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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 147)

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 12:31am | IP Logged
ah hi roshgolla...sorry for late comment...I'm in new country for study purpose ... having tough time to adjust environment and study...
missed 3 chaps...
read all...
superb updates...
akash and payal's marriage proposal...
shocking,...
manorama likes payal that too shock...
finally all agreed for marriage...
arnav and aman patched up...
khushi also patched up...
savita knows manorama and khushi deal...
arnav ignoring khushi...
its hurting khushi a lot...
anjali knows about arshi that too shocking...
manorama happy arshi avoiding each other...
mano feels sorry for aman...
savita likes aman i guess,,...
its arnav's bday ...
khushi finally decide to give arnav a chance...
she initiated the kiss and wish...
but arnav now not in mood to face hurt again...
I think arnav is angry because he fears khushi might turn back...
he is hurt the way khushi had hurt him...
now after lots of revelation...
I won't shock if arnav knows manorama and khushi deal...
is it really ?
update soon...

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 1:11am | IP Logged
So finally Khushi madam stopped being a chicken and kissed Arnav on his birthday and told him what she wanted and felt for him. Too bad Arnav is hurt and this hurt is going to take some time to heal - Arnav is right, Khushi can't refuse him at one point and then tell him that she wants him again. 

And loved the way Anjali is helping Arnav and Khushi to meet. The way she made both of them hold Ahaan in the hospital is too cute. chalo at least someone is there who is trying to help these two in their love story. I hoped Akash would talk to Khushi regarding Arnav but I think he is respecting Arnav's wish and trying to not meddle in their affairs. And Payal seems to be ready to be a Raizada Bahu. 

Reading this update I somehow feel that the reason Manorama is not too happy with Khushi is because she is not the daughter of guptas but was just raised by them. Savita mentioned that Khushi's parents died and she came to stay in Nainital with the Guptas. So is that the reason why Manorama is not that keen on having Khushi near Arnav or she just jumped the gun when she saw Akash and Arnav fighting for the first time on the account of Khushi. Hoping she tries to see Khushi in a better light during the marriage festivities. Can't wait for the next update. update soon.


Edited by psarada - 06 February 2015 at 1:13am

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Excellent update

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Wah!! I thought i commented on this but i guess i hadnt.. If i did oh well here is a second comment hehe. I really love the setting of this story! It makes me want to travel there and experience this the way you have written! And i love the age you have shown arnav and khushi and the kind of love they still share. I hope that arnav soon finds out what happened and yells at khushi first and then they tackle it together! Its been a great read this far. And i want to thank i believe its your sister that recommended this at the end of her story! So thankful she did. Also if you have any other stories please do pm me the names so i can read them as well! Cant wait to read along with the rest of this

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 2:48pm | IP Logged

 

 

" "I can't believe you did this! I am not marrying Aakashji and that is final" Payal spoke as she stood by the window of the living room, watching the helpers at work whom Manorama sent regularly every winter to clear the snow in the courtyard before it turned to ice. It had unexpectedly snowed the whole night, freezing the town and stopped only 2 hours back, turning the sky black and the earth white. According to the weather forecasts a little snow was expected at the end of the month instead of this heavy snowfall in the middle."

Saiyu I loved this passage very much...I love the way you chose the snow scenario to accommodate  the  depth of whole situation...


I always wonder about one thing Saiyu... All of your characters are related to one another in unique ways,say it Anjali-Arnav , Arnav-Payal, Khushi-Akash, each of the relationships are distinctive...How you managed to do justice to them almost perfectly always...? Its Hamesha  a mystery to me...

I enjoy the entwined emotions  and connection between Arshi... Now I have got you Saiyu... I took it all wrong at the time of Khushi decided to break up with Arnav...It was not a mature Khushi [ I even commented that I like this Mature side of Khushi ] but an IMPULSIVE one...  Emotions are complicated... See the Arnav who desperately wanted Khushi by his side, now being an impulsive one just refused her...

*Sigh*  lets see what's you have got for us..

Saiyu u are amazing writer,...ClapEmbarrassed


Love

ACHUTongue




 

 



Edited by arshy4ever - 06 February 2015 at 2:51pm

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Loved the update and can't wait for the next, I felt broken with khushi too. 

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
lovely part

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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
Things were going so good.. Well keeping the situation in mind

But areas has a point...he should have a say too

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