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MiniFF- Revenge Time-Ch9B/Th2Pg152| COMPLETED | (23/03/15) (Page 43)

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zebali

Love love love the best update.
Khushi such a wise intelligent box.
Now she was to much and enough strong.
How she insulted the pal.
But inside khushi knows that pal is innocent.
Shamu creep such a crocodile r chum line .
How he become angry when anji called him.
Sham gonna lick to khushi foot.
Ready to sleep servent room and at pool side to..
Khushi suggested Arnav he I'll do her rotein work.he was now ready to Woo her back.
Arnav and pal taunt and Argo was v prestigious.
Both blamed each other.
U left her because of anji I left her bcoz of akash.
OMG OMG loved the ans of pa.
Slap scene was bravo.
But now Arnav crazily gonna busy to woo her ledy love back.
He knows and confemled that sham Cheeto not khushi.
TFS.

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.

Five years away is a long time. The time had made her wise intelligent box. She has emerge out as someone strong.

No one is actually innocent at Raizada, even in their unconscious they have done so wrong, haven't they?

Shyam is truly a creep, a snake growing on their money and now ready to bite them. He will do anything for Khushi, since now she has everything that he wants. She is Khushi and rich.

Well, he has a long way to go, longer than he imagines.

It was really a much needed scene, where he would have learn the truth. Payal, even if wrong, she had managed to show him mirror in her taunts. But it doesn't change, she was wrong and she will have to serve her punishment.

That is what happens in reality, how the person who is supposed to protect his wife, end up making her laughing stock, give the family the right to insult her. Thats what happened here, Arnav had insulted her himself and Akash took the liberty to do as well. Now that Arnav got back his mind, he wants to correct the wrong. The first was the slap.

I will upload next half as soon as I can, hopefully within few hours :).

Loads of love,
Kashish

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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Yellow.

grr payal she is not even guilty for her deedsAngry hate her. 
awesome update

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
I could not make her feel guilty yet, had she been guilty, the face off would not have been this intense. She is still needed for the coming track.

Loads of love,
Kashish
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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gowri_19

superb update

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.

Loads of love,
Kashish
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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ariyazaveri

Really,it was an awesome update .plz Make every one suffer for what they did to khushi specially payal , naniji ,manorama,arnav.really loved the strong character of khushi.and yes plz do extent the story in 8-10 parts.i really love this story very much.update next part soon eagerly waiting to know what will happen in this one month

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
They will, I am looking forward when Nani would have to praise her :p sometimes such innocent tasks can be heart filling.
Mami and Payal would serve their dues too, that too fully.
I have extended this story to 8-10 parts :)
I will upload next half as soon as I can, hopefully within few hours :).

Loads of love,
Kashish
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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sasir

nice
today i hate payal equal to that shyam
i knw arnav is at fault too
but he is guilty but payal was not

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
Raizadas deserve hatred. 
I will upload next half as soon as I can, hopefully within few hours :).

Loads of love,
Kashish
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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by candyjan

Amazing dear

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.

Loads of love,
Kashish
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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by renee.bee

Rofl seeing khushi giving out orders.
best was the jalebi part tht if khushi hd tasted those before she wudnt love jalebis.

Bt let khushi nt touch the snake he may get pleasure in tht ewww. 
She made him awake to watch on arnav 
I wonder why anjali got no punishment except separation frm her shyamji.

Why does Arnav still run after anjali n even payal is a gold digger thn khushi so why did he nt tell her for lying to the family. 

I want more punishment to anjali mami payal.
Snake shud b given more menial tasks n put him behind bars.

Pls extend this more even 10 chps nt enough for wht khushi went thru.
I want khushi to throw every insult n hurt bck to Arnav snake n guptas shud suffer too they also humiliated khushi no less thn Arnav n Raizadas. 

You are writer so you recreate every situation where khushi insults them bck like they did to her.

Wasnt khushi pregnant when arnav pushed her n payal betrayed khushi coz she ws pregnant n chose akash over khushi so make akash hate payal even for a few dys let her experience how it feels.

Make arnav chose khushi over anjali tht wud hit her the most.



Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.

Khushi has changed tremendously. She knows what she wants and also know how to get it. This is important for him to believe her and do everything blindly.

Anjali was the one who told Arnav that Khushi might not be wrong, although after she was thrown away, Anjali got back with her husband. Khushi is just taking her revenge accordingly to their behavior with her. 

Regarding Payal, Arnav doesn't find him in the place to do anything with her now, since he knows khushi would manage her and he also knows that Akash will manage his wife.

They will be punished thoroughly, just wait and watch.

I will try to handle the story within ten parts, I don't want the story to lose its essence by dragging it.

I will try my best to create such situations. ;)

I will upload next half as soon as I can, hopefully within few hours :).

Loads of love,
Kashish
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Posted: 28 January 2015 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shalini_s

rock and roll Khushi... loved it..

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.

Loads of love,
Kashish

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