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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 129)

.Sandal. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Good bye kiss do ge tu welcome kiss milay ga along with Rishta you see,
Well i am eager to know what u have planned before they leave for delhi and uk
Baki update padhnay k baad

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yeshyeshna IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 4:55am | IP Logged
poor khushi
she is so confused and sad
why manorama put that deal??
and when she decided to follow her heart, arnav's words made her cry again
waiting for next part

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rith123 Goldie

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Why in God's name would you apologise for more chapters is beyond me! The more, the better I always say!
It's so frustrating. They want to be together and they should be, but they are behaving like the children that they are and it is frustrating.

Will Arnav ever get to know about the deal Khushi made with Manorama? Also, I have decided to ship Aman and Savita!

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spilla IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Awesome update

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Saiyyu... Sorry for the late comments... AD has been not just donkey but a mule too...
That is why I usually don't reserve but on the day I read I thought I'll be able to comment later at night... But it was not so! Only when I saw Lolwas scrap saying she has commented that I realized that you have already posted a new chapter and I am yet to comment on the previous one!

That was an interesting chapter...
Arnav giving tit for tat making Khushi realize one can never take unilateral decisions in a relationship!
Did Khushi think just because Anjali knew and was asking Arnav not to mess up the relationship she had paved way for her...
Anjali took the pic. of both Arnav and Khushi holding Ahaan showing how they fit in together as a family... One thing that amused me was was Shyam going to name the kid Ahaan even if it was a girl???
Sarita seems to be a wise girl... a true friend not pampering Khushi while she wavers...
Loved the update...

Edited by rulama - 17 February 2015 at 4:11am

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tina_1234 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Amazin part
aquagal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 5:04am | IP Logged
CHAPTER-9 only

For your Note - You have got Khushi's habit - using Hum instead of Main. LOL I know, her clothes could have been so better. Plain cotton kurtas would have looked so better.
Payal did the right thing but what to do nobody is bothered about a girl's interest in this nation. LOLShe is denying and yet everyone is busy matching kundalis, asking the boy if he agrees.. As if ladki ki marzi ki koi value hi na ho Dead. Payal is right in her analysis, at least normal. Sometimes elders really forget to look in to the details or consider any ulterior motive especially when it's someone who has known them for long.  I know it's more because they are thinking that Akash is not going to live in their house but Payal is going there, also that he is a nice guy and everyone in the family is nice. Even Mami isn't hostile exactly. I know Mami's thoughts would be the same too.  Everyone is so busy rejoicing over Payal's luck and positive points that they are not thinking much.
So this whole Arnav-Khushi fiasco has brought Payash together. Jo hota hai achche ke liye hi hota hai. Wink Payal may not be very interested in marrying Akash but they are becoming friends with the way they are easily sharing their thoughts, not to mention sneakily meeting too. I loved how Khushi openly teased Akash and later Arnav shared with Payal his thoughts about this proposal openly in a single line. But Akash acting as the nervous guy was quite amusing after seeing him as the confident one throughout this story. Embarrassed
I want to know what did Akash talk with Payal regarding them. No ramanchi, I want complete details.Tongue Waise I think they are already behaving as an ideal couple. Both are looking out for each others siblings even if Khushi has always been a sister to Akash but Payal put in some serious efforts to make Arnav talk to her. I'm sure this has led Akash to have this "us" conversation. Obviously he won't let her go now after knowing she is the right girl for him.
Khushi befriended Aman even when he was an equal contributor in the pranks Arnav played on her but maintained her distance with Arnav. Talk about preferential treatment.Wink
Aman understands Mami so well, at least better than many others. When everyone around except Payal and Khushi is not questioning Mami's sudden U-turn from her class-conscious attitude or even thinking why has she proposed for this marriage Aman has provided a very fitting reason. Also he is right that now nobody can stop Payash marriage as Mami has singled her out as the bahu of Raizadas. LOL Mami ke plan kabhi fail nahin hote except in Arhi's case. She will have to come around here bas zara der lagegi. Tongue
Khushi's words of wisdom to talk, openly communicate fell on dumb ears. They didn't need words to clear the air but few punches, fist-fighting and kicks.  Boys will be boys. LOL But as I've said above in this update "Jo hota hai achche ke liye hota hai". Now they are back being friends and Arnav got a small but tight hug too. Issey kehte hain ek panth do kaajWinkEmbarrassed. Now he should know that for Khushi it's only him. She didn't hug Aman but her concern overpowered her when she saw Arnav in a disheveled state. Anyways samajhne wale samajh gaye hain (read Aman) jo na samjhe woh anari hain (Arnav in all probability) Tongue
Mami is nice except she is just too occupied with thoughts of keeping Khushi away. Waise her actions are in complete contradiction. On one hand she wants Khushi to stay away from Raizadas and on the other hand she wants Payal to get married to her one and only son. For the latter to be done she would have to adapt herself to tolerate more of Khushi. Smile
I feel bad for Aman. He is going to go through so much in the future but what's the point in having his parents remain legally binded when they don't love. It'll more be a societal blow because Aman already knows how his parents are and I'm sure he can handle it bravely. Smile Mami's concern and love for Aman is quite touching. So now that Lavanya is most probably talking to NK, is it going to be Savita for Aman or do you have a new candidate? Wink Ab koi toh Aman ke liye bhi banani hi padegi. Also I have a one genuine kostin - Are all Gupta girls (direct or related) going to marry Raizadas only? LOL Mamiji is going to have a blast in the future. Big smile

I loved all the chapters with every chapter bringing us face to face with their mature side.
Aamn is the heartbroken, friendzoned, bestie betrayed and Savita is Khushi's bestie who's nursing a soft corner for Aman. Embarrassed
Yes you're turning into SP. You also remove your stories like they removed the episodes and blocked our VMs Tongue. Now you better don't ever remove this story to prove that you're differentLOL
Take some rest and then start writing next update. I want to read Payash conversation asapTongue

I realised now that you have posted another chapter...Embarrassed

Edited by aquagal - 03 February 2015 at 5:17am

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