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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 50)

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Hi, 
I chanced upon this and u had me hoked!
Amazing and beautifully written!
Waiting for the next update

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 10:26am | IP Logged
wow interesting twist...loved the update...read all the chapters in one go...must say very good plot...loved the details about nainital its just beautiful Clap ... liked all chracters but off cource arshi are the best...hope payal n akash will have some story too ...cant wait to c whats happens next so update soon ...thanks

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Thanks for the update. Poor Arnav, he actually lost both Aman and Khushi due to his actions. Khushi will probably keep to her promise and stay away from Arnav; they probably meet again once they are much older.

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Saiyyu, this love boat is almost sinking now. Who will save it?Ouch
Khushi and Arnav are still 18 and at that age it ok to do some mistakes like what Arnav did.

But I was surprised at Khushi's speech. She is much matured for her age.

Maharani Manorama or should I call her Don Manorama, really how pathetically cheap of her to threaten a 18 year old girl like this. And she calls herself royalty. Angry
Unfortunately I dont see any royal behavior in her at all. 

So sweet of Payal to give permission to Khushi to play with her candles to cheer her up. Now that is decent behaviour and even the way Payal talked to Arnav, that was decent.

I really want someone to put some sense in Manorama's head ASAP. Hope its her son Akash. 

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Happy New Year and Welcome Back!!  Disappointed that you didn't like Shimla & you won't be writing an FF/SS based off of there..but Delhi achcha laga na, tho thoda ummeed rakhe hum...

Who better than Khushi to understand what relationships mean in a true sense?  With his chapter, Khushi has nade a special place in my heart.  She made the ultimate sacrifice in love for keeping intact the already strained relationship between the Raizada's & the Gupta's.  She impressed me with her tenacity in controlling her emotions while breaking away from Arnav.  I admired her maturity, clarity  and logical reasoning while handling Arnav.  So, how can anyone hate or ignore Khushi when all she deserves is love, love and more love...

I am impressed in the way Khushi handled Monster Mami.  Sticking with the agenda for the day, I wasn't in the least bit alarmed when Khushi tactfully played her cards against a formidable Manorama.  Loved how you unfolded the conversation between Khushi and Manorama.

As heartbroken as I am with Khushi's decisions, I'm hoping this is a temporary respite.  Just tell me that you have special plans for us in the upcoming chapters, and I'll be one happy camper.Big smile

Edited by bhavali4RR - 12 January 2015 at 5:41pm

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 11:51am | IP Logged


Though I thought of sit back and review the story as a whole at the end of it  seems like you won't let me do that Saiyu... My hands are itching badly  to write these ..
I Love Khushi...Why is it always about Arnav..?/ What he desires..?/ What he feels for her..? Sometimes it should be the the other way around too...I know they are just 18 and anyone can make mistakes at this age, blah blah blah...But  I just love this bold khushi who is way more mature than arnav...And khushi's dialogues were meticulous and also the 'highlight' of the chapter...This is why I love you and yearn for your writings always saiyu... Okay... that's it... I think I can relax now...


Saiyu... You rock as always...

PS: Made it in a rush, so ignore mistakesEmbarrassed

With lots of love
ACHU
 

Edited by arshy4ever - 12 January 2015 at 12:01pm

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Wonderful SS Dear... Read it all in one go... Please PM for future updates...

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Posted: 12 January 2015 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Great story, read all of it in a go! Looking forwRd to the next update!
Keep up the great work! Happy new year!

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