Originally posted by: ..RareGem..
Nice updates Zara...Though I understand Rudra anger on Myrah for hiding the truth from him. But Myrah is not completely at fault in this situation...She tried her very best to speak to him, but he had no time for her. Everyone is charging her for not disclosing the truth, that wasn't right... They have to understand her situation too...This is a tough situation for everyone, especially Rudra...Firstly, he found out that his Paro is alive and secondly Paro doesn't remember him and Dhruv. And thirdly, he got married to Myrah... So, Rudra's plight and his inner turmoil are understandable... Paro remembers little, little things, which is a good sign. Now, looking forward tothe next chapter.
Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30
You deserve a big big hug..Wow Zara WOW, two updates...I couldnt believe my luck when I saw it...I had to blink my eyes twice to really know that it was for real.
I don't know what to say... a heartfelt ' thank you ' Zara. No probs sisπ
Another reason for me to be happy...my prediction about Paro calling Naksh ' Major Saab ' in the last line of last chapter came true...Yeh...Yeh...I am patting myself. lololπNow coming to the new update...Clap clap for the way you brought out the equation between Dhruv & Rudra at the dining table...you handled it with such finesse...knowing that his Paro is alive, seeing her with Naksh & not able to do anything about it , watching her address him as 'Major Saab'... slowly going towards him & then to start sowing button on his uniform must have sunk Rudra's heart lower & lower , wallowing in an emotional abyss ,wondering where the bottom is , when he would hit it...& if he would ever ascend from it & return to normal ...Exactly the feeling Rudra was going through. He didn't now whether he should be happy seeing Paro remember things about him, clinging on to each of those memories, or if he should cry of anger to see that Naksh was slowing taking his place in Paro's mind.
His pain was so palapable ...stealing the pith & substance out of his life...your creative mind and writing skills were so powerful that I could visualize each and every little moment , with minutest of the details with Ashish, Sanaya & Dhruv( don't know his name ) in my mind... Thank you very much. Now very very eager to read the next update...Rudra's outburst...Myrah's reaction..... .Myrah = swept away by emotion Yep ...and unable to face the truth that Rudra can NEVER be hers Not exactly...not yet. ...that she was never looking to cheat,,it's just that she loves him so much that she took his sleeping as a sign that that's what even GOD wants... Again not exactly,lol. ...she could not find the strength to let go of her love who is Rudra..so she tried the escapist route... would it make sense to Rudra ? You'll see as the story progresses what Myrah deep down really wants.Naksh is another adorable character ...his sense of humour is elegant , sweet ...never fails to amuse the legion of readers! ...awesome...I enjoy every bit of it!Oh yes, where are Mehras? Aren't they supposed to be in the haveli too ? Will we be seeing them ? Myrah's family weren't ever staying in the Haveli sis. π They came to visit for the anniversary party but they left afterwards remember.πCongratulation for your new computer... It's not a new one, but I fixed my old one. I officially love firefox. It really does block the ads redirecting you to other sites. I highly recommend it.
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