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ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 88

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Posted: 9 years ago
part 8 b
awesome dear...
excellent...
poor Khushi and Arnav...
both are hurting...
cant believe Maamiji has a soft corner for Paayal...
and the expression she gave was awesome...
Khushi is still concerned for Arnav...
but shes controlling herself...
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 9 A
awesome...
my God cant believe Maamiji proposed the Guptas fro Aakash...
and he too said yes...
well this has brought Aakash to her shop and also see how she has come close to Arnav too...
excellent...
lovely...
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 9 b
awesome...
lovely...
Aman and Khushi had a good heart to heart convo...
and Aman and Arnav made it up...
these guys are too much...
but all is well...
Maamiji is accepting Aman back but shes not taking what Arnav is feeling for Khushi...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Unres'ed here while singing away
waah waah raam ji jodi kya banaayi
bhaiya aur bhaabhi ko bhadhaayi ho badhaayi
sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaayi
aapki kripa se yeh shubh ghadi aayi
jiji aur jijaa ka badhaayi ho badhaayi
sab rasmon se badi hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagaayi

Edited by bhavali4RR - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
U LOVE HER OR HATE HER..BUT CAN'T IGNORE HER..

Very true..
when it comes to Manorma..
Why does she wanna have Payal as her DIL..when she can't stand our sweet Khushi..Why does she have all her affection for Aman but almost hate our cute Khushi..
I m so GUSSA😑
And don't wanna stress my brain..

I've better things to do..

To cherish the blooming relationship between PayAsh..πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ

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Wait for the upcoming Arhi scenes..
Detailed,intense n worthwaiting,,
              

kabhi tou tars aaye ga meri gudiya ko..meri halat pe...πŸ˜”
Arhi ki dose in time naa mile tou..
Saansien hi ruk jaati hain.. πŸ˜’
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Posted: 9 years ago
Everyone is acting so wierd about the marriage proposal. . I thought they all would be in shock atleast for one day but they have readily accepted the proposal.. No one has a single doubt in their mind or apprehension except Payal.. It just confused me..

Akash, Payal, Arnav, khushi and Aman have sorted out their issues to some extent.. And I really want to know what Akash talked to Payal about "them".. Loved Aman.. He is so sweet and a best friend..

Loved the update. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was an awesome update Saiyyu
Glad to know that Payal was with Arnav when Akah was with Khsuhi
Payash proved to be a perfect couple with this one action itself
Who filled in the other's place when necessary
And I really like all the bond very much
Ofcourse Manorama seems to be good
And Aman no words for him yaar
He is more than perfect.He understands and acts very mature and a great guy
In this chapter he was the Hero more than Arnav
And Why did khushi tell she will go with Aman for prom.What a timing I would have been glad if she had shut her mouth that time
I mean I don't blame Khsuhi but still
But Aman reallly managed the situation very well
He stealed this part.Kudos to him.
Now please don't make Arnav think Aman and Khsuhi have something if they both joined the same college in Delhi.
But Aman is a genius.He won't let such stupid things to happen.He will handle everything well for his friend.
I don't know why I just liked Aman very very much in this part even more than Arnav
And I would also like even if it take lead after payash marriage.I mean they have to be successful na for getting married and hae to achieve heights
And ya Now what will happen.It seems a bit complicated for Arnav
I have a doubt Khushi promised that she won't let anyone know na then how can she tell that Savitha then.Ofcourse only family members and Aki souldn't but still she said it was only between them in that room na.Thats why
Ok I know I am confusing.Lets leave that
As usual amazing part by you
And eagerly waiting for the coast to get clear for Arnav
And show how payash get to this level too
Overall a great update
Waiting for the next

Edited by ragvir92 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally got time to read it!
asli duniya is so busy these days :/
anyway coming to the update!
I love Aman (not more than Arnav πŸ˜‰ )
he behaved so maturely!
The poor got hurt still manged to hide it :(
so much communication happen in this update!
We got to know what the characters thinks!
hope payal agrees to marry akash
I really want to see some scenes between them <3
they make a cute pair :D
a brief hug if Arnav and Khushi
dil ko thandak mili thodi
hoping for more of them in next update (I know I'm greedy )

p.s. your note umm I'm always for kiss and make up ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update. Glad that payal really spoke her mind about mami and voiced her concerns about marrying Akash. Also, was happy that she came through for Arnav as a support when Akash failed. It was good that Arnav and aman sorted out their differences, though with a fist fight !! 😊 Wonder where that leaves khushi as far as her equation with Arnav is concerned. Looking forward to the next update and thanks so much for the pm. Really appreciate it. πŸ˜³
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Posted: 9 years ago
Couldn't stay away any more..
 
I wasn't roaming into the Arshi world for quite a long time. But your PMs used to provoke me to break my fast.. And finally today I am here, glued to my laptop. Read all the chapters today.
 
I can't tell you how much I loved this teenage love story! Its so refreshing..
 
Arnav and Khushi are so natural.. Whereas their love was spontaneous, their break up (or just a break?), on the other hand, was a good sign of maturity.
 
I am looking forward to their reunion!
Edited by golpokobita - 9 years ago