taking the time to write these stories. Most appreciated! Love you much!!Hug

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Raila1014 Goldie

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Posted: 22 January 2015 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Did Kushi mix something in the kheer for Manorama to blurt that?  Or is she having a brain cramp?  Kinda funny how she needs to maintain certain standards and not mix with the workers but she likes Payaliya.  Why?  Because she is a meek lamb compared to the live wire that Kushi is?  Whichever it is, I think there is a softer side to her that the Iron Lady does not like to show to others.  I cannot help but laugh at one of the readers comment about Akash not being gay.  I thought so too as he is portrayed to be completely uninterested in girls.  Too much work and no play makes you a boring man Akash bhaiyya!  So Kushj is having second thoughts about her decision?  She did not think it will be this hard, did she?  How could she forget that they are family and hence will be forced to see each other on occasions.  I am so glad he is not doing puppy eyes "I am hurt" look at her and being indifferent because you know what?  I don't mind her suffering a little bit too.  

Edited by Raila1014 - 22 January 2015 at 9:46pm

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Prettycool Senior Member

Joined: 31 March 2013
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Posted: 22 January 2015 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
What a Googly!! Kya World Cup ki tayari kar Rahil ho, never expected Manorama to propose this proposal ... 
Poor ArNav and Khushi , hope fully they way toward each other.
PS : about my previous post, I guess it was not convinced correctly. What I was saying that khushi hurt him that made me cry for him, yes you had mentioned pranks in previous chapter but reading all together in that confrontation made me smile, that somebody is there who did think like me.

Edited by Prettycool - 22 January 2015 at 9:47pm

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