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#7:Making you mine:Epliogue,authors note up, Pg 77, NOW![COMPLETED] (Page 97)

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Posted: 15 December 2015 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Amazing ff...
Loved all parts...
Very beautifully written !!
Excellent concept !
No words to describe it...the journey of ArHi is from strangers to bonded in a relation out of compulsion and then finally accepting it is superb...
Hate that idiot alyssa...
Finally arnav was able to overcome her past and  be happy ...
Akshita is such a cute doll...
Now a younger version of arnav...his lil son has come :)
Ending was  just perfect...!!

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Posted: 05 February 2016 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Just started reading it. It's really awesome

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Posted: 05 February 2016 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Nice concept. I love contract marriage tracks.

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Dear writer,
I just started reading this fiction yesterday and I immediately got hooked to it. I Just finished with epilogue. It was absolutely amazing journey throughout. From start to end it was really a rollar coaster ride for me. 
Their attraction for each other , their little fights, Arnav's attitude and arrogant behaviour with khushi, his insults, fashion show, khushi's ramp walk, their home coming, love making and then the pregnancy part...it all was superb and written beautifully. Many many thanks for that. 
Contract marriage track  is my favourite of any arshi story. U did well with this theme. No unwanted drama, no villains, no  senseless dragging , no funny turns and ups and downs in the story. Just arshi and their story. 
The last chapter was the epitome of this story. Fully loaded with suspense and  emotions. Especially the way u described Khushi and her inner turmoil was beyond words. Her love for her husband and her baby , her fights, her choice , her letting go of him and moving on really made me emotional as I felt it too with her. The ending was unpredictable and yet magical too. 
Though I wouldn't agree with the easy forgiveness ASR got in doctor's cabin but I guess its because their parenthood won over their husband and wife fights and problems. 
It's easy to potray a mother and her feelings for her baby but it is not so with a father and his fatherhood. So the way ASR came out his grief and wanted to experience a new life free of baggages of old wounds and pain for his baby was something I can't describe with mere words. 
I was utterly satisfied with the end that epilogue was something I didn't need but I read it and it was as beautiful as the story. 
Just perfect.

So thanks again for such a lovely story!!

Take your break but please do come back!!

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Posted: 09 February 2016 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
awesome

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loved it

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