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zaya story Humsafar part 3page 18 (Page 17)

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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Thanks to all of u for commenting ...
Means lot..n it encourages me to write more

Lots of love to all
Muaaahhh :)


Alina

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 2:12am | IP Logged
CHAPTER 1.
it was awsome lovely and amazing alina.
though i never watched hamsafar so i m eager to know what's next..
zain was so mischive
He propuse his teacher..LOL


CHAPTER 2

Awww aliya is so sweet and cute.
Zeeshan the chicken uncle..LOL
aliya did very very right...
Her skates remind me of barbie and the magic of pegasus...
she also not allowed to skate and she had cute little bear also..

Continue soon.

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 2:57am | IP Logged
lovely update
loved it
continue soon

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by butterfly20

CHAPTER 1.
it was awsome lovely and amazing alina.
though i never watched hamsafar so i m eager to know what's next..
zain was so mischive
He propuse his teacher..LOL


CHAPTER 2

Awww aliya is so sweet and cute.
Zeeshan the chicken uncle..LOL
aliya did very very right...
Her skates remind me of barbie and the magic of pegasus...
she also not allowed to skate and she had cute little bear also..

Continue soon.


Thank u so much hanii
For commenting ...
I was waiting for it ...

I m glad u lykd it ...
Yupa aliya ki skates i was also inspired by barbie and the magic of pegasus

Thanks for commenting ...


Lots of love n hugs.


Alina
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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Humzy

lovely update
loved it
continue soon

Thank u dear ...
Means alot ...
Will continue soon
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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 11:37am | IP Logged
AlinaHug
Finally read both parts together!!
I'm loving this storyBig smile
Zain was so cute with the teacherEmbarrassedLOL
Aaliya was very naughty LOL
Continue soon plzEmbarrassed
Tnx 4 pmBig smile
Love AmanHeart

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Posted: 22 January 2015 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aman1605

AlinaHug
Finally read both parts together!!
I'm loving this storyBig smile
Zain was so cute with the teacherEmbarrassedLOL
Aaliya was very naughtyLOL
Continue soon plzEmbarrassed
Tnx 4 pmBig smile
Love AmanHeart


Thanks aman really means alot
I m glad u liked both the chapters

Will update soon
Regarding pm
Your most welcome

Love u loads

Alina

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Posted: 23 January 2015 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Hola guyz i m back with another chapter ..

No proof reading ignore typos ...

Chapter 3 :-

Bhopal
Haider Mansion
Night 10 pm
Aliya was in her room sleeping peacfully in her room when she had a really bad
She was tossing in her bed and was shaking badly ...finally her dream overcome her senses and she shouted in her dream n and woke up with a jolt ..she sat up on her bed breathing heavily ...she wanted to check her mother ...she ran towards shabana's she sat near her and ran her fingers in her hairs ...soon she realized that shabana was burning in fever she panicked and tried to wake her up but her efforts went in vain ..

Shabana was not responding at all aliya was very scared she sprinkled water on her face but still shabana didnt responded aliyaa started crying she rubbed her hands she again sprinkled water but no response ..

Aliya called batool she was so much afraid seeing her mother the only person she had in her life after her father ...

Her fingera were like jelly she was unable to dial her number ..
But somehow she managed to dail it ...

Aliya : hello batool khala ...plzz aap jaldii ajaye ..mama ko kuch ho gaya hai woh meri baat nahi sun rahi uth bhi nahi rahi ...she was crying vigorously ..

On the other side of the phone batool also became very tensed ..

Aliya was crying very badly ..

Aliya : khala plzz jaldi aye ...plzz meri mama ko bacha lijye ...

Batool : aliya beta tension mat le abhi aarahi hoon

After 10 minutes batool arrived at haider mansion ..aliya came running in her arms ..batool placed her arm protectively around her ...

Aliya : khala mama ..
She was unable to complete her sentence ..her beautiful face showed her fear tears were flowing freely as if they will never stop..

Batool : aliya beta rona band kar chal hum hospital chalte hain ...

They placed shabana into the car and driver took them to the hospital on the way to the hospital aliya was rubbing her hands she placed wet cloth on her forhead ...

Aliya : mama please apni ankhe kholo..plzz ap k alawa mera koi bhi nahi hai ..plzz mama

Batool : aliya bachi honsla rakh kuch nahi hoga ...

Finally they reached hospital ...
The doctors rushed her to icu ...

Aliya and batool was waiting outside icu ...

Batool : aliya ek baat bolo bachi ..

Aliya : ji khala ...

Batool : aliya bachi plzz usman bhai ko bata de ..un ko bola le yahan teri mama k sirf wohi ek bhai hai ..shabana k acha lage ga

Aliya : par khala ..

Batool : aliya main janti hoon tu naraaz hai un se ..lekin apni maa k liye bhi kiya apni naraazgi nahi chor sakti ..

Aliya : khala ap ko pata hai na k mamu papa k funeral pe nahi aye thy ..unho ne ek phone bhi nahi kiya ...or aap chahti hai mein unhe call karoon ...

Batool : nahi aliya usman bhai ne kiya tha teri mama ko ...shabana ne hamesha tujhe batane ki koshish ki but tu ne kabhi suna hi nahi ...

Aliya : kiya ..mamu ne call ki thi ..

Batool : han bachi ki thi lekin tu bohat naraaz thi isliye tu ne kabhi suna hi nahi ...usman bhai ko phone kar le aliya plz bachi ...

Aliya : theek hai ..lekin abhi toh itni raat hai khala ...

Batool : koi baat nahi tu subha call kar lena ..


She said caressing her hair ...

Aliya placed her head on her shoulder batool placed her hand on hers ...

Aliya closed her eyes for a while and batool caressed her hair and she dozed off ..



While on the other side zain was in his room planning for a trip ...

Zain : kahan jao bankok , paris , venice ...uff itni sari places or main akela ... bohat nainsafi hai yar ...

Usman : kiya kar rahe ho miyan ..

Zain sat up on his bed ..

Zain : hey dad ..

Usman : asalam alaikum ..

Zain : oh ..walaikum asalam ...

Usman : kiya ho raha hai ..

Zain : kuch nahi bas planning kar raha tha kahan jao ghoom ne ..

Usman : filhal tum kahin nahi ja rahe ...
He said closing his laptop ..

Usman : abhi toh aye ho or abhi jane ki planning ..kuch din apne mom dad k sath bhi guzar lo ..hamare marne k baad jahan maann ho ghoom lena ...

Zain placed his hands on his lips ..

Zain : plzz dad aap ainda aisi baat kabhi nahi karo ge ...
He hugged him tightly...

Usman : promise kabhi nahi karoon ga... but tum bhi kahin nahi ja rahe hi samjhe ..

Zain : nahin jao ga ...promise

Usman : good boy ...chalo ab so jao ...
Subah mere sat walk pe chalna ...

Zain : ok dad ...good night ...

Usman left from his room ...

Next morning ...

Bhopal :

Batool : aliya uth ja bachi ...

She caressed her hairs ..aliya woke upb..
Aliya : khala mama ko hosh aya ..

Batool : nahi abhi nahi par doctors ne kaha k ajaye ga ..t uth ja mamu ko calll kar le ..

Aliya : ji ..

She got up from the seat and dialed her mamu's number ...

Usman : hello ...

Aliya : asalam alaikum mamu...

Usman : aliya .kaisi hai bachi ..

Aliya : main theek hoon mamu..

She broke down on the call ..

Usman : kiya hua aliya tu ro q rahi hai beta ..

Aliya : mamu mama bohat beemar hai ..ap jaldi ajaye ...

Usman : tu tension mat le beta hum sab arahe hain ..

Aliya cut the call ...

While on the other hand ...
Suraiya : kiya hua usman sahab pareshan q lag rahe hain ap ..

Usmann: woh begum shabana bohat beemar hai ..

Suraiya : Allah khair kare ...

Usman : aliya ka phone tha ..hum sab ko jana chahiye ..ap zain ko uthaye main tickets book karta hoon ...



How was it good bad ..
Plzz leave ur reviews n let me know ..

Your chudail

Alina

Edited by zayalove - 23 January 2015 at 10:55am

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