CID Written Update 12/26/2014: Christmas Party

bluetides IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 1:26pm | IP Logged

Developing case ( solid 15 minutes) Shocked

A car stops in front of building and a lady with gun and gift gets out of car (She checks if gun is loaded after coming to destination - good planning Ermm) and enters a Christmas party hosted by couple. Lady of the house is not happy with her presense in party, her husband says his secretaory came to help in the party ( wakai?). While secretory is busy looking at all gifts bought by others ( Is she checking if all guests got gifts? kya koi free khana ke liya aayaLOL... acha help hai ), More guests come ( sister and brother in law of the Man of the house) and ask for little girl ( Pinky),who is busy playing with friends and waiting for Santa. Mother calls and her and Pinky answers back rudely ( joroor step mother hogi Tongue ). Mother (Anushka) starts crying and brother consoles her saying it's just been 4 months she married to Mukhesh ( dekha Tongue). Secretory is searching for a red color gift and finally finds it in a room ( vaise mehmaan se jyada gifts hai Wink ). Pinky follows her and unknowingly grabs same gift and proceeds to another room where someone attacks on her. Meanwhile two santas appear at the party where first one was not the Santa who was engaged and Anushka is tensed as duplicate Santa goes missing and Mukhesh is not at home due to some urgent meeting ( sounds fishy ). Now they realise Pinky is missing too and finds some blood and open cupboard in which Pinky is founds unconscious. Now guests follow blood strains and find traces until secret door and found dead body of secretory (suzane). Now CID is called.

CID begins now Confused

Daya, Sachin and Shreya examine body and concludes that she is killed by attack on back of her head and she was killed somewhere else and was bought here. Daya enquires about her and learns that she is secreatory of Mukhesh and Mukhesh is not at home and is not reachable. Anushka expresses her doubts on duplicate Santa and daya wonders where did this duplicate santa disappeared. Shreya checks belongigngs of Suzane and finds loaded gun in her bag. Daya, Sachin and Nikhil find shoe of the duplicate Santa. Daya finds some number in the shoe and asks Nikhil to check costume companies to find about the shoe. Shreya shows the gun and cops are stunned. Daya asks Shreya to trace Mukhesh phone. Pinky regains consciousness. Pinky reveals that Mukhesh scolded her and grabbed the red gift box from her. Then when someone else came to her room she hid herself in cupboard. She tells them she heard voices of a man and woman, but she doesn't remember what they talked and she fell unconscious. Daya soothes girl by saying "its Ok " and then a bye with very cute smile. Daya concludes that there is something very special about that gift box. ( hai kya is me? LOL)

Scene shifts to car scrap yard where a man ( Mukhesh?) is seen keeping that mysterious gift box in old car which had DON written on it's glass. Then someone attacks him and he falls off. Abhijeet, Purvi and a cop come to the costume rental shop and enquire about who took the Santa costume along with the shoe they got from Mukhesh house. Shop guy informs that a small artist named Uday took 2 costumes and provides address as well. Daya, Sachin, Shreya and Nikhil come to scrapyard by tracing Mukhesh number and find him unconscious in a car trunk. Abhijeet, Purvi and cop arrive at Uday house and enquires about the costumes. Uday shows his costume and gives the place where he had been today. Abhijeet asks about second costume to which Uday says his roommate Munna took it. Cops check Munnas belongings and find out that Munna is a thief , Munna's phone is not reachable and he changes his sims in nearby market shops ( CID team didn't even cross check or verify details told by Uday Shocked).

Mukhesh regains conscious in hospital and tells his story to cops as "A local don warned him and made him to smuggle diamonds. He got diamonds in that red gift box and he delivered diamonds to the don". Daya scolds him for not coming to CID. Further questioning by Shreya reveals that Mukhesh gave his gun to Suzane and asked her to search the box( Why? Ek box doondna kya bari kaam hai, Shockedalso why would anyone ask his secretory to search for diamond box? Thumbs Down). Sachin concludes that Munna is involved in this. Abhijeet, Purvi  and cop searvch market by showing Munna pic and Purvi finds fake id and current number. They trace him by new number and chasing begins. Abhijeet shoots at tire and slaps him tight. Munna reveals that he didn't kill anyone, he entered farm house for stealing, he found a watch and heard a lady arguing with a man and then ran away from there. Munna is taken into custody and watch is sent to forensic lab.

ACP sir, Daya, Sachin, Shreya and Nikhil enter forensic lab and Tarika confirms that the blood on watch belongs to Suzane. Salunkhe sir reveals 3 sets of fingerprints ( suzane, Munna and probably culprit). Dr Salunkhe concludes that the third unknown finger print is well above blood and looks the finger print came after blood spilled on watch.( Ajeeb hai Watch was with Munna for such a long time, he didn't wipe blood and finger prints are as is too Shocked). Daya concludes that culprit might be present in party itself ( This is obvious because, no one entered  house except for Munna Ermm) and ACP sir wants to throw another party in Mukhesh farm house( Waste of time, why don't they just take finger prints of the guests, BTW they should have taken it at initial investigation itself na Thumbs Down ). Freddy and Pankaj disguised as bearers serve drinks in party where Sachin, Daya, Nikhil, Shreya observe guests. Empty glasses were collected and finger prints are scanned by Santa Salunkhe sir and Santa Tarika( ye kaisa pata chalega kis finger print kis ka hai? Confused). Dr Salunke sir informs Daya who the culprit is through phone ( zara jaldi batana Daya, muse ab sona hai Sleepy ). After some drama and feircing glances Daya reveals that Sanjeev (brother in law of Mukhesh) is the culprit. Sanjeev grabs Anushka at gun point and tries to escape. He jumps off from terrace and lands on car. Nothing happens to car. Now Daya jumps off from terrace and lands on car, all mirrors are broken into pieces and small explosion happens at steering ( weight matters u see Wink, Now that I am ROFL, mera sone ka mood utar gaya LOL). Daya catches Sanjeev and confession begins in stand up only bureau.

Sanjeev reveals that he wanted to take revenge on Mukhesh as Mukhesh was not helping him though his debts. Sanjeev learned about the diamond deal and was caught by Suzane when he was trying to make a deal for diamonds with some don. He had to kill her because she threatened to reveal his face in front of all. Then he followed Mukhesh and attacked him to obtain diamonds. CID teams arrests him and Mukhesh surrenders himself for the smuggling he involved out of fear for life. Pinky is shown developing good bond with Anushka.   


Edited by bluetides - 28 December 2014 at 4:57am

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 2:55pm | IP Logged

Welcome to Most Brave Gang MAO...WinkEvil SmileHug
Lovely Attempt to make a Boring Epi atleast Good for Reading...ClapLOL
Shuker Tu nay Bhai ko keh diya kay Tujhy Neend aa rahi hay...WinkWink
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Khatam ho gaya...DancingROFL
Thank You so much...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 5:38pm | IP Logged
Thank you so very much for the update BT di StarClap.
Wonderful first attempt. 

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
Very nice WU di...ClapTongueStar
Thank u so much...SmileSmile

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thank you very much for wuClap
great 1st attemptThumbs Up

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Welcome to the amazing gang of patient viewers. LOL
A worthy debut! Clap

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Its lovely BT !! Congrats on debutClap..

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bluetides IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Thanks everyone Embarrassed
Brave gang Lolz LOL
Agar mera WU nahi hota toh mei sirf car scene dekhti...

Btw I liked the way they showed Pinky not adjusting with new mom very well.. Clap, dialogs between them could have been better though... I loved the way pinky changes topic to Santa when her father tries to talk Thumbs UpFelt very natural though sudden bonding at end is Confused But necessary Clap

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