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leabello Senior Member

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 7:11am | IP Logged
Just LOVED this chapter!!!!!!!! Your best MYM update so far... The chapter was a total package. I loved the way you portrayed Khushi's emotions at the start-alone, nervous and sad. Her thought of there being no happily ever afters in the real life reminded me of the chapter where she was upset and hurt wih Arnav's behaviour after their "first" kiss. She had thought of the same back then and a repeat of that might have been kind of a heartbreak. But loved the way she remained strong for her baby. The mother taking over the wife in her!!! Her longing to have Arnav beside her for her first ultrasound was expressed beautifully!!!

Coming to Arnav, this man being unbelievably complex is just a vulnerable child at the end. I was extremely glad that he showed up at the correct time. Though he behaved like a jerk and kept Khushi to her insecurities m happy with how he behaved in the hospital. From him coming into the room, sitting beside Khushi and placing a kiss on her forehead to interwining his fingers with looking at his baby on screen,listening to the heartbeats of the baby and absorbing the feeling of becoming a father...everything was splendid!!! His decision to leave behind his past and start afresh was the best thing that could happen to all the three. And i just loved the way he spoke to his baby. That was so sooo adorable!!!

And finally his confession- "i already love your mom" was the most amazing news to Khushi. Khushi ka "i love you dammit " bi kuch kam nahi tha ;) Glad that they are finally in this together!!! But also sad that this beautiful story is coming to an end ;(
Desperately waiting for the epilogue!!

Continue soon!!!!
Thanks for the pm :)

Edited by leabello - 08 January 2015 at 11:40am

BroknAngel Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 7:13am | IP Logged
Sending u a bag full of kisses fr ds awesome update. Every word was magical der feelings..u wrote it brilliantly. Waiting fr d epilogue

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MrBiebersWifey. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 15034

Posted: 08 January 2015 at 7:15am | IP Logged
cant believe its over :(
PLEASE post many new stories to make me overcome this lol
-Aniisha- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Loved the update as always
beautifully penned down! Clap
thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story of Arnav and Khushi with us Hug
thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of it
thanks for the PM 
candyjan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Wonderful update dear
quicksilver. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 7:24am | IP Logged
SuperbThumbs Up Finally Arnav let go of all his fears.
Richelle Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2015 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Beautiful!! so intense, so emotional n sooo much of
love...just awesum. loved itThumbs Up
joe4joe Goldie

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Posts: 1842

Posted: 08 January 2015 at 7:39am | IP Logged
OMG...this is outstanding...
Arnav realised everything & let go his past.
The last scene where arnav talking to the baby was so beautiful.
He will be the best hubby & father for khushi & their baby.
Will be waiting for the epilogue.

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