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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 72)

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Read all the three chapters in a row and it feels exhilerating. Big smile The story has progressed a lot and in a beautiful fashion. I really enjoyed reading 7A. The way you made Akash deal with the mess was really mature and commendable. Plus I liked how Payal did not completely abandon her faith in Arnav and was understanding of him. In the next two chapters, what stood out was Khushi taking the matters in her hand and acting prudently. I appreciate her breaking up with Arnav but I am also saddened by it. It is a good thing that Arnav and Aakash talked everything out. Though I still have concerns if the arrangement between Manorama and Khushi will work for long. It's only a matter of time when the equation Arnav and Khushi will become too complicated to ignore or just remain "broken up". For now I am eager to read how the function of God Bharayi will turn out. Do update soon. :)

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 5:07am | IP Logged
Saieda... Am I correct???
Maf kar do na meri iss galti par... 
Lovely update... Had been wondering who is more mature... Arnav or Akash? Looks like Arnav has stolen the spot even though he is chote! 
Now that Mami is having things ordered as per her wish wonder will she be the one to spill the beans of why Khushi is keeping herself away from the Raizadas? Devyani seems to be having an inkling that something is amiss and there is more than what meets the eye...
Loved it Saieda! Nice to see a word spelt with so many vowels. Wish a proper name was allowed in Scrabble. It would have been useful if you get five vowel tiles out of seven!Wink


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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Loved it...
Chore & choti Smile

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 5:44am | IP Logged
the 15th because i dont know from where i thought that u will be going on vaccations from the 6th-15th jan and thus updates will be only after the 15th but boy im glad i was wrong. n hume par bharosa hain, hamesha! (hamesha is one of my favorite words and i bet u know from y). n i definitely know that ur stories and u never disappoint, it does keep me on the edge of my chair but in the end its all worthwhile and im sure its going to be the same with one winter.

coming to the update, i cant even complain that there were no arnav and khushi scene in this part as this conversation was totally needed between the two brothers, this proves that talking about things definitely make things better, its the most diplomatic way of sorting anything. n saiyu u did a marvelous job with this update. i simply love arnav, he may still be 18 but his arguments and talks were so matured and he is absolutely right there is no correct age to fall in love, it can happens at 15 as it can happen at 50, we just need to find the one.

its good that arnav talked about things that has been clearly bothering him and for him to show akash that being the elder doesnt always mean that he is always correct, even elders make mistake and the way akash appologised to arnav , has increased my respect for him. akash is a very sulja huwa insaan. 

as for manorama, she may have accepted the ice breaker but still i dont think anjali will be able to forget that manorama did not accept her relationship with the guptas for month. it will take some months for mother-daughter bond to be back on track. but the godh bharai will be a good start down mending their relatinship

i like devyani, she is a wise lady who loves her family and has learnt to read the silence of her family.

i missed khushi here saiyu, i want to know how is she coping. i really hope part b will include her and wat she is feeling. loved every bits of this part

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Awesome update

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 7:09am | IP Logged
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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 7:10am | IP Logged
Embarrassed its a long term itch ..okay ? to be unresed next week probably ...


... i m late Cry ...


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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 7:26am | IP Logged
awesome update love Arnav and Akash's conversation

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