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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 18)

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
Wow, what a story

Crap Arnav seems to be in love with Khushi but because he was trying to help Sheetal things went awry

He knew Aman was pursuing Khushi but he knew she was not interested cause she was responding to his advances

Damn Akash should know his brother would not hurt Khushi, but it seems he is blinded by protecting Khushi from everyone

Sheetal is such a b*t*h because. She could not get Aman because he liked Khushi, she maligned Khushi so that no one is happy

Aman is such a fool I hope he knows that Sheetal is evil

OMG Manorama is so snotty she needs to be pulled down a few notches into the real world

If she continues she will lose all her kids not just Anjali

Waiting for more

Please pm me when you update

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
Hey... Just read  your story... It is amazing 
I have sent u buddy request 
Plz accept it and Plz pm me next update Smile

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 8:07pm | IP Logged
Saiyyu, I am just in love with your notes. LOL Did you expect me saying updates?? That too. First I scrolled through the page to see if there is any note for my comment. Haha.. I felt like searching some result numbers eagerly!! Now coming to the chapter, a typical brother akash. I think he should listen to arnav atleast once calmly. But he is just behaving like dad to khushi, which is heart-warming. Arnav is really broken and thinks that akash has already decided about him, so why tell the truth?? Or is it something else? Payal's confidence on him surprises me. So this is the most important happenings in all their life. Arnav to become ASR, khushi I don't know!! Is Manorama going to become a negative character? Payash together. I think I have asked many questions than comments. Wonderful writing. Glad that I found your stories.
Now regarding my question last time, I think u and arnav to be ASR are planning something. Tongue

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
Read all story in one go ... awesome

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
I am sure Mami blackmailed Arnav to do this..but liked the update.. will wait for to find more

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Love and doubt have never been on speaking terms.Doubt is a pain too lonely to know that faith is his twin brother. - Khalil Gibran

I really don't understand why is Arnav trying to make himself appear bad when he didn't hurt Khushi intentionally. Is it because that nobody believed him - be it Khushi, Aman or Akash? Or is it that he thinks he isn't capable to give Khushi what she deserves? Now don't tell me I'm completely off the mark. Ek reason to sahi hona chahiye naa Tongue

Anyways so numbers have been exchanged and interaction has begun between akash & Payal. One love story came across a speed breaker and the other is going to pick up soon. Wink But this time it's going to be difficult because Mami has her eagle eyes around everyone around her now or may be Mami ka dhyan Arnav bitua pe itna ho jaye ki unke pyare Akash ko thoda leeway mil jaaye LOL See there are n number of scenarios, the question is which one are you going to choose?
What's the past of Manorama Mami? what she had suffered because of Khushi or due to a person below her status? Inbestigation kareka padi... Song in the background *Ab Mannu Bhaiyya (oops Mami) ka karin hai.. Mannu mami...*
Khushi was waiting for Arnav's call? that means she too has some hopes from him like Payal and wants to trust him even after everything that happened.
Arnav was not in Shantivan since morning, Khushi had gone out to take a break too. Did the two meet? Mujhe lagta hai they met just by the way, aise hi chalte chalte... Obviously we know who must be stalking whom in that case Wink
I like Payal; she believes Arnav even when he didn't say what she hoped he would unlike his brother who lost temper so easily. Sorry to say Akash looked ready to pounce on Arnav at the first given opportunity not that Arnav helped otherwise. Ouch Both thick-headed guys... heroines ko pareshan kar rahe hain... Confused
Enjoy your vacation. Hope to see you soonWink
Next update mein kya karogi - Mami ka pardafaash ya phir ArHi ka? WinkLOL
PS: Thanks for telling these two lola-Aalu to do something about their DP/name. They don't listen to me, I've told them so many times already.Confused
PS1: Arrey Aalu wants to marry you bas woh sharma rahi hai. Also she doesn't want to scare you off. Tongue

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 12:26am | IP Logged
Loved the update...loved Akash and khushis bond and ask so how payal was patient with arnav...arnav is so full of teenage angst that if I did not love the characters so much and was not really involved in the story I might have had a chuckle...can't wait to read what happeneds next...enjoy your vacation 

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Posted: 31 December 2014 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Fantastic update !! The way you write is so true to teenage sentiments that it is very real and enjoyable to read. Could totally understand Arnav's defiance when questioned by Akash. Loved the chapter and thanks for the pm. Smile

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