ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 34

Saiyyu, this love boat is almost sinking now. Who will save it?

Happy New Year and Welcome Back!!  Disappointed that you didn't like Shimla & you won't be writing an FF/SS based off of there..but Delhi achcha laga na, tho thoda ummeed rakhe hum...

Who better than Khushi to understand what relationships mean in a true sense?  With his chapter, Khushi has nade a special place in my heart.  She made the ultimate sacrifice in love for keeping intact the already strained relationship between the Raizada's & the Gupta's.  She impressed me with her tenacity in controlling her emotions while breaking away from Arnav.  I admired her maturity, clarity  and logical reasoning while handling Arnav.  So, how can anyone hate or ignore Khushi when all she deserves is love, love and more love...

I am impressed in the way Khushi handled Monster Mami.  Sticking with the agenda for the day, I wasn't in the least bit alarmed when Khushi tactfully played her cards against a formidable Manorama.  Loved how you unfolded the conversation between Khushi and Manorama.

As heartbroken as I am with Khushi's decisions, I'm hoping this is a temporary respite.  Just tell me that you have special plans for us in the upcoming chapters, and I'll be one happy camper.😃 Edited by bhavali4RR - 9 years ago

Though I thought of sit back and review the story as a whole at the end of it  seems like you won't let me do that Saiyu... My hands are itching badly  to write these ..I Love Khushi...Why is it always about Arnav..?/ What he desires..?/ What he feels for her..? Sometimes it should be the the other way around too...I know they are just 18 and anyone can make mistakes at this age, blah blah blah...But  I just love this bold khushi who is way more mature than arnav...And khushi's dialogues were meticulous and also the 'highlight' of the chapter...This is why I love you and yearn for your writings always saiyu... Okay... that's it... I think I can relax now...


Saiyu... You rock as always...

PS: Made it in a rush, so ignore mistakes😳

With lots of love
ACHU   Edited by arshy4ever - 9 years ago

Wonderful SS Dear... Read it all in one go... Please PM for future updates...

Great story, read all of it in a go! Looking forwRd to the next update!

An unexpected twist saiyyu. First of all didn't expect khushi to call arnav and ready to talk to him. Khushi is so right in saying arnav has no rights to decide about aman for her. He should have told his feelings earlier. May be it is not the time for them to unite. Why would he say khushi as heartless? Or is that a clue to us to say that it is the making of heartless ASR? 

Feel sorry for Arnav, he very smartly tried to keep his love interest and his best friend with him thinking it will all be fine in the end but alas, now he has an estranged and hurt best friend and the his girl who rejected to be part of his life. Such is the life of teeny who try to be smart you foolish bouy...😭




Edited by rk2127 - 9 years ago

Omg!!! Really khushi is gonna leave Arnav and everything the share and go away? 

Queen versus  Queen - but do both have the best interest of loved ones in mind or is one just self centered ?  While I don't like to see a hurt Arnav, he has self inflicted some of his misery ..

This Khushi sounds so mature & in control of her emotions. To be able to go beyond the attraction & address the issue of trust & respect is normally beyond the faculties of an 18 year old. Handling Manorama & mamging to convince her about Anjali displayed that same panache.