Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 59)

saschades IF-Dazzler
saschades
saschades

Joined: 13 October 2012
Posts: 4239

Posted: 16 January 2015 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
nice update
thanks for the pm xx

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Rasgulla_sp

Spoonai Goldie
Spoonai
Spoonai

Joined: 10 September 2013
Posts: 2052

Posted: 16 January 2015 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
Loved the update and more importantly I loved Arnav outburst to akash. Not quite a outburst but whatever transpire between them. And when u look at it from Arnav pov, my heart went out to him. Aboy without his parent and then a girl name khushi came along and snatch his attention from his elder brother. Only if khushi could reciprocate his feelings but even if khushi wanted she can't. Just for anjali happiness and the peace between the Gupta n raizada family.
I wonder if Arnav express his love confession wud khushi react differently? 
And wud there be a leap? 
To say I'm surprise when Arnav give such lecture abt love and I'm hoping he doesn't change because of the rejection he got from khushi.
Amazing update and can't wait for next chapter :) 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Rasgulla_sp

Phoenixrises Senior Member
Phoenixrises
Phoenixrises

Joined: 02 November 2012
Posts: 421

Posted: 16 January 2015 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Can't wait to see what this story has in store in future.
Emotional update! Loved it.
Thanks for the PM! Update soon.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Rasgulla_sp

cheesemad IF-Sizzlerz
cheesemad
cheesemad

Joined: 27 April 2013
Posts: 11854

Posted: 16 January 2015 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Res!!

Edited...
This was an interesting chapter to read. Devyani's doubt of Manorama's behavior, brothers' conversation, everything was such a pleasure to read. I never thought that way, Arnav's jealousy, hurt, you made his point of view so clear.

Arnav loves her!! That was the best part, he said that just like that, effortlessly, without any hesitation. I think that was the best part of the update. But I would love to know how his feelings of hate changed into love? I am glad you did not drag it and made Arnav confess, at least in front of his big bro :D

But now what? Everything is good between brothers, Akash knows about Arnav's love for Khushi, Khushi is not going to give in because of her deal with Manorama, Arnav is totally in love with Khushi, now what? How is he going to get her? 

This is going to be interesting :D

Update soon!!! :)


Edited by cheesemad - 16 January 2015 at 3:10pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Rasgulla_sp

sakhter90 Goldie
sakhter90
sakhter90

Joined: 02 April 2012
Posts: 2151

Posted: 16 January 2015 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
That was an amazing update! So manorAma finally agreed to go over to the Guptas. I'm glad she realised how much she missed out on with Anjali because of her pride.

I Absoloutely loved the brothers conversation. Long overdue. And Arnav was really honest about evrything. I like akashs character. He's not too proud and will apologise for his mistakes regardless.

Waiting for the godh barai now!
cheesemad IF-Sizzlerz
cheesemad
cheesemad

Joined: 27 April 2013
Posts: 11854

Posted: 16 January 2015 at 3:11pm | IP Logged
Edited my comment above :) 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Rasgulla_sp

Illuminatus. Goldie
Illuminatus.
Illuminatus.

Joined: 15 June 2014
Posts: 1830

Posted: 16 January 2015 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Awwiee... such a sweet n senti chappie...
Loved the conversation between the brothers... Meri aankhein Crynam ho rahi thi. Smile
yes, yes, Now I am fine.. Wink
Waise, in the end, I found it hilarious that Manorama was thanking God that the cold war between the brothers was over. She has no inkling about the brothers and their intentions. 

There was no physical sign of Khushi but Khushi was all over the Chapter...
I am waiting for some family function time... are we getting some action during godhbharai?? Embarrassed

Waiting egarly for the next section.

ps- Yes, its Jamie Dornan on my DP. More than anything I am in love with the colors, shades and shapes in his eyes. Its got nothing to do with the movie or the book. Found 50shades too silly. I have read way better stuff than that and like that genre. Wink 
You gotta watch this guy's Calvin Klein ads.Embarrassed Embarrassed

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Rasgulla_sp

anarshi Goldie
anarshi
anarshi

Joined: 05 December 2011
Posts: 1236

Posted: 16 January 2015 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
I fall in love with your story in pehli nazar:) , so as Arnav...what a nice, straight forward conversation between two brothers, I'm still hoping that Mami should work on her egotistical behaviour and do not ruin life of her all kids!! Fantastic work done, you did great job:)

Edited by anarshi - 16 January 2015 at 3:24pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Rasgulla_sp

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Arhi os:Khushi's chalenge to Arnav for arhi sangeet

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: Hina69   Replies: 94   Views: 52218

Hina69 94 52218 13 October 2016 at 2:18am by arnavmaan
Arhi os:HILARIOUS CONVO BETWEEN ARHI.

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: Hina69   Replies: 94   Views: 60308

Hina69 94 60308 24 September 2016 at 5:29am by NPKN
|| SS :His Last WINTER || Part 13, Page 80

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 81 82

Author: Hue.Splash   Replies: 652   Views: 35900

Hue.Splash 652 35900 16 August 2015 at 5:13am by _Shivani_
MG SS: Age of love: Last chap(Winter) Pg67 (2/1)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 82 83

Author: maan-ki-sanjana   Replies: 659   Views: 79243

maan-ki-sanjana 659 79243 09 November 2014 at 8:00am by Sundari.
Whisper Arhi SS Last Part Arhi

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

Author: jasminerahul   Replies: 212   Views: 148657

jasminerahul 212 148657 26 January 2012 at 3:08am by meluhan

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index