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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 5:42am | IP Logged
And Here Comes yet another thread
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~ Making You Mine~

|| INDEX ||

Thread #1


chapter 1

chapter 2

chapter 3

chapter 4

chapter 5

chapter 6


Thread #2

chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9


Thread #3

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

Chapter 13


Thread #4

Chapter 14

Chapter 15

Chapter 16

Chapter 17


Thread 5

Chapter 18

Chapter 19


~Thread 6~

Chapter 23

Chapter 24

Chapter 25(a & b)

Chapter 26

Chapter 27

Thread 7~

Chapter 28(below)

Chapter 29

Chapter 30(part A & B)

Part C

Chapter 31

Epilogue & authors note


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~Chapter #28~
It had been a blissful one month.
Blissful wouldn't even started to cover for what an amazing time it had been for Khushi Raizada here. Almost a month since they had set a new milestone in their life and then travelled the journey afterwards, hand in hand, sans the contract. Almost one month when they had made love for the very first time and did reacted sensibly the morning after. She, for once, listened to her heart that wanted to be with him, no matter what. Now, as she realized, there couldn't have been another way out of it. She couldn't ask more from the man ruling and commanding her life. Just like a fairy tale it was. Yes, He was controlling. He was demanding but a novice when it comes to expressing the emotions. Sometimes a tough nut to crack. Sometimes, she had to guess the reasons of his foul mood all by herself. Sometimes she had to look behind the tough exterior he displayed on the front. At times she found his guards up effectively as a way to push her away. But then there were times, when he showered that charming smile, reserved completely for her. When he remembers the minute details about her and surprised her by bringing that up at most accurate of times. When he visited her father along with hers regularly. When he freaked out completely at times she fell ill. When he groaned in displeasure at times she raved about the acting skills of Salman khan but do let her watch those silly movies. When he narrowed his eyes at her showering her with death glares while disapproving something or when his jaw etched in stone when he is like freaking at her. When he took her out for shopping. For lunches, dinners.  And then there were times when he made love with her. Sometimes leisurely slow, sweet, passionate.. at times rough. But each time incomparable, that made her feel like a goddess. The list could go on and on and on and she would still had something to add more to it.
Khushi thought she loved him. But that wasn't true. That couldn't even cover an ounce of feelings what she now had for him. It wasn't plain love. It was a pure life changing experience for her. How could you still fall for someone a bit more every day, whom you already loved? How a thought of them can still crosses your mind even when you are deeply indulged in some work. How just a sight of them can make your day? How can waking up next to them wrapped up around you seems like the sweetest gift you could ask for? How can their mood affect yours directly? No. it wasn't just love. It was connection to one's soul. Deep, pure, sacred.
There were times, when it was on tip of her tongue to just confess her feelings for him. At times it felt like a burden that she should just get rid of . At times when he hold her fragile body close after their exhausted love making, Holding back became too impossible a task for her to do. He hadn't said he loved her. But then, what he does for her wasn't less than loving someone or was it? She didn't need those words. His actions were enough for her and she could see, he was trying. Was letting her in in what used to be a No Entry' zone and she was content with her present situation. She handed it over to him, to set the pace of this relationship and she knew, it was indeed in safe hands.
Meanwhile, there was this issue that she had to deal with. His past. A closed chapter for him that he didn't want to ever revisit again. She knew his past was rough that must have left its imprints on him till date but then everybody has one. Shoving it in the back wasn't a way for dealing with the demons. It was a coward's way out and Arnav Singh Raizada was anything but that. Was his rough childhood that reason he was so panicked about having his own kids cause if that's the case, then its surely a very serious one that she have to deal with. Sooner than later. Though she had no clue as of now was she pregnant or not, yet. He had asked her once about it days after their first encounter, but then how was she to know about it. Pregnancy tests are not that accurate that early and anyways waiting for her next period seemed like a more stable option and anyways, her periods were never on time. But then she hadn't felt any of the symptoms' they said the would-be mothers had to go through. Just normal headaches, here n there, Nothing much.This was something in their favour as she herself need time. To sort things out. To deal with his fears, his insecurities first. She knew she wasn't going anywhere. They are now together in the long run. They are already man and wife. They are compatible and perfect and people do change over time. Aren't they? Maybe he'll grow and open up more. Maybe he'll share his past himself when he'll be more comfortable. May be they'll together find a way to deal with it. A child right at this stage will only mess up the clutter more and they wouldn't want to subject an innocent life to that. If, anytime, at any stage of life, they'll have a child, he or she will be welcomed truly and heartily and not being imposed upon. But then, its not about what she wants'. Life has its own way of surprizing people at unexpected turn of events and if what she was fearing happened to be true afterall, if she really is carrying a child in her belly right now, then she had to act fast. Fine, he doesn't want to talk about it. She will.  He wouldn't kill her for that ,right? Plus, she had to take a pregnancy test now. Its been a month afterall, and high time its needed to put a stop on her lingering doubts, for once n all.
Mentally, making a note of that, Khushi adjusted the pleats of her saree before switching off the lights and descending downstairs ,where arnav was waiting for her. Today was the AR Industry's annual party and she was finally ready after full two hours. Makeup, hairdo and then the saree. Things you have to do to look extra special for being the CEO's wife.
The look in his eyes as he caught sight of her told her that all the trouble was indeed, worth it. His eyes shining with a feral glint silently approved her look before he grabbed her by waist, pulling her towards him and his head dipping in the process to steal a kiss.
"No, you are not spoiling my lipstick now"
She moved her head sideways just in time escaping and his lips landed on her neck. Not wasting that opportunity either, he nibbled the area while inhaling her scent and groaned in displeasure when discovered her back was bare completely bare, if not for two strings holding the thing.
"You will pay for this later"
She chuckled before ducking and escaping from his hold, pursing her lips before replying
"We'll see. Chalo ab. We are getting late"
For the next two hours, she had met more number of people than she had in the entire duration of their marriage. High profile socialites, Famous names in fashion world, his close business associates and people from all sections of media. For the whole duration, arnav had effectively tucked her at his side, his arm resting authoratively on her back. Though the thing they were discussing were plain business and at times going out of her head, he had managed to keep her involved in the conversation every now and then. His thumb slowly caressing her bare skin was a reason enough why she zoned out from the conversations. But then, despite entertaining peoples, he managed to throw her a charming smile or a devilish smirk every now and then , that was making him good enough to eat. The fact that it was having an effect on her was why he was enjoying this game. She tried at times to escape from his hold to teach him a lesson but then that was Raizada we are talking about.
 A deep womanly voice that said her husband's name, almost purring like a cat, caught her attention and she noticed a woman, dressed up in a red evening gown, with matching nails and jewellery coming towards them. Khushi hated her instantly when the woman lunched forward to embrace him in a tight, uncomfortable hug. Uncomfortable for Khushi atleast. The fact that she effectively chose to ignore khushi's presence beside him, add one more reason for her to detest that woman and why was she hugging him like they are long lost buddies and when she kissed him on his cheeks that was when Khushi couldn't take anymore. Clearing her throat, she managed to maintain a cool smile for this devilish woman when in real she wanted to strangle her. That did worked. She loosened him from her claws and noticed Khushi before eyeing her from top to bottom with disapproving glare. But then did smiled in a menacing way as if making a mockery of her. That did surged khushi's anger. Whoever this woman is, she just made a place in her bad books. Before she could said anything, Arnav came for the rescue.
"Khushi, this is Alyssa and Alyssa this is Khushi, my wife"
Khushi felt triumphed at the last part when she noticed the woman face fell for a second before the fake smile was back on place. He didn't noticed anything as he was busy tucking his wife again to his side but how was Khushi to miss it, as she was thoroughly watching the woman and her reactions which were no where happy or polite , for sure. The woman shake her hands while reciting a 'nice meeting you'' pleasantry which was nowhere pleasant, and the smile that accompanied it was the fakest one khushi had ever came across. She could clearly see the woman doesn't like her either and she couldn't thanked enough when arnav asked her to excused them as they were to have their dinner. Phew. Thank god.
They had dinner together, alone at their seats, which was kind of relief as khushi so wanted to have some time alone with him after they have been paraded around like newlyweds which was good, but boring good. After finishing, she got up from her seat, grabbing her clutch when he arched his eyebrows asking where she was going. She pointed towards the ladies washroom and reluctantly he let her go. Lord, really? Is this man for real? Rolling her eyes mentally, she made a way to that direction which all the time feeling his gaze on her back that was enough in giving her tingling sensation all over.
She retouched her makeup a minimal bit, readjusted her saree pleats in that perfect manner and tied the loosened knot on the back again. Perfect again. She smiled looking herself in the mirror glancing her look. Though she was in the small crowd of ladies who had wear saree as the majority were in some branded evening gowns but then, it doesn't matter as it was his opinion she cared for. And He liked her. He had complimented her on her attire thrice the evening but never forgot to mention the scarcity of blouse at the back. She came out of the washroom and that was when she realised she had a guest waiting for her. Unwanted one.
Alyssa was leaning against the wall, with her arms crossed across her chest and her face was etched with an evil look with an even more devilish smile lingering there. Oh. That's bad news coming. Khushi thought mentally as she passed her a small smile then sliding past her. She could do all this without the drama but her voice caught her attention.
Khushi stopping dead in her tracks at the voice that was spitting venom, her own ears not quite believing what she just heard,
"Excuse me??"
Alyssa smugly said, observing her nails, blowing air over them while her cold voice stabs numerous holes in khushi's body.
Probably an old Ex? Not wanting to give an upper hand to the woman standing infront of her, khushi quickly wears a smile on her own face, effectively wiping traits of the shock she felt at her initial accusation and she took her time in replying all the while widening the killer smile on her face which she knew was showing its effect.
"and yet, I have his ring on my finger, I get to called as his wife.."
Khushi lifted her hand, showing off the glowing solitaire sitting proudly on her ring finger, a gift she got from him last month. At that time she hesitated in accepting it as she realised it had cost him a fortune but him being Raizada who was being his adamant best didn't took no for an answer. This is the first time, she felt really proud to carry and showoff this little treasure on her finger cause the smug look was now wiped off alyssa's face who was now looking at her with faltered confidence, but then she made her comeback again.
"He is never the committing will regret in the end"
She hurled off the words in a nastier way like a woman hellbound on taking revenge.
"Really? Commitment phobic?hmmm..bythe way, Next month we will be celebrating our one year marriage anniversary. We will make sure you got to read all the juicy stuff of the grand party we will be throwing.."
Khushi's heart was thumping loudly. Yes, the last line she just said was completely made up and she was amazed at the confident way she delivered it. HELL! It was the nail in the coffin. She could see her seething with fury, clenching and unclenching her fists. Not wanting to entertain this evil woman anymore, khushi slipped into her mask again, wearing that non chalant look,before replying,
"and now if you please excuse me, my husband must be looking for me.Good luck with your life"
She made sure to put drops of sarcasm in her last line before turning around, a sense of victory embracing her at the efficient way she tackled his jealous Ex. Not bad, Mrs Raizada. She patted herself mentally before muffling a low chuckle daring to escape.
She was about to turn the corner when alyssa slide past her, making a snide and cutting remark.
"Enjoy your marriage till it lasts, but darling take my advice, make sure you don't get pregnant. Cause if you did, you will be vanished from his life even before you blink. Why you think we didn't worked out? I got pregnant and he hated kids. Wanna know what he suggested me? ABORTION.."
Khushi gasped in shock. It was more than she could take. Her confidence faltered in seconds as her words becoming more clear. A-B-O-R-T-I-O-N  !!
"trust me..that man who treat kids as burden isn't worth anyone's time. Its all about what he wants and his physical needs. Good luck with your life"
Saying that with an almost straight face, deprived of any smug or nasty expressions, alyssa walked off, leaving a shivering khushi behind whose world had just turned upside down.

ignore the typos pls.
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Edited by rotten.tomato - 28 December 2014 at 5:48am

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congrats for the new thread
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Awesome update Smile
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Congrats on new threadthread Big smile

Edited by Rohinid - 28 December 2014 at 10:02am
HUMII10592 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 6:26am | IP Logged
Again hurdle...

Waise it was nice..

Continue soon
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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 6:31am | IP Logged
omg omg ..what's next? can't wait..update soon
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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Oh Shoot and a double shoot at that. First of all Khushi herself is still not sure if she got pregnant or not and on top of it Alyssa dropped a huge bomb on her by telling her about abortion. I do think that Alyssa is lying and Arnav didn't do what she has implied. But right now Khushi is in a vulnerable state and if she does become pregnant I expect her to walk away from Arnav to protect her child as she thinks that Arnav might harm the baby. I am expecting a full show down between Arnav and Khushi when Khushi moves away from him. It has been so long since you updated so please pretty please give us an update soon this time. 

Happy New Year wishes to you - Hope the new year brings in peace and prosperity to you and your family.

Edited by psarada - 28 December 2014 at 6:40am

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Please khushi do not fell into any kind of trap... Be positive

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