ss: Not an object of pity! updated: part 11 on pg 20 *completed* - Page 6

oh.petite.one

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Posted: 9 years ago

awww poor Viraj 😭

that was very well written 👍🏼

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Laila132

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Posted: 9 years ago

Finally Viraj showed some emotion. Now I'm really looking forward to the next update!!!!

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@Ribelle

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Absolutely loved all the parts! You're an amazing writer! And. A quick updater too! Thanks :)
I have been reading but couldn't comment earlier
Eager to read more. The latest part is the best one

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 9 years ago

Also, could you put up an index on page 1?
Would make it easier for us to find the parts :)

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RatiKoni

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Posted: 9 years ago

Addicted to this beautiful story! 😃

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Devika

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Posted: 9 years ago

Just read the last two updates together...

Loved how Nisha defended Viraj in front of the reporters.

And poor Viraj crying was just heart-breaking😭

Love how the story is shaping up...👏👏

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Anju_S

@Anju_S

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow amazing story

Continue soon😊

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Archa Dave

@davearcha

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

You are real good!!! You have deeply explored their characters. Well done dear ...

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rocking_bhawna

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Posted: 9 years ago

superb update..plzz cont soon...

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Anya

@anya234

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Posted: 9 years ago

Please ! Please! Please! Update soon.

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