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AbhiGya's New Drabble....Role Reversal (Page 2)

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sudanindia2014

Originally posted by bhanu_frn

Originally posted by sudanindia2014

Hi happy to be first to like and first to comment ..great great ...wanna see Abhi in this situation
write again please you have a talent Big smile

Oh Thank you for the encouragement sudanindia2014 (sorry, don't know your name)Embarrassed.. will try to write more..Smile


Sorry forget to write my name .. dazzled by your fab work I guessBig smile  Hi I'm Nuha .. saw you in the AT today but we did not talk .. welcome aboard

Hi Nuha, saw you too in AT... Glad to be part of this... Thank you.Smile

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhanu_frn

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">It's my very first attempt in writing in my lifeBlushing.. Inspired by our forum Parivaar and it's writers... I read lots of Mina's and Tia's... to them for this inspiration and to all the other writers i do not know by name.Its dedicated to all of you...Smile</font>
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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Role Reversal</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Pragya was trying to get Abhi's attention for past half hr.
he is ignoring her.</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Now her patience has reached its limit, she went to Abhi who
is talking to robin about the wedding preparations. She goes near him, takes
his hand by wrist and drags him to their bedroom.</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Abhi is stunned by this sudden change in herbehaviorshe
never did something like this. Hecouldn'tunderstand what's happening. He is
in shock and let her drag him to their room and to their closet.</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">She pushes his back to the closet and leans in to him
with one hand on his chest and other behind the closet door, with in an inch
gap between their faces and looks into his eyes.</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Abhi couldn't comprehend what's happening to him. he is in
trance, his breathing heavy. Her ebony eyes so clear, her soft beautiful lips
close to his. </font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">She looks so beautiful in white and aqua blue saree with
simple make up. She is wearing high heel which gave her the advantage in
height, courtesy of Andy.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">she spoke, her voice so soft, like music to his ears.</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Pragya looked into his eyes and said lovingly "kabse
aap ko bula rahi hu, aap sun nahi rahi."
(I was calling you for a long
time, you were not listening)</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Abhi couldn't respond but asks 'Why' with his eyes</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Kuy kya, agar mai ye baat abhi nahi batahyi to aap muje tang
karthe rahenga, aap ko pata hai kitni dar se soch rahi thi ye baat aap ko kisa
batayi par kitna bhi sochu koyi sahi tarika pata nahi chal raha. Isliya jise
tara muje samj aatha hai usi tara bataungi. Aap bas itna yaad rakhi ye ke kabhi
is baat pai muje nahi chidayenga.
(why?? if i dont say it now you will be
teasing me again, you know i was thinking about how to say this to you, I
thought for all the words but couldn't find the right one. so I will tell the
way I understand it. promise me that you will never tease me on this)</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Abhi could just nod his head in agreement he is not able to
understand what's happening between them and what chashmish is going to say or
do.</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Woh baat yeh hai ke, she muttered and is in dilemma as how he will react
to it (It's that...)</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Woh baat yeh hai ke, she says again but she can see that Abhi is starting to frown a little</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">She leans into him within half a breath of gap between their
lips and pulls something out of the closet</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Woh yeh tha ke aap pe yeh kurta bahuth acchi lag rahi ha aur
aap bahut handsome bhi lag rah hai ho.. par aap ke kurta side may phat gayi hai.
toh aap yeh dusri kurtha pahen lijiya na..
Saying that she handed him the other
one and went out of the closet and closed the door. (It's that, you look
handsome in this kurta but it has a slit to the side so please change into this
new one.)</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">Abhi was so lost in her touch and her closeness that he
didn'trealizewhat she said. He could just only look at the empty space before
him, breathing heavily and trying to calm his nerves and looks at the kurta
in his hand.</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">She felt so conscious of what she did, she did it because of
how Abhi makes her feel all the time coming closer to her, tempting her and going back as if nothing happened. She wanted to beat him in his own game. The look
abhi had on his face when she left was priceless. She thought it was worth it.</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">THE END</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="1">All kinds of comments, bad, good, worst, shoes, tomatoes, eggs all are welcomed.. Sorry for my hindi there will be lots of spell mistakes.</font>

this is really nice I like how she made him breathless now she is turning the table on him good for her, hope we get to read more from you
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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
Ooohh!!!Big smile... love it.Heart Pragya is so cute. Embarrassed
You should write more.

Keep rocking.Cool
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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
Awesome one Bhanu Dear
Loved the role reversal here.
do write more, would love to read more

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by CrazzyBusy

Awesome one Bhanu Dear
Loved the role reversal here.
do write more, would love to read more


Thanks Mariam... SmilePosted another one... check it outWink and comment plz.
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4266209
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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Haha love it Bhanu! Do write more!
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 9:11am | IP Logged
You truly have a talent dear I'm looking forward to more FFs , SSs and drabbles from you
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Loved it Bhanu darling...simply fantastic...it was good to see Abhi getting a dose of his own medicine...LOLYou go Prags!!!

Oh and loved the Drabble in the AT too...the iPad oneLOL...do post it here too...

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