Read all parts at one go. Must say you are amazing writer.
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Hill station and that too Nainitaal. Very nice location. Oh and its always cold up on mountains. Even midst of summer. Who better can understand Khushi's dilemna on feeling cold than me😆. I even cover my mouth with scarf😛.
Your teenage sensations and their emotions are so well depicted. Yes teenagers are messed up with having pimples as their biggest problem yet your Khushi is like real khushi very strong and understanding. She had guts for negotiations👍🏼.
Am liking Akash and Payal here as well.
So far Arnie is just passionate about his belongings and as confused as a teenager. Not much of his character can be known from SS so far. will wait for more to unravel.
If not Shyam then Sheetal. There has to be a villan in story for the story to be not too sweet.
Will love to see drift, yearning and every ruthless thing that ASR will do. Hope this incident does not make Arnav ASR and most imp womanizer. Way too many stories tarnish his image being womanizer.
Looks like we will have a leap here😕
Awesome work and I loved the studs that she wore😃
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