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#7:Making you mine:Epliogue,authors note up, Pg 77, NOW![COMPLETED] (Page 48)

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 1:55am | IP Logged

Coming back after one and a half, and here everything is complicated..

Rotten, (huh, I don't feel like calling my sis this name.. Unhappy)
Anyways, when I first came across this fiction, I thought Arnav will fall in love with khushi and that's how he will make her his.. But, what all happened through out the previous chapters.. it was attraction and along with it...love also..which Khushi is well aware now.. and Arnav, he is not trying to be unaware..
 
So, now when Khushi felt  Arnav is avoiding her after learing the truth, Arnav on the other side is trying to digest this FACT that he indeed is going to be a father. he really thought she wont become pregnant.. and was ready to have the "talk".. I think Arnav want some time along to adjust to the situation and he will be back to her.. But, may be that time will make him pay a lot..
 
And I trust you writer ji... You will do your best to bring them together.. so are we gonna get a repentance track? Arnav will come to know about what Khushi did with the money?
 
Waiitng for the next update... and now one more reader is up and one more comment is here, Please do try to update sooner.. Wink
 
Love you sissyy..
 
P.S the love making chapter was sooo sooo HAWT..Tongue
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 2:24am | IP Logged
It is time for Khushi to move on
She have to make Arnav understands in a hard way... some people just don't understands things with love they have to be kicked and pushed hard

I want Khushi to be free from Arnav's clutches no excuses
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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Wonderful Update.
True that Arnav past was very painful. But he should understand, he is not like his father, he never beats Khushi and misbehave with her also. So why he is thinking that he will mistreat his children. 
Poor Khushi. 
I am not going to blame Arnav's ex-girlfriend. It's Arnav who's behaviour is painful. 
Waiting for more awesome update.
Thank for PM. 
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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Omg ...Arnav can't do this to khushi...May be he is expecting khushi to tell him this imp news than hiding from him or may be he is fighting with his past demons still...but whatever hope he gets back k to her    thnks for pm
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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Was expecting same from him
I was thinking ull show Khushi going n finding Arnav in compromising position with Alysha after he gets to knw that he became father
I have a feeling this scene will come 
Lets c 
I hope Khushi have lots of strength and she can move ahead 
renee.bee IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 8:28am | IP Logged
I cnt believe I m on IF since 2012 n only read ur work now.
I came across this story on the forum. 

I totally love it. I read it in one go hoping it's completed bt no its ongoing n the latest updt is the most crucial juncture in this story. 

I feel bad for khushi. She must be feeling so heartbroken n betrayed at how arnav is behaving like a jerk. To be so clueless abt what arnav is feeling abt her in this situation n unwanted. It must be so stressful n suffocating nt able to share what shud hve been a joyful moment has turned into pain.

yes arnav has issues bt he shud know how troubled khushi must be right now 
he got her pregnant if anything he shud take responsibility for his actions. If he's worried abt turning out like his father he doesn't need to look far he's behaving like him by being insensitive towards his pregnant wife n baby.
Emotionally hurting her if nt more is as bad as physically hurting her. I expected him to least comfort khushi that he'll try to cope with this even if he takes time to come around. He's so far nt given a thought of pressure khushi is in.


I don't want to judge him abt what he'll do bt right now arnav is behaving like some coward n a jerk who got a girl pregnant out of wedlock n now after using her is treating her like trash.

Even if khushi has made up her mind to let him go I doubt she'll b able to stand his indifference. 

He cud have just talked to her or told her he needs time instead of treating her like she means nothing n them having a child isn't even worth discussing.  




Edited by renee.bee - 04 January 2015 at 9:04am

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 8:41am | IP Logged
This chapter is very beautifully written. The whole of Khushi bit is very touchy n I could feel her loss. Outstanding update n very good progress.
Thanks
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manugan Senior Member
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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Very good chapter...and very good final thought...waiting for next update!

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