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Eyes-Wide-Shut IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 October 2008
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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 9:23am | IP Logged
NeNe Hug
Love ya for this gurl! Logged on after 2 days  and found this brilliance Smile getting ready to board a flight...will be back with my mushy response. 

Thanks for writing this lover or as Kiara would call it liver. LOL

So after 2 flight cancellations, 4 hour delay and a 18 hour travel day I am finally home as much as I would like to crash in my bed, I know I have to come and express my gratitude to you for several reasons. Primary being that you were kind enough to take out time and pen something down on my request. Thank you so very much for being so kind! I am a dork and that's no secret so I always imagine what would I do with these characters if I were the writer of the show. I had always imagined Shagun realizing the value of love and relationship by proxy, what I mean by proxy is her being a witness to the subtle understanding and understated emotion of love between Raman and Ishita, so you can only imagine what this OS did to me when I read it. While reading about Shagun and your portrayal of her loneliness  and despair the following quote came to mind from the book Every Day by David Levithan:

'I wake up thinking of yesterday. The joy is in remembering; the pain is in knowing it was yesterday.'

I loved the maturity of your characters and the subtle tone that you gave them, I appreciate that none of the Bhalla family members were trying desperately to prove any point to Shagun, they were just being themselves and living their normal mundane life. Ishita and Raman's comfort and love wasn't to show Shagun or prove a point, they were being themselves and there could be nothing worse for a person like Shagun to witness the normalcy that she has never had. 

I cannot tell you how much I enjoy your writing, it truly does make my day! I love reading subtle stories that remain true to the characters and yours do full justice to all the characters of YHM. I also adore that conversational aspect of this story, I felt like I was situated in the Bhalla house witnessing Shagun unravel in front of my eyes. Smile

It's difficult to pick the part that touched me the most but if I must then it's the scene between Raman and Ishita in their bedroom engaged in a tussle of love being witnessed by Shagun and those words in the article articulated by Puttar for the missus. Day Dreaming PERFECT!

Okays I am about to hit my head on the table if I don't sleep at this very moment so I will end my gush fest for you and this brilliant OS right about now. 

Thanks once again love! You da best!

Six-some, Member! 

Edited by Eyes-Wide-Shut - 28 December 2014 at 11:09pm

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nidhi.b23 Senior Member

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:07am | IP Logged
this is super awesome...loved it to the core...

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Ribelle IF-Rockerz

Joined: 29 January 2012
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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Deeply did justice to her feelings. Almost made me sympathise-almost.
Was a good change to read IshRa from her PoV...
Waiting or your index :)

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Ishrafanno1 Goldie

Joined: 15 May 2013
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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Awesome! Enjoyed reading it. How I wish I saw this onscreen.

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N.R.Rona Senior Member

Joined: 29 July 2014
Posts: 603

Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Y this much sadness was a superb one..beautifully written..its the first time am reading a story from shaguns pov n i must say that was awesome... Pls pm me when you write further

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arshi21 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 March 2012
Posts: 8910

Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Not your best work? I dont know about the rest but for me, its by far one of the best ishra OSes i hae ever read on this forum. 
I am amazed at how you have captured every small detail which matters to an outsider which can make them think of them as a family. 

I wish CVs can show this in the show. This...THIS is shagun's downfall in real. 

I think it was amazing. And the last line for ishita in his interview? Adorable. 

You have described it so realisitcally that its tough to not feel its a written update of the show itself. I wish this somehow..even half of this could get projected in the show.

I loved it.

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--Nargis-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Phenomenal!!  Shagun so needs a rude awakening!! Clap

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nividances IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:57am | IP Logged
That was absolutely beautiful! Would love to read more from you. 

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