Originally posted by: deepsel
Holy heavens...U finally did it Zara..made PARUD meet again...My dried up tears after that episode have gushed back again today after reading this chapter...Am writing this imm after reading , hence donno what am gng to scribble here...really emotional right now...Aww *hugs*
Yours is the first story am reading this new year after coming from holidays and what a gift you have given..millions of PARUD fans desire...seeing PARUD together again..Shit am crying..I never knew a fictional character's demise will shake me this much, that to see her come back and meet her soulmate even in a mere story will bring happy tears.. I'm really glad sis. This story is meant to right the wrong.
To be honest I really didn't expect that you will make Rudra see her so fast (then I looked alas its already chapter 18π), my heartbeat was running faster than usual along with Rudra's till he let out "P..Paro"..my god, I would have given anything to see this scene on screen...I still can't get away from that sight my mind is viewing right now...brilliantly done dear..π Yep chap 18 they meet. We've got a long way to go with this story.π Really glad I helped you visualise how the scene is meant to be seen.
Kids scene was quite natural..making us picturerize Koel's "O" expression was another gem of ur writing skill..*pops collar* Thanks sisπ³
Poor Myra, finally she let out the truth, I never thought I would feel this bad for Myra anytime soon, well your story achieved that tooπ³..I just hope Rudra realize what Dhruv was trying to say before and see that Myra really didn't want to hide, infact she spilled the beans the very same day she saw Paro, but it was he who was not in a condition to listen...sighs... Your right. Myrah is suffering at the moment but it's mostly guilt if you read carefully. Interesting things are to come for this ladyπ
Again you didn't fail to include the TRP materialsπ..am saying the dinner table scene with Shatabti,Sumer and Mohini...U really should do screenplay some day..u will become an awesome one..Aww thanks sis. That will remain a dream!π
My special loads of love for this chapter for you Zara π€..You really made my day Very very glad
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