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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED (Page 105)

lilakumariacnw Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
whats manorama's problem with khushi...she dont seem to be cruel but still she  is kind of cruel to khushi...may be not cruel...but not very nice...
to aman also now she's all okay ...

...boys talk their differences like this..that i knew since i have two brothers..but didnt expect that way here..Tongue

my heart just did a dance when she landed upon arnavDancing...i wish..i wish he had hugged her then..Day Dreaming...but didnt happened..Cry..

all raizadas n guptas seem to be hapy except for those two poor souls...plz make them happy soon...pretty plzzz...Smile

loved this update...waiting for next..

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barsha_dash IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Amazing update. Loved the convo between Aman and Khushi. Smile

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dreamymaya Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
oh my darling Rasu!!
You make me want to go back to those wasted teenage days and you make me desperate to fall in love...I could kill you for that...because love doesnt happen in my life...anyways you make me greedy for romance...he he..

Aman's perception about Raizadas and Manorama was impressive...I loved that Aman-Khushi talk very much...I am sure there would be each others support in Delhi during college days..Are you going to put them in IIT? ;-)

Payal's fears I can understand...I loved Shyam's love for Anjali...But what made me laugh like anything was "hot potato" Akash- Payal scene..

Oh man! Payal- Arnav, I always loved this combination...and you rocked it here..

NK-Lavanaya also comes in to picture..arre waah!!

Manorama as a mom to Aman touches sweet!

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Poju Senior Member

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Wow.. Akash said yes to Payal.. Finally will get to see some romance from these 2.. Tongue
Thank god things got better between Arnav aman n Khushi.. Felt bad for aman though.. 

I wonder how Khushi n arnav going to go bout wid their igonring once they get akash n Payal married..

Will they move out for higher studies.. Are we getting a leap of few years in the story..Big smile

Waiting for ur update dear. Plz don keep Us waiting.. 

Also can u plz convey lazyleaves.. Am desperately waiting for her update.. 

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divyaarnavsr Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Garima readily accepting the offer, dnt she hav brain or atleast some valid questions like payal had ?Ermm
And Akash Payal, a bond formed ALREADY because of the siblings. Lol I kinda expected the bond to happen when they play cupid(will they ?) and now it will get only stronger !!

*sigh* Thanks to payal, atleast u had the courtesy to be with arnav at this time !!

Arnav and khushi accepting the new rishta is no surprise atleast it didnt made me to make a face unlike garima's acceptance *no parva for your own daughter*

Aman *his part I liked it*

Khushi, with aman's comment *that its complicated part*

Well she decided to break up before mamiji's deal and she was the one who took advantage of the situation cleverly. And that para was like something different, like as if that implied she would be with arnav if not for mamiji.
*atleast from my pov*

And I am not deserting her but kinda pissed with her, you can say my love for arnav overshadows everything *grin*

I am feeling bad for arnav Unhappy

This new rishta is kinda ok with aman's explanation on mamiji part bt that doesnt mean I m ok wit garima Tongue

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sayari_sanki99 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 12:21am | IP Logged

You love Sayari or you hate Sayari, you cannot ignore SayariROFLTongueLOL. Hope you are getting where I am hinting atWinkLOL. I am back again. Here goes my ranting:

Chapter 8B:-

I think it was awkward for Payal to have this kind of conversation with Mamiji given the equation (maybe you'll read more of these math-related words in my comment later on, as I had Maths exams today onlyTongue) of their families. I was really happy to know that Mamiji actually likes...sorry I was stretching it far...doesn't dislike at least one of the Guptas. Kisi ko to rahaat mile Mamiji ke mami-giri seTongue!  When Mamiji was thinking, "Manorama knew she has her flaws but being a K serial vamp wasn't one of those", I was like- really? Look who's talking! The one who was being all Komolika(KZK) types 2 updates agoLOL! I don't know why I felt like she was being a vamp during that scene with Khushi. Maybe I visualized it differently than you thought about it. You know, there is a poem in Bengali literature about mami-s and their meanness, not that every mami is mean; it's just a joke. It goes something like this, " Mami is coming with a lathhi(stick); let's run away from here!". My cousin often tease my ma with this poem, sometimes even I join them in their "Tease-The-Heck-Out-Of-Our-Mami" mission. ROFLTongue

Anyways, moving on(I am really feeling like Karan Johar in KWK right nowLOL), I was actually feeling really bad for Mamiji when she was with her friend and all that happened. She wants her son to be settled down and there's nothing wrong in it, it's obvious for a mother. 

I can see you kept your promise about showing the "teenish" side of Khushi, huhWink? Crying over a boy, telling these things to your best friend, crying inside the washroom, and calling Arnav "hot" etc. etc. But seriously? I was being such "teeny" girl(well, I am a teenagerTongue) just in my last post by saying those crush-on-Arnav thingsEmbarrassed and here Khushi also does kind of similar things like me??!! Are you stalking me by any chanceShocked? And is this Khushi inspired from meConfused? Hmm...inbheshtigation kareega pariTongue!! Aww! Though I should feel a bit sad for Khushi, I am actually finding it cute and funny. And what is this Savita-noticing-Aman-more-than-necessary businessConfused? Is the dal kaala or mere akkal pe hai par gaya taalaTongueLOL? Will talk to you some other time about this angle...

I loved the brief Arshi scene. Eye locks and rabba ve in background...I am literally craving for it!EmbarrassedWinkDay Dreaming 

Sorry to pher paani on your hopes, but I actually wasn't surprised at all at Mamiji's declarationTongueLOL. I won't say I saw this coming so soon, but I was kind of expecting something like this. But you also said that it is a fast-paced story and it has completed more than half of the journey. Come on! You dropped so many hints! Mamiji's saying, "She will get her son married by hook or by crook" and just after it her bumping with Payal, her saying that she didn't dislike Payal among the Guptas and "Pity she was a Gupta" etc. etc. were enough for my super-shaatil brain to have guessed that Mamiji would like to have Payal as her bahu. Would love to read the reactions of the families and our PayAshWink!

P.S: Thanks for using my latest banner!Hug Though there are many readers who are far faarr faaarrr better than me in making banners, you still took the trouble of posting my banners and that really means a lotSmile. So, a big, huge, giant, massive, vast hugHug and loads and tons of thanks to youHeart!


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jpjinadari21 Senior Member

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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Superb update and superb dp ! I loved it!

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Greyasr Senior Member

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Posted: 29 January 2015 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Kuch bhi ho what is Mano upto dimaag overdrive pe hain
But cannot simply reconcile..
Come on really with all that ego she will accept Payal??
Not pojjible hello hai bye bye
Phir se socho and replies to me bitwa kyaa chal raha hai mano ki dimaag mein..
Urgently needed mano payal ki meetingwa in the candle storewa..

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