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ss: Not an object of pity! updated: part 11 on pg 20 *completed*

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Part 1: here! :P




Part 1
Nisha was fuming... First Riteish had broken their families' trust and now Shekhar had shown his true colours... "Can nobody be trusted?!" Her head screamed.

 Across the room, Viraj's expression mirrored hers. 
Every time he started to trust someone he was proven wrong... before he could be ready for another blow... He was shattered. No, he didn't feel any pain. He felt numb. Paralyzed... Again.

He sighed heavily. He walked up to Shekhar, his fists clenched the whole time. He spoke without emotion: "I'm not going to ask you why. I know you're going to lie to me again. But I will find out. Trust me. And I will make sure that I punish myself for trusting you blindly. I will also make sure that no one repeats my mistake ever again. No one will trust you. Mark my words." 

Viraj hadn't raised his voice once. Yet, his fists were clenched so hard that his nails dug into his own skin. His eyes met Nisha's for a moment... Nisha... he'd asked her to seek counseling from Shekhar. He'd never forgive himself for that.  He shut his eyes before the guilt could engulf him.

Shekhar noticed Viraj's gaze on Nisha. He jumped at the opportunity. "Miss Nisha, do you really think your Viraj sir is the God that you imagine?" He sniggered. "I've seen the way you look at him... I wish you'd not have interfered this much. I'd have warned you earlier... you're just his way to redemption. He pities you... I pity you." Viraj couldn't take it anymore, he took a step forward... But before he had moved an inch...

 'Thud!' Nisha had punched Shekhar in the face. 
Her eyes shot daggers at Shekhar. "NISHA GANGHAWAL IS NOT AN OBJECT OF PITY!" She gave Viraj a fleeting glance before she stormed out of the room.


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Criticism's welcomed too! I'm not sure how regular I'll be though. Thanks for reading.

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Nice one.. please continue..

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Nicely written! Please continue :)

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Its really good, and 95% probability we may see this in coming episodes... both the character's expression were very well expressed. Nisha's anger and Viraj's disappointment. :)

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Good beginning.continue soon.

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Thanks! Will try to update ASAP...  There's a limit on the no. Of posts I can make per day so won't be able to thank personally. Thanks for understanding.Smile
@myvirman thanks for the pm... I know this isn't what you requested but hopefully you'll find it worth it ultimately.
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nice start.
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