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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 151)

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Posted: 16 February 2015 at 9:31am | IP Logged
I had to go back & read the Notes.
Soaking up the Flow of 'One Winter...'
Been reading some amazing comments.
I love this chapter. 
The Family Scenario or call the Family Tableau is Heart Warming.Hug
Yet 'Sigh'.  It is Incomplete.
There is one space unfilled. (Khushi)
Decision made to stay Away has it come back to Bite Her?
Ego:- it has an ugly Head.
Yet how can one stop those stupid Hormones.Deeply Musing her mind. Those Hormones playing 'Havoc' as You put it.Embarrassed
The Impish Thoughts. Yearning for the Glance of One Only.Wink
'Love' for Eternity. Revelation to her inner  Soul.
Those  Eyes just looked up.
As if He knew her Thoughts. Yet they stayed Blank Canvas.
'Happy Birthday ARNAV ' footsteps faltered.
A 'Soft Kiss ' no Response 
Placed another One  & Again .
The hand encircling the Waist & Oh That Gentle Kiss turned Deeper.
Urgency. Holding On. Yet Pushing Pulling. Wanting More
Caving into this WANT for a fleeting second.Heart
'Sorry there is no U.S.'Broken Heart
Ouch that did Hurt.
You have Inked it Beautifully.
The Justice You have done to every Character is To be Applauded.
Look forward to the next Update.
My POV.
HeartS
PS:- I am not going to assume what Your next update is going to be.
Just would love to read Your Uptake of the Story
:-))***





Edited by scorpio47 - 16 February 2015 at 9:33am

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Posted: 16 February 2015 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Unreserved here

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Posted: 17 February 2015 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rulama

Sayyu... Sorry for the late comments... AD has been not just donkey but a mule too...
That is why I usually don't reserve but on the day I read I thought I'll be able to comment later at night... But it was not so! Only when I saw Lolwas scrap saying she has commented that I realized that you have already posted a new chapter and I am yet to comment on the previous one!

That was an interesting chapter...
Arnav giving tit for tat making Khushi realize one can never take unilateral decisions in a relationship!
Did Khushi think just because Anjali knew and was asking Arnav not to mess up the relationship she had paved way for her...
Anjali took the pic. of both Arnav and Khushi holding Ahaan showing how they fit in together as a family... One thing that amused me was was Shyam going to name the kid Ahaan even if it was a girl???
no ..  i  think  shyam  had already  decided  a  name  for  girl  and  a  name  for  boy .. is  that ?Confused
Sarita seems to be a wise girl... a true friend not pampering Khushi while she wavers...
Loved the update...

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Posted: 17 February 2015 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Nice updates..Love ARSHISmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 20 February 2015 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Wow good one.
ARSHI world best jodi.

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Posted: 20 February 2015 at 8:57am | IP Logged
chapters 7A 7B 8A 8B



I was literally biting my nails while reading chapter 7A. Arnav's lying to Akash and Payal. I knew k he is clean. he didn't toyed with khushi. but then khushi's rejection came as a blow to both Arnav and me. I am ready to accept him. come to me please Wink
what came as a bigger surprise was Arnav Akash conversation. The way he accused Akash of thinking him as a characters boy! well done dude! Akash was actually guilty. while protecting his sister he totally ignored his brother. till now I was only thinking about the pranks Arnav did on khushi, hearing his side I laughed. bachhe toh bacche hi hote hai. khushi was no less! and when Arnav said to Akash k he always had scolded him for his pranks and ignored khushi's mistakes at that time I remembered my dialogues to mumma when me and bhai fought over something "wo kare toh chota hai rehne de, main karun toh tu badi hai, tuje samajna chahiye." lol..


khushi ne toh clean bold kar diya muje Manor k sath deal karke. Saanp ko b maara aur lathi b nahi todi.. wah khushi wah!

happy family reunion! Anjali is the happiest. Guptas b khush! Dukhi hain toh mere ArHi *pouts* khushi is already crying buckets.

Manorama proposal came as a shock! is she that desperate for a grand child that she is willing to bring a Gupta Daughter in law???

in chapter 7B I really loved the way Arnav declared his love towards to Akash! jiyo mere sher :*

going to read more!


Edited by BlackHole - 20 February 2015 at 8:58am

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oh yes! oh yes! PAYASH finally happening. I loved chapters 9A and 9B. These two answered a lot of questions. I loved the fact that payal took the responsibility of an elder sister when Akash was Focussed towards khushi. Arnav wasn't alone. and both Arnav khushi decided to meet Amanji on the same day? And both were procrastinating?? wow!

Payal raised some very important questions regarding Manorama's sudden interest in her and Aman gave me all the Answers. aman showed up as a very mature boy here. A boy who has seen so much in his life...

I liked the way Aman called Arnav as her boyfriend! lol

but I laughed at the way of their resolving issues. fight for friendship. lol

Manorama ka chakkar kya hai????



edit. ...

finally Ahaan aa gya and I got to know Anjali's role. I was really thinking kabse k Anjali the best sister, how can she be oblivious to Arnav's feelings . I loved Arnav khushi in this chapter. Both got to know about the respective secrets. khushi know now who put the dress and Arnav got to know what she told payal. Fair Enough!

I felt sad over khushi's questions. that why she is so left out for Manorama. ??

And she kissed and he broke her heart. I guess you would have solved this thing in the next chapter. OW mein itne heavy heavy secrets nahi hai.

I like Savita! She told her to cheat and me likes that.

Manorama! ufff *racking brain*

Edited by BlackHole - 20 February 2015 at 10:05am

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Posted: 21 February 2015 at 8:31am | IP Logged
Nice update!!! Arshi separation is heart breaking:) manorama mani is cunning... Poor khush an arnav.

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