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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Take a bow! This one is par excellence..

You portrayed Shagun's emotions so well! She realizing what she has missed out in life due to her greed..

Absolutely loved ot! A different concept, a different POV... and we get IshRa love too..

Keep writing :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: mandu

Very very well written...I totally enjoyed reading it


Thank you. I'm glad <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ABBY92

This was beautiful. I really liked the fact that it was all about Shagun realising what she has truly lost when she left Raman and how try as she might, she will never get them back.


Thanks!

Unless she does some serious manipulation and tricks the family, I don't see Ishita and Raman going against each other for anything. Their relationship is based on too much of co-dependence to be broken off so easily!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: pomegranate

Wow you are a such a talented writer. I always wanted to see something along these lines on the show but I guess that is too much that to hope for.  Shagun realized what a misfit she is in the family that once used to be hers, her realization of what she destroyed with her own hands was so well described. I only wished we would get to see something similar on the show, but I guess not.


Thanks so much <3

Shagun already KNOWS that she doesn't belong there, but yes, this realization to come about in a sophisticated manner on television is not reasonable I suppose by soap standards. They can't lose a vamp that easily and maturely!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: natkhat_angel

Loved it...especially the interview part. I wish something similar happens on the show! And Shagun behaves like a normal person for once!


Thank you. <3

A blushing and gushing RKB..what's not to like!

Shagun and normal...that would kill the show's golden goose, wouldn't it?!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Anum_says

*Applause*
Superbb Writing


*Blushes*

Thanks a ton! <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: aishu_divan

Very beautifully written😊


Thank you so very much!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Akshatha19

wow... 

the title and  the story just brilliantly  written...
ur awesome writer buddy👏👏
very well done yaar...⭐️

each and every feelings of shagun was portrait beautifully...
the pain she was going through just perfect..
 i wish they show this seq in serial...
just perfect...






Thank you. I guess the phrase depicted Shagun's state perfectly! Thanks again.

Not much hope for that, optimism sometimes sails a sinking boat, so let's keep our fingers crossed!😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: tanu3579

thts beautiful... :) 

wud hv loved to see it in the show :)


Thank you.

I would have loved it too...but the chances? Let's agree - very low!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: -AmalAziz-

Woww Beautifully Written.. Loved it  


Thank you.

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it <3