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varsha2KD IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Superb update
Payal and akash are the ideal brother and sister to khushi...
Why is Arnav doing this? Accept your feelings for khushi
Mamiji heard everything... God that is dangerous

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__blossom__ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Oh goddd boys and their ego! I feel bad for arnav but he is very young so I understand what he's going through but I cant imagine what manorama and khushi's reaction will be..manorama's in context to akash and arnav's relations as I am sure akash is going to hate arnav and khushi's after thinking that arnav is a jerk which he is not:(
This is so interestingly complicated if you know what I mean :p
Cant wait for part B 

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loves_aishu Goldie

Joined: 04 July 2014
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Wow, your note is as long as the update, shows how much you love us!!!Big smile
This update was different, don't know how!!!
The way in which Akash went a little hard on Arnav, to me it looks as if he is doing this just to make ensure to himself that he does not fail in his duty, as its between Khushi, his sister and his own brother!! Am not sure, it could also be his feeling to do it right for his little sis!!!
Loved how in the midst of all people running high on Emotion, Payal maintained her calm!!!Clap
Also most probably the poor Mami would may have to deal with another Love Story, looks as if the sparks are flickering!!LOL
But the worst was Arnav, the guy's alone, alongwith his first hurt-break and the feeling of having disappointed his elder brother!! Cry
But you know don't like this Arnav, who accepts the opinion of others without fighting, want him to convince everyone of his position!!!Cry
Oh ho, looks like Mami is going to bajao band of everyone!!!LOL
Why is Khushi bestowed with special hate, is it because her past, her original family!! True she does not like the Guptas, but as if with Khushi, its a different case altogether!!!Ouch

Anyways, HAPPY HOLIDAYS, hope you enjoy it a lot and have a safe & pleasant journey!!
Take Care!!!

Edited by loves_aishu - 29 December 2014 at 11:53am

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mayurisb80 Goldie

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:54am | IP Logged
oh so much happened and i had a feeling that Manaorama would come to know about this...i am more concerned on how she is going to deal with Kushi...she will definitely use a trump card ...and i have a feeling its going to be Anjali and Shyam mending their relation in exchange...she knows how to manipulate i guess and i dont blame her she just wants to maintain what is left of her relationships...

Arnav what is he trying to do...retaliate and create an image where he is bad so that no one blames kushi????He is acting out and Payal can see that she is a good sister...
Akash is now blinded in anger...that he could not protect his choti...i hope he cools down enough to act in right way...but somehow i have a feeling that Manorama will do all and rest will have to live there going to be a leap in time????

Have a wonderful break...wish you a happy Holidays and a wonderful nerw year...enjoy and we will wait to see you back i action :) all fresh and enjoying Winter...

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maverickmartin IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Stupid new format is making it hard for me to even press like. -_-
Arnav... your portrayal of his defeat is so well-written. The defeat in him, I mean. And love, love, love the fact that Aakash and Payal are acting exactly like older siblings do. It's normal for Aakash to be enraged at his brother, not just because of his attachment to Khushi, but because somewhere in his heart, he's disappointed at what he is assuming is Arnav's motive for his actions. That would truly hurt him.

Payal is the sensible, worried older sister. And she totally gives Arnav a verbal wake-up slap across the cheek. Good for her.

I wonder how poor Khushi's day had been. :/ Being 18 doesn't make you an adult, emotionally. But you don't realise that when you're 18, because you're keen to put up a front of bravado.

Btw, Manorama doesn't sound like the villain I thought she would be. She's just ... being a high-browed Mom.

P.S. Hrithik ji humare saath apna birthday share karte hain. :p

Edited by maverickmartin - 29 December 2014 at 12:01pm

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neha2013g IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
awesome update... loved it..
does manorma has something to do with what arnav said?

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chavvi16 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 October 2011
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
what was that
deal with khushi
can anyone tell me why there is any deal with khushi is required
yes things have been screwed up
big time but not that much surely
ahhh mami mentality well that explains a lot
she better not deal with anything
look what happened was regrettable
but i dont think its that bad
i know khushi has been hurt
but i also know arnav didnt do it on purpose
dont forget the guy is still  bloody teenagers
and we all screw up things during that phase
but if it gets beyond to just few peeps well things will be worse
because as it is these kids have made a big mess
with elders involved it can and will go for mud slinging
i hope not though
arnav what was the need to say all that
you know it and we know it that you werent playing with her
he isnt that much of a jerk
i dont think so
but he is hell bent on making things worse
why must he do that
aki really trust a little your brother
hmmm this is gonna get big am sure
mami i didnt know that you were taught to eavesdrop
i thought such things would be frowned upon
but then like i said no one is perfect
and she aint either
what ever her faults may be she does care for arnav
but hope she doesnt do something that makes this worse
payal believes arnav didnt do this to hurt her little sister
but if only aki would believe it
wow she can get angry too
but then what happened though shouldnt have happened well it is bound to make her mad
especially on behalf of her sister
hope it doesnt go over the top
enjoy your holiday
what half way through already why man

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yoga123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
I don't think Arnav is saying the truth...awesome chapter...thanks for the PM

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