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pakpearl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13365

Posted: 31 January 2015 at 10:46pm | IP Logged

Very true..
when it comes to Manorma..
Why does she wanna have Payal as her DIL..when she can't stand our sweet Khushi..Why does she have all her affection for Aman but almost hate our cute Khushi..
I m so GUSSAAngry
And don't wanna stress my brain..

I've better things to do..

To cherish the blooming relationship between PayAsh..SmileBig smile

N ..

Wait for the upcoming Arhi scenes..
Detailed,intense n worthwaiting,,
Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming  Day Dreaming

kabhi tou tars aaye ga meri gudiya ko..meri halat pe...Unhappy
Arhi ki dose in time naa mile tou..
Saansien hi ruk jaati hain.. Disapprove

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sincereme IF-Dazzler

Joined: 05 September 2012
Posts: 4131

Posted: 31 January 2015 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Everyone is acting so wierd about the marriage proposal. . I thought they all would be in shock atleast for one day but they have readily accepted the proposal.. No one has a single doubt in their mind or apprehension except Payal.. It just confused me..

Akash, Payal, Arnav, khushi and Aman have sorted out their issues to some extent.. And I really want to know what Akash talked to Payal about "them".. Loved Aman.. He is so sweet and a best friend..

Loved the update. .

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ragvir92 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 24 June 2011
Posts: 2887

Posted: 01 February 2015 at 7:43am | IP Logged
That was an awesome update Saiyyu
Glad to know that Payal was with Arnav when Akah was with Khsuhi
Payash proved to be a perfect couple with this one action itself
Who filled in the other's place when necessary
And I really like all the bond very much
Ofcourse Manorama seems to be good
And Aman no words for him yaar
He is more than perfect.He understands and acts very mature and a great guy
In this chapter he was the Hero more than Arnav
And Why did khushi tell she will go with Aman for prom.What a timing I would have been glad if she had shut her mouth that time
I mean I don't blame Khsuhi but still
But Aman reallly managed the situation very well
He stealed this part.Kudos to him.
Now please don't make Arnav think Aman and Khsuhi have something if they both joined the same college in Delhi.
But Aman is a genius.He won't let such stupid things to happen.He will handle everything well for his friend.
I don't know why I just liked Aman very very much in this part even more than Arnav
And I would also like even if it take lead after payash marriage.I mean they have to be successful na for getting married and hae to achieve heights
And ya Now what will happen.It seems a bit complicated for Arnav
I have a doubt Khushi promised that she won't let anyone know na then how can she tell that Savitha then.Ofcourse only family members and Aki souldn't but still she said it was only between them in that room na.Thats why
Ok I know I am confusing.Lets leave that
As usual amazing part by you
And eagerly waiting for the coast to get clear for Arnav
And show how payash get to this level too
Overall a great update
Waiting for the next

Edited by ragvir92 - 01 February 2015 at 7:50am

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fangurrl IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 July 2012
Posts: 4482

Posted: 01 February 2015 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Finally got time to read it!
asli duniya is so busy these days :/
anyway coming to the update!
I love Aman (not more than Arnav Wink )
he behaved so maturely!
The poor got hurt still manged to hide it :(
so much communication happen in this update!
We got to know what the characters thinks!
hope payal agrees to marry akash
I really want to see some scenes between them <3
they make a cute pair :D
a brief hug if Arnav and Khushi
dil ko thandak mili thodi
hoping for more of them in next update (I know I'm greedy )

p.s. your note umm I'm always for kiss and make up ;)

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ship13 Goldie

Joined: 04 September 2013
Posts: 1174

Posted: 01 February 2015 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Lovely update. Glad that payal really spoke her mind about mami and voiced her concerns about marrying Akash. Also, was happy that she came through for Arnav as a support when Akash failed. It was good that Arnav and aman sorted out their differences, though with a fist fight !! Smile Wonder where that leaves khushi as far as her equation with Arnav is concerned. Looking forward to the next update and thanks so much for the pm. Really appreciate it. Embarrassed

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golpokobita Goldie

Joined: 06 December 2012
Posts: 2162

Posted: 01 February 2015 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
Couldn't stay away any more..
I wasn't roaming into the Arshi world for quite a long time. But your PMs used to provoke me to break my fast.. And finally today I am here, glued to my laptop. Read all the chapters today.
I can't tell you how much I loved this teenage love story! Its so refreshing..
Arnav and Khushi are so natural.. Whereas their love was spontaneous, their break up (or just a break?), on the other hand, was a good sign of maturity.
I am looking forward to their reunion!

Edited by golpokobita - 02 February 2015 at 6:27pm

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mamidis Goldie

Joined: 22 December 2008
Posts: 1917

Posted: 02 February 2015 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Liked update

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canapoem IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 August 2012
Posts: 13127

Posted: 02 February 2015 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhavali4RR


I am glad that our Jai/Veeru are back and reconciled in their own style on expected lines. But, I expected Arnav to be my Jai but was pleasantly surprised that it turned out to Aman. If you are going to make everyone nice and sweet like this, I will be having a hard time managing my favorite list :). The list is obviously extended now but not able to decide who to give the #1 spot to.

Lastly, when reconciliations are all around - what is the hang up for Manorama with Kushi?  Iska jawaab kab milega, Saiyu?

Yeh dosti hum nahin chodenge...

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