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Agent RKB & Agent JKR! *COMPLETED* 12a &12b - pg46 & 47 IS - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago
you are such a tease...aise mod pe yeh hogaya!
ab agents in action to bring back the kids...perhaps the villains need the chip! 


Raman's thoughts were awesomely written..his dream fantasy is already true but he doesnt have a clue! ðŸ˜†
cont soon!


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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG Raman already has fantasy wish for Ishu and RKB should be combine person and he has see goodness in Ishu and still he like RKB too. I like this twist way hope the secret is out in unexpecting way before Ishu can tell him. She will come to rescue the twin in JKR form or  in Ishu form but JKR style.Oh you make me eager for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I so loved the route you took...
you are fabulous...

If she have mentioned then it would have become bland then itself...Now she gave a clue and he can discover her in action...& even the chance of misunderstanding won't arise since she already gave hint...

Well done...
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Posted: 9 years ago
yar wht did u do...?
i tought atleast their convo vl b over bt u kept it incomplete...
raman nd his toughts...very naughty...
loved it...

cant wait fr nxt...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loving each n every update more n more...can't hold down my curiosity. ..please  update soon. ...waiting to see them working together and obviously ramans reaction when he gets to know that jkr and ishita are one...please please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Poor Raman.. He has no idea that his ultimate fantasy is going to turn into reality😳
I love  this story ya.. its romantic, entertaining and action-packed, all together. Do update soon. Eager to see how they work together to find the kids!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a place to end yaar. Please do update soon. Loved Raman's musings.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome twist in the story loving it please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update...my fav part ws he wishin for Ishu n JKR to be one person...loved the way u wrote tht part n ending is such a suspense one...plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it!

Cant wait for them to deal with this together.

so he will finally know she is is JKR ;)