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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 22)

mamidis Goldie

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
I am sure Mami blackmailed Arnav to do this..but liked the update.. will wait for to find more

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aquagal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Love and doubt have never been on speaking terms.Doubt is a pain too lonely to know that faith is his twin brother. - Khalil Gibran

I really don't understand why is Arnav trying to make himself appear bad when he didn't hurt Khushi intentionally. Is it because that nobody believed him - be it Khushi, Aman or Akash? Or is it that he thinks he isn't capable to give Khushi what she deserves? Now don't tell me I'm completely off the mark. Ek reason to sahi hona chahiye naa Tongue

Anyways so numbers have been exchanged and interaction has begun between akash & Payal. One love story came across a speed breaker and the other is going to pick up soon. Wink But this time it's going to be difficult because Mami has her eagle eyes around everyone around her now or may be Mami ka dhyan Arnav bitua pe itna ho jaye ki unke pyare Akash ko thoda leeway mil jaaye LOL See there are n number of scenarios, the question is which one are you going to choose?
What's the past of Manorama Mami? what she had suffered because of Khushi or due to a person below her status? Inbestigation kareka padi... Song in the background *Ab Mannu Bhaiyya (oops Mami) ka karin hai.. Mannu mami...*
Khushi was waiting for Arnav's call? that means she too has some hopes from him like Payal and wants to trust him even after everything that happened.
Arnav was not in Shantivan since morning, Khushi had gone out to take a break too. Did the two meet? Mujhe lagta hai they met just by the way, aise hi chalte chalte... Obviously we know who must be stalking whom in that case Wink
I like Payal; she believes Arnav even when he didn't say what she hoped he would unlike his brother who lost temper so easily. Sorry to say Akash looked ready to pounce on Arnav at the first given opportunity not that Arnav helped otherwise. Ouch Both thick-headed guys... heroines ko pareshan kar rahe hain... Confused
Enjoy your vacation. Hope to see you soonWink
Next update mein kya karogi - Mami ka pardafaash ya phir ArHi ka? WinkLOL
PS: Thanks for telling these two lola-Aalu to do something about their DP/name. They don't listen to me, I've told them so many times already.Confused
PS1: Arrey Aalu wants to marry you bas woh sharma rahi hai. Also she doesn't want to scare you off. Tongue

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rvas Goldie

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 12:26am | IP Logged
Loved the update...loved Akash and khushis bond and ask so how payal was patient with arnav...arnav is so full of teenage angst that if I did not love the characters so much and was not really involved in the story I might have had a chuckle...can't wait to read what happeneds next...enjoy your vacation 

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ship13 Goldie

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Fantastic update !! The way you write is so true to teenage sentiments that it is very real and enjoyable to read. Could totally understand Arnav's defiance when questioned by Akash. Loved the chapter and thanks for the pm. Smile

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arhi_love_boni Groupbie

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 3:58am | IP Logged
it gives me immense pleasure when i go through akash and khushi moments...the way he cares about her...the way he supports her...its just something beautiful...wonder if such bonds exist in real world...your writing makes me crave for so many sweet moments that can never happen in reality i supposeEmbarrassed
i can see a budding relationship between payal and akash ...akash didn't even had payal's he has...Wink
about manorama..i dont know what to say...having been brrought up amidst upper class background i guess she has certain opinion about servants or about people below her standard but she is kind hearted at the same amazes me how she helped sheetal and aman out of concern for them...and then again when it comes to her family's happiness she can cancel them as i dont know what she has stored for khushi...Confused what arnav said to payal and akash regarding what he felt for khushi was completely out of anger and payal knows i think akash must hear arnav's opinion as well...and did i just mention that i love the fact that arnav calls payal by her name without saying di ...for some reasons unknown to me as well but i like him call her like that...its not like he is disrespectful towards her...but its sweetEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed eager to know where arnav went that morning!!!!!!!Confused loved your update...thanks for the PM...CONGRATULATIONS FOR THIS FF IN THE SPOTLIGHT...AND WISHING YOU A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR...:)

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sutapasarbabhom IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Amazing part dont knw what arnav trying to do why he potray bad himself befor payal akash manorma opinion about guptas too low she consider them as servant want to knw arnav decision about khushi enjy ur vacation i live in delhi waiting for u

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sakhter90 Goldie

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Great update! Akash is acting like the typical older brother. His reaction to Arnav was not surprising. Although I'm wondering why Arnav said all that. It's obvious he cares for khushi. Payal knows that something isn't right.

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shalini_s IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Arnav should have been more calm?? waiting to see what happens..

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