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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
Seriously yaar..too good! Loved the ishra moment and his interview part...keep writing

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
This was very well written.. If you say that this is not your best work than I cannot wait to read all you have written because I found this brilliant.. Thumbs Up

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:10am | IP Logged
brilliant...Clap 

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:20am | IP Logged
You should think about writing a novel.
we could really use people with such talents. 
Lovely piece, by the way! :)

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:26am | IP Logged
God this os is so beautiful..loved it..You explained shagun's inner turmoil very well..interview part was lovely.. I wish something similar happens on the show
Would love to read more from you.

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Srishty-

Ah this took me to another world, a world filled with love and happiness. It was so damn good!

Initially I thought this would be about Raman clearing Ishita's insecurity regarding Shagun but this turned out about Shagun realising what she lost not that she has feelings for what she lost but she's still a loser in every way, lost the husband, children, family and all the materialistic posessions too.

It a perfect story for a wintery dayClap

Thank you.

I've already written a piece about Ishita's insecurity, but this time I wanted to portray how the Bhallas looked like to an outsider. They all have good chemistry with each other, don't they?!

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by GanBarunFan

This is beautiful!!!

Thank you so much! Having read your thoughts on your threads, it means so much coming from you.

As for the PM, sorry! I went out and then completely forgot :|

Anyway, I'll send you one if Doc doesn't do it before me!

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by columbia

Lov.ed how you kept the title flow through the whole OS 
Such a beautifully written story 

I tried to...kept going into the romance of Ishita-Raman due to obvious reasons!Stern Smile Had to delete stuff and come back to the Shagun-mindset again and again!

Thanks a ton.

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