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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 146)

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Posted: 04 February 2015 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
First of all - yes, you made me break my vrat ... but I don't regret Big smile!
 
Now the chapter -- ouch! that was rude, and cruel, and very very Arnavish! You don't want her but don't escape the chance of kissing her! Well done, Raizada.
 
 

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 6:27am | IP Logged
arnav cannot be  blamed he was heartbroken, but khushi also not at fault fully because she is selfless did for her bhabhi who is now fully accepted by her maternal family 

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Rasu,
Every time I read an update from you...I go on a romantic sighing spree throughout the read...hoping, wishing, yearning, longing, dreaming!!

Oh man! Can I please hug Anjali...please please please!!! I love her subtlety!!  Also that picture Anjali clicked...Hai Allah!! :-)

Love love love Sarita...you have presented her well with the typical indian women complexion issue...and the inferiority complex associated with it...and what you told about friends being mirrors is so true...i loved that angle you presented..that friendship with its free expression and seriousness...jokes, actions, care, concern, when to push, when not to push...they both makes best buddies!! True friends!! Girl friends!! Kudos! 

I wont comment on the last part of the update until I hear Arnav's thoughts...

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Allah Paak ne Kainaat ko intehai khubsurati aur nafasat se khalq kiya hai..Aor  Saiyu ap ne Nainital ki Khusbsurati ko intahahi dil'fareeb andaaz mein bayaan kiya hai..Kabhi koi moqa aya toh zarur Nainital ki dil afroz khusbsurati se ashna hoon ge. 
aor haan Zehra ne jo qudrat ki khubsurati ko camera ke lense se qaid ki hai woh lafzon ka mohtaaj nahi. Bohut hi khubsurat.Saiyu har manazr aur lamhe ko bohut hi nafasat, sadgi se likha hai.. ap ne mana kiya hai per mein reh nahi saki, apko mubarak ho...apki kahani bilkul eski haqdar the jo aizaz apki kahani ko mila hai. :)

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 12:35pm | IP Logged

So, Anjali knows everything and has been helping Arnav for long. Great sister.Smile

Something is going on between Aman and Savita, but not from aman's side I believe(as of now). All of manorama's plans are failing. She tried for a big fat Indian wedding, Akash said no, poor mom. And by the way Savita talks, will khushi sneak and talk with arnav in future? That kiss was really unexpected, but liked it after so many updates. Wink

Arnav is really hurt and confused with khushi's behavior. She is cold sometimes and kisses another. Or should I say she herself is so confused. Saiyyu, one thing is sure. Other than you, all are confused thinking what will happen nextBig smile

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
First of all thank you so much clearing my doubt Smile, I am glad that I am paying attention to the story WinkBig smile

So Anjali knows everything from the beginning and she was the one who put the dress in Khushi's room !! And just like Savita for Khushi, Anjali knows everything about their relationship from Arnav!!!

Savita has very normal life with loving family with not so much drama in it!! Savita likes Aman, I think and I would love to see their interaction Wink...

My dear Khushi is so confused Shocked..She is not even sure about her feelings anymore and I am seriously really glad that she has shared with Savita everything otherwise poor soul would have been in completely disastrous state, though her situation is not actually good right now !! Arnav's behavior with Khushi is justifiable or not will let you know after knowing Arnav's thoughts because everyone is quite practical in this story, so there might be some reason or may be plain anger !!!

Great update as always Saiyu Clap...Thank you so much for the PMSmile

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Aj ek shair parha toh socha share kr doon...
jesy parh kr mujhe OW ke Arhi ki yaad a gae..
Inkaar ki si lazzat, iqraar mein kahan hai...
Barhta hai Ishq aor bhi unki nahi nahi se...

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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
You captured the teenage behavior perfectly. Even though these teens are mature than most, they still hang on to their egos and their zidd. Arnav's reaction to the birthday kiss was a case in point..As teens, I guess we either believe the world would come to an end because of the first heart break or just the complete opposite..that we will have endless opportunities to find love..depending on the person and mood of the day
I guess that's the beauty of being young..

well written, Saiyu!!

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