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MiniFF- Revenge Time-Ch9B/Th2Pg152| COMPLETED | (23/03/15) (Page 35)

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 3:57am | IP Logged
nice
today i hate payal equal to that shyam
i knw arnav is at fault too
but he is guilty but payal was not

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Amazing dear

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renee.bee IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Rofl seeing khushi giving out orders.
best was the jalebi part tht if khushi hd tasted those before she wudnt love jalebis.

Bt let khushi nt touch the snake he may get pleasure in tht ewww. 
She made him awake to watch on arnav 
I wonder why anjali got no punishment except separation frm her shyamji.

Why does Arnav still run after anjali n even payal is a gold digger thn khushi so why did he nt tell her for lying to the family. 

I want more punishment to anjali mami payal.
Snake shud b given more menial tasks n put him behind bars.

Pls extend this more even 10 chps nt enough for wht khushi went thru.
I want khushi to throw every insult n hurt bck to Arnav snake n guptas shud suffer too they also humiliated khushi no less thn Arnav n Raizadas. 

You are writer so you recreate every situation where khushi insults them bck like they did to her.

Wasnt khushi pregnant when arnav pushed her n payal betrayed khushi coz she ws pregnant n chose akash over khushi so make akash hate payal even for a few dys let her experience how it feels.

Make arnav chose khushi over anjali tht wud hit her the most.




Edited by renee.bee - 19 January 2015 at 7:18am

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 7:26am | IP Logged
rock and roll Khushi... loved it..

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Posted: 19 January 2015 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update 

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 4:35am | IP Logged
fantastic  Tongue

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Posted: 20 January 2015 at 6:35am | IP Logged
whoa...what is this...is this ipkknd or reversal ipkknd... the clock seems reversed ... interesting...have never read such a track...read in a go... I'm amazed that Payal did all the mudslinging and showed THE ASR the mirror...

pls continue soon Big smile

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Posted: 23 January 2015 at 5:18am | IP Logged
pls continue soon Big smile

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