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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pooja102

superb

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
I will upload the last half as soon as I can, hopefully within two hours:).

Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Akorshi

amazing story...
read all parts...
khushi gonna take revenge...
aryan baby love him...
update soon...

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
She is taking her revenge, doing her good. Even I, because it is tough punishing someone.
Awee, I am so happy that you love Aryan.
I will upload the last half as soon as I can, hopefully within two hours:).

Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
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Hello guys, my friend's mother is better now, thanks a lot, please keep praying for her.

Raat ke 12 baaj rahe hain, I am watching Roy and definitely posting the part for you is much more entertaining and heart-filling. <3

Seriously, guys, thanks a lot for appreciating this story and liking/loving Khushi's character, personally I just love Khushi with every update, how can I love my character so much? maybe because each time, I put a part of myself in the characterization.And now another in the list is going to be Aryan.

You guys made my day, four pages comments and almost 70  likes, I knew you guys can do. We should retain this or much more, if you guys are up for it, are you? :)

As I told previously too, whenever I update a part, I am really nervous but whoever comments and likes make my day brighter. I do forget my problems and tensions when I see my work getting appreciated so, it is a request guys, if you like and appreciate my work please express it, by pressing like or/and even better, leaving me a comment along as well as share the link with you friends. Trust me, when I say it means a lot, we, writers do live on your feedback. I sincerely hope likes and comments will increase, please don't let me down. 

NEXT PART TONIGHT OR TOMORROW FIRST THING ;)

-FFs going on Arhi: 
New FF- Bleeding Heart-Chapter2BPage6(01/01/15)

Keep showering me with your love guys.

Regarding PMs, unfortunately, I won't be sending, you need to follow either my twitter page https://twitter.com/KashishWriting 
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Loads of Love <333
Kashish

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Posted: 15 February 2015 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
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- I have added everybody, who liked and commented since last 2-3 months, I shall be cleaning it once in a while. See, it is logical, if I send out around 692 PMs, I need almost 450-500 people's response, it is fair right?  So please, cooperate with me.
-PMs shall be sent once in a week, mainly the weekend.
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My mother's friend is better now, thank you immensely, but please keep praying her until she is fully fine.

Just started another story, that I will continue only if good response. 
(I will reply to all the comments tomorrow, Inshallah.)

CHAPTER 6-B: Not What it seemed 


Whilst at the other side, Arnav came out of the room and went in the hall, his feet halted as he saw all the people present there. "Hello, you all here?" He was surprised.

"What is going on?" Arnav demanded as all of them settled in the lounge.

He sat there gazing at the familiar faces, looking at them after years. NK, Lavanya, Shashi, Garima, Madhumati. Half of the people he was expecting to see soon but not NK and Lavanya.

While, Payal sat meekly at the corner of couch and Akash was holding her hand reassuringly. Although her way was wrong, but he could not stay angry with her anymore.

Silent resided in the house, since no one was speaking and Arnav was growing impatient. He had solely reserved all his patience for Khushi and Aryan. But, now, people in this hall were getting on his nerves.

He had been unaware till date as how silence could be a weapon to destroy someone, it indeed was one, because their silence was edging out his angry self, the one he didn't want anyone to become a target.

After the mishaps of his life, he had taken a pledge to reign over his anger, to think before act and strangerly, his vow, was being kept in test. Khushi. He sighed, controlling his anger.

Anger Management Class. He made a note in his mind. I should definitely consult one when financial situation gets stable.

"I am repeating. What is going on?" He said, keeping his tone in control but with stern tone. Going on right track was never promised to be easy.

"Nanav, that night, five years back, I had taken Khushi with me," NK had the courtesy to end his cousin's wait.

"But you had been away, then how?" Arnav was confused, his brows narrowed.

"I was coming back that day, I had informed Payal Bhabhi and wanted to keep it under wraps, since I didn't want to turn up at an empty house. I was planning to surprise you all. You know how I am. But I got a surprise." He shrugged, then, "It was Payal Bhabhi, who had called me to come urgently. She pleaded me to take Khushi away and never let any information of her reach the mansion, nor tell anyone that it was her who told me this, not even Khushi. I didn't understand much but I had obeyed." He took a painful sigh, "when I arrived at Raizada mansion, I had been stunned to see her state. She was... in a horrible state. She was lifeless. I had ushered her to hospital. Doctor had declared, it to be a miracle, had she been a few minutes late, forget about her baby, even she would not have been alive."

Arnav's tears rolled freely. He wanted to keep his anger under control but he didn't want to control his softer emotions. It had been long since he gave a free flow to them.

"Khushi told me everything. She told me, she wanted to go away, start over her life with her baby. I agreed. I wanted to see her happy. I took her to Australia with me." NK said.

He didn't know what gratification was until that moment, he felt gratitude toward NK, more than he would be able to express. "I don't know how to thank you," Arnav said.

"And you don't need to, because I did nothing for you, I did it for my friend, who had been nothing but amazing to everyone in this house,"  NK said nonchalantly.

"I know. But still, for all its worth,  I want to thank you, thank you," He said it.

NK shrugged. 

"Arnav, I don't think any of us can forgive you for this. When you broke our engagement, truth be told, I was broken and hurt. It took me a while to move on, or rather it took me NK to forget you. The day we got married was the best day. You don't mean even an ounce to me now. But, what the Raizada family has done to Khushi is unforgivable. I still remember seeing her about fouryears back, she was broken, the only person who kept her living was her baby," Lavanya said her share of heart. Arnav's heart pained, it ached deeply.

"True. If we are here, it is because Khushi wants us to get our share of respect." Shashi spoke. He had been operated and was back to life. 

"You all troubled her a lot," Madhumati said.

Garima moved toward Payal, she said, "Although, you intention were not wrong but what you did resulted in something bad. But I am a mother, your mother, I can't hate you. Although, I expected you to have supported her that day instead." She patted her cheek.

"I thought about it Amma, but I could not, I was a coward. I wanted to keep Khushi away but at the same time, my own pregnancy weakened me. I have been so wrong," She flung her arms around her mother and wept. Shedding off the strong pretense, she had been carrying on since long.

Garima said and calmed her down.

"I know, no one us deserve forgiveness, but Khushi and Aryan deserve repentance from me. Because, that is the only thing that I will be allowed. I just wish, if there is something as afterlife or another life, that I will be a better human, because in this lifetime, I have failed badly." Arnav said, with remorse.

NK placed a hand on his shoulder, knowing well the way Arnav had chosen was far from being the easy one.

"We want food." Aryan clicked his fork and and knife on the table and the other three children joined him, while giggling.

Shivani had seen Anjali missing but Nani had clearly handled her.

Aryan had been nothing but a package of energy, delighted when he got to know his friend uncle was here along his own family. Khushi had rewarded them with her honest smile.

Arnav smiled seeing his son. He knew he could not be a part of his life, but he could admire him from a safe distance. Although, he missed his sister, but she was the one to make own choice and he had made his decision. He would stand by it, even over his dead body.

"Coming, coming," Payal said, bringing the breakfast along the servants.

Payal looked freshened yet guilt evident on her face. Akash had forgiven her, but she was not able, because whenever she saw Khushi, whenever she saw Aryan, she heard her heart breaking a little. This regret, this guilt, this misery, would be for a lifetime.

Khushi ate and fed Aryan. "Not bad, you have learned in the last month," Khushi smirked. She had a talk in the morning with Lavanya, her friend, who had supported her at every step. She had been informed about the last night's event. But, she could not forgive Payal, she may soften but no... nothing could be enough reason to forgive her. She may not burden Payal with house-chores but nor will she forgive her. Now, she knew her not forgiven her would matter to her and she would take satisfaction  in that.

Had her baby be fit and fine, she would have forgiven her in a blink but not when it came to her son. She had not forced anyone from her family to hate Payal, she was not a ruler, but herself, she would not be able to. She was a mother.

"Hello Hi bye bye ji, please get done with breakfast soon and get started with cleaning soon," Khushi ordered her and Mami nodded like a scared cat.

"Hello hi bye bye," Aryan laughed repeating those words. "Ma, she must be a funny person."

"Very indeed," Khushi agreed, eyeing Mami from top to bottom. "By that way, Mrs Raizada, I have uploaded a short version of your video on YouTube and my God, what a response, already 2,000 views." Khushi said tongue-in-cheek.

Nani flushed, red color appeared her face, she was deeply embarrassed.

"Wow, Ma, we will earn more money." Aryan said excitingly. "I wish, I could see." He said with an air of sadness.

Khushi fist her grip and clenched her jaw, she gave the dirtiest look ever to Arnav, who squirmed in his seat uncomfortable. No matter what others have done, it was him who threw her away.

Ignoring her animosity, she hugged her baby. "You are still the best. Tell me which dish is this?" She asked him, in her cheerful voice. She put the piece of food in front of his nose.

"Alu Paratha." He squealed.

"Exactly," She fed him and he was relaxed. Her worried nerves relaxed.

"Where is Buddy?" He asked her.

"He must be on his way." She continued to feed him.

Manorama stood up and went to grab the mop. Khushi loved the sight. Now nothing stopped her from taking snaps of her. "Mrs Manorama, your kitty party friend would love to see this pictures," Khushi teased her and Manorama was embarrassed, distressed.

"Ka. Hamari ijat ka falooda nikal dogi, hello, hi, bye, bye."

"That is the point." Khushi winked at her and joined her son.

"Good morning everyone," Aman was smiling widely. "Morning champ," He kissed Aryan, who giggled and hugged him.

"Looking fresh as dew," Khushi complimented him and along that hugged him. 

"What to do, when I have to impress a lady around me," He winked at her.

Arnav's breath hitched, he almost chocked on his food.

"Unfortunately, you will fall as usual," She laughed freely. "Because, at the very first meeting, you had impressed me as my brother."

"My bad luck," Aman made a dramatic sigh, making her giggle.

Thank God. Arnav released the breath that he didn't know he was holding.

"Mr Raizada, time to go to office." She ordered and they left to office, while Arnav resumed his duty as driver. She left Aryan with her parents.

In the car, she received a call, "Hello, any progress Dr Smith?" She asked him.

As she ended the call, she looked defeated. Arnav wanted to ask her, but he didn't know he had any right.

"What happened Khushi?" Aman asked him, sitting next to her.

"He is saying, there is still no remedy for Aryan's eye surgery." She said, as her eyes tore.

"He will be fine, I have full faith," He side hugged her.

Arnav's heart cried and bled for her, his view blurred, as his own tears had streamed down.

As they stepped out of the car, Khushi had covered her sadness with her angry mood toward her. "Your duty today, is to be a service for anyone in this parking, show them the way out, help them to a parking spot and everything," She commanded and left with Aman.

"Whatever you give someone, comes back to you eventually," He was feeling that, but more than humiliation, or anger, he was feeling her pain. The pain she went through.

As if God was on her side, on a perfect sunny day, rain started and soon he was drenched from head to toe, shivering in cold.

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So how did you like this?
Do you love Aryan?
Payal is not forgiven, because what she did impacted on Aryan.
What is your take on Arnav, now?

Please press like, leave your comments and share the link with your friends as it means a lot to me.
If you have any little bit mean suggestions for Khushi to take revenge from Arnav and family, please drop in, I will definitely try to work on them. 
I am so happy we reached the target, I am uploading as said. I am so overwhelmed. Lets keep the same target, since I know the potential of Arshi fans. I need at least four pages comments and more than 70 likes, I know you people can do even more than this :). Next half 3-4 days, hopefully.

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It was very short, but very heart felt. Khushi is making Arnav do the same thing that Arnav made her do. Probably Khushi will save Arnav like last time.  Can we have Aryan interacting with his cousins next time. I want to know what they are like. 

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I liked this short and sweet update. Gives me a lot more clue on Khushi's plan. 

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heart felt and emotional.

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