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#7:Making you mine:Epliogue,authors note up, Pg 77, NOW![COMPLETED] (Page 74)

sarunsashasingh IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 15 January 2015 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Most beautiful n amazing update!!...so much of awww

Plzzz rite the epilouge also!!

paaskhanna Senior Member
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Posted: 16 January 2015 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Hi... Writing after long time sorry but was not able to read earlier . One plus point that I got to read 4 updates in one go and I love the way story progressed. All the emotions, love, insecurities, pain of both of them touched me. Though Khusi understood his unspoken words but how well you portrayed the love and protective feelings of a mother which most of the time trumps feelings for one's love/spouse.
I was so wanting to read Arnav's feelings and you fulfilled my wish. His mesmerised look and his reaction to seeing his baby was outstanding... His confession !!! Loved it and Khusi is no less in total ASR style 'I love you dammit'
Looking forward to reading epilogue and really want to know if he really said 'I love you' on their first night or not 
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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Awesumn..read all chapters in 1 go... SmileAmazing..ClapClapeagerly waiting fr epi'e...
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Posted: 17 January 2015 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
waiting!!
robinhood008 Goldie
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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 3:52am | IP Logged
That was an amazinggg update!!!
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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Epilogue k liye itna wait
ManKiBaath Senior Member
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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Didnt expect this quick wrap up in the end...You really threw me off...don't get me wrong, I am absolutely pleased with the way you unfolded.

Arnav's and Khushi's behavior towards one another is right in their own way.  Arnav needed the much needed space to introspect, ultimately coming victorious in conquering his demons.  Although his silence and alienation hurt Khushi, everything fell into place beautifully. You so exquisitely portrayed Arnav's emotions in the ultrasound room, which is what melted Khushi's heart.  Cheers to their love and happiness and another chance to get things right...and thank you for for this story.Clap

BTW - Do have a question regarding the contract on which this relationship started?  Do you plan on closing this loop just like how you closed the loop on Arnav's past?
 

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 10:52am | IP Logged
  • Excellent !!!
    The ending was beautiful...
    Now waiting for the epilogue...

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