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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 64)

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
awesome update... loved the convo between arnav and akaash...

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
That was wonderful update...

I now understand what you are tying to say...I am too judgmental about the characters, now i am feeling sorry for Arnav and i am angry on Akash... I am changing my mind like the creature who changes colors Big smile.

You wrote so convincingly and i can easily convince u know...

Eagerly waiting for next part.

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
i agree with akash .i too havean elder bro and these brothers are fiercly protected and if sis is younger one thentoh bhagwa bachaye...
its weird to read howarnav know what is love and he has fallen .i m 23 i didnt know yet : P
yay baby is to arrive .i love babies .

arnav is right no age is marked to know u r love ..how does " chikdhood sweethearts " know they have special connection.

arnav was jealous( indirectly ) but he is cute.



vaise ache din aane wale hai in one winter ???

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Very interesting and intriguing updates...my heart goes out to both Arnav and Khushi...Arnav and Aakash's conversation was simply brilliant and the emotions were perfect...It was clear that Aakash has let down Arnav..but I am also glad Aakash and Arnav had the talk and Aakash now realizes where he has gone wrong...I am just wondering what Arnav and Aakash would do when they realize what exactly Manorama has done behind their backs...I really wish the truth comes out soon and Arnav, Khushi reconcile soon... Anyway very well written updates...The story is progressing very well..Keep it up...Please do continue soon..Waiting for the next update eagerly..Smile 

Edited by MysticRiver - 16 January 2015 at 11:24pm

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rasgulla_sp

MysticRiver: Yeah I know I eclipsed ArHi's sweet blossoming relationship with Sheetal's hatred. Will fix it soon. Don't worry SmileIII Sorry for intruding but I saw your comment on a recent OS competition on the FF forum. You have mentioned you too will send an entry. You write? On ArHi? Why haven't I ever noticed? Meko links dena please


Yes I Write...I Have Been Writing Since 2004 Actually...I Have Never Written On Arnav And Khushi..Smile I Will Surely 'PM' You Links To My Writings...Embarrassed

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Awesome chapter 

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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
nice update
liked brother's conversation
whooa arnav confessed ...that was quite unexpected ShockedEmbarrassedLOL

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 12:07am | IP Logged
For your note - You better keep your ass moving LOL You may not need mental energy but I'm sure you need emotional energy especially with updates like your recent ones. Haha I don't think you've still got the complete feels of my BS prem WinkLOL But I did tell my sis about your 40-60 BS prem. She was surprised that we all still discuss a show/actor/actress whose show ended long time back.Confused You are in Bombay - you better meet them. I hope you meet them soonSmile. May your TRPs keep increasing Embarrassed BTW leap?? seriously? I never thought about it. If it happens then you're surely on SP's way Tongue

Nani's observations are bang on. She picked up all the right pieces of the way things are happening, not to forget even Mami's slightly contradictory behavior regarding Guptas and Anjali. Nani is very smart but Mamaji is quite dumb in that regard. I wonder why is it so when in the first chapter he picked up his wife's thoughts quite well. He became interested only when it was business related.
Good thing is that Mami may not like Khushi but she trusts her to keep her side of deal.Smile  Mami thinks whatever Khushi may be she won't deceive her. Now this says something about both of them.
"fifteen minutes" Akash here is quite authoritative when he wants to be, so unlike from the show and  like that about him.
I absolutely loved the conversation between two brothers. I don't know what you wrote before you revised and re-revised number of times but one thing is sure that I completely liked and connected with the conversation here. It was real laced with so many emotions. From hurt to guilt, love, attempts to turn it light and so much more. I loved the emotions bared by Arnav, the way he showed Akash his perspective. I guess it was long pending. Now I'm hoping that Aaksh won't repeat his mistakes of ignoring Arnav for Khushi.
Arnav saying that he can't begrudge Akash for loving Khushi more because she deserves all the love and caring melted my heart. It shows how deep his love is for Khushi. He may be irrational and stupid sometimes but his love for Khushi just shines through. Obviously it removed Akash's concerns as Khushi's brother too. But what can we do - Khushi has refused her feelings for Arnav.
Akash needs to find his love soon too, she isn't that far ( ghar se nikalte hi kuch door chalte hi raste mein hai uska ghar...Embarrassed Waise this song suits both brothersWink)



This one is for Raizada brothers though my love is valid for only one TongueEmbarrassed





Edited by aquagal - 17 January 2015 at 12:08am

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