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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 121)

shalini_s IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Manorama has planned well.. Payal is the best here.. she is so insightful..

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-Roshini- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Nice update

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Polkadots78 Goldie

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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 8:37am | IP Logged
To borrow your own words ..its a 'sorted' update. I brings with it a sense of relief.. May be not completely sorted yet...but still there is lot of hope.
I wish you would write a 'mature' chapter for manorama mami too..
I know from where she stands, she is justified. But her innate need to try to control her childrens' fate is disturbing...

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shiv456 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 8:56am | IP Logged
awesome update

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rulama IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 9:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dr.AALUSLOLWA

arey wao yu updated :D

Where were you??? After asking her you hid is it?? Shocked
Look... You asked for it and she gave it yesterday itself...Tongue
Why don't you request again???Wink

Edited by rulama - 29 January 2015 at 9:45am

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sayari_sanki99 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 9:49am | IP Logged

Chaahe koi mujhe pagli kahe...

Kehne do ji kehta rahe...

Hum OW ke nashe pagla gaye hai...

Hum kya kare???...TongueWink

Yes yes yes, I am back again! Since I don't need an introductionWink, I'll just jump to the main part...

Chapter 9:-

Let's start with Payal...It was quite natural for her to react like that on Mamiji's proposal. That was really out of the blue. And considering the relationship of the Guptas and the Raizadas and Mamiji's distaste towards the Guptas, it must have come as a shock to the Guptas, especially Payal. It is her life and future that is being talked about. So, it is obvious for her to be concerned and apprehensive. And since she is a strong and independent girl ("Waxing Moon" for example), she is not going to agree instantly and jump on the offer. That was really realistic and I appreciate that about writing. Your characters are realistic, and I simply can't stop praising that.Clap

Having said that, I didn't understand how Garimaji agreed so easilyConfused. I mean shouldn't she have taken a bit longer time to come in terms of the proposal? Is she scared of repeating the same mistake she did during AnSh's time? She was scared about this not-so-nice relationship between the families and the status differences that time and she is repenting that (her conversation with Khushi in the kitchen). So, is she thinking that it won't be right to fuss over the status thing again? And she is just going with the flow? Plus the reasons she gave like marrying her daughter into a good family, having her so close. I don't know what is the real reason behind her chhotu sa brain could come up with this onlyLOLTongue.

Shashiji's trust on Akash is sweet. And Shyam is also ok with it. Everyone is ok with it. Even Akash has agreed. Good! Now Payal needs to say yes only, which she will otherwise all the PayAsh lovers would make your jeena mushkilWink. I liked how Anjali calmly answered the questions of her in-laws. I also agree with the reasons she gave for Mamiji's different attitude for Anjali-Shyam and Akash-Payal. Makes a lot of sense. Loved the whiny Khushi and dominant AmmaSmile.

Aww! Akash still sad over his past mistakesCry? It's ok. Now he found his Payal-ji, he would be ok. Payal has dropped the ji? Ok...point noted. Our Khushi will always be naughty, right? We like naughty and mischievous KhushiBig smile. And look at our Arshi...same same thinking, huh? Like soulmates and all, naEmbarrassed? I liked how Arnav and Khushi didn't let their personal grudges come between their relationship with PayAsh. I found it so cute when Arnav said, "He really, really didn't want to be anywhere near her because he intensely, intensely wanted to be around her only. Damn!!". I really wanted to hold his hand and tell him that everything will be alright and he will get his love, Saiyyu-ji will make sure of that, right Saiyyu-jiWinkLOL? Loved the Arnav-Payal angle...really craved for it in the show. Some private and serious talk between PayAsh now...hmm, is Payal going to say yes after it? Let's wait and watch.

Why does everyone need to tease my bholi-bhaali Khushi just because she feels coldTongue? Rudolph the red nosed reindeer?...Cute! You know what? Aman has started to reach out to me so much that I can't explain. He is kind of like me when it comes to hiding pain by humour and light-heartedness. Still the pain he went through, be it his parents or the recent confrontation with Arnav and heartbreak, I cannot even imagine. He is mature, I knew it from before...but today he just won my heart. The way he unrevealed Mamiji's mysterious behaviour was awesome. Lavanya and NK? God, I love these two. Can you make them appear at least once in the story ...with dialogues? Please??? *cute face* *puppy face* Aman and Khushi in Delhi and Arnav alone in the UK? Arnav is surely not going to be really happy being far from Khushi! Though maybe he won't be insecure of Aman anymore...And do I see an emotional-romantic airport scene coming up in OW? Can't say anything because you sure are acting like SP (star plus) recently...WinkTongue

I was reminded of the scene in Student Of The Year where Rohan (Varun) and Abhimanyu (Sidharth) fight with each other and then reconcile near the end of the movie, when you wrote that Aman-Arnav part. Love their friendship and Khushi's hugClap. Love is in the airEmbarrassed...

Mamiji was happy to see her two kids being friends again...We are tooBig smile Hope she makes up for the love Aman has missed from her. Aman is going to be hurt again hearing about his parents' divorce. Best of luck to him.

Pheww! I am free now. Posting 4 comments of this size is really tough! Still anything for you Saiyyu-jiSmile.


Edited by sayari.majumder - 29 January 2015 at 9:55am

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shalbi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 9:52am | IP Logged
hav read all d nine chapters in a go today... I m in love with ur work and this story indeed...
after reading it.. I m in awe of all d characters and m thinking over what will b hapenning in later updates..  Do continue soon and do add me to ur p.m list.. I would love to read it further..

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..Jyoti.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Superb update 
I can't decide if Manorama's character is good or bad Confused
I like Aman..he is so matured n understanding 
Did Arnav saw Khushi kissing Aman?
Waiting to read more 

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