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AbhiGya's New Drabble....Role Reversal

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
It's my very first attempt in writing in my lifeBlushing.. Inspired by our forum Parivaar and it's writers... I read lots of Mina's and Tia's... to them for this inspiration and to all the other writers i do not know by name.Its dedicated to all of you... Smile

Role Reversal

Pragya was trying to get Abhi's attention for past half hr. he is ignoring her.

Now her patience has reached its limit, she went to Abhi who is talking to robin about the wedding preparations. She goes near him, takes his hand by wrist and drags him to their bedroom.

Abhi is stunned by this sudden change in her behavior she never did something like this. He couldn't understand what's happening. He is in shock and let her drag him to their room and to their closet.

She pushes his back to the closet and leans in to him with one hand on his chest and other behind the closet door, with in an inch gap between their faces and looks into his eyes.

Abhi couldn't comprehend what's happening to him. he is in trance, his breathing heavy. Her ebony eyes so clear, her soft beautiful lips close to his.

She looks so beautiful in white and aqua blue saree with simple make up. She is wearing high heel which gave her the advantage in height, courtesy of Andy.

she spoke, her voice so soft, like music to his ears.

Pragya looked into his eyes and said lovingly "kabse aap ko bula rahi hu, aap sun nahi rahi." (I was calling you for a long time, you were not listening)

Abhi couldn't respond but asks 'Why' with his eyes

Kuy kya, agar mai ye baat abhi nahi batahyi to aap muje tang karthe rahenga, aap ko pata hai kitni dar se soch rahi thi ye baat aap ko kisa batayi par kitna bhi sochu koyi sahi tarika pata nahi chal raha. Isliya jise tara muje samj aatha hai usi tara bataungi. Aap bas itna yaad rakhi ye ke kabhi is baat pai muje nahi chidayenga. (why?? if i dont say it now you will be teasing me again, you know i was thinking about how to say this to you, I thought for all the words but couldn't find the right one. so I will tell the way I understand it. promise me that you will never tease me on this)

Abhi could just nod his head in agreement he is not able to understand what's happening between them and what chashmish is going to say or do.

Woh baat yeh hai ke, she muttered and is in dilemma as how he will react to it (It's that...)

Woh baat yeh hai ke, she says again but she can see that Abhi is starting to frown a little

She leans into him within half a breath of gap between their lips and pulls something out of the closet

Woh yeh tha ke aap pe yeh kurta bahuth acchi lag rahi ha aur aap bahut handsome bhi lag rah hai ho.. par aap ke kurta side may phat gayi hai. toh aap yeh dusri kurtha pahen lijiya na.. Saying that she handed him the other one and went out of the closet and closed the door. (It's that, you look handsome in this kurta but it has a slit to the side so please change into this new one.)

Abhi was so lost in her touch and her closeness that he didn't realize what she said. He could just only look at the empty space before him, breathing heavily and trying to calm his nerves and looks at the kurta in his hand.

She felt so conscious of what she did, she did it because of how Abhi makes her feel all the time coming closer to her, tempting her and going back as if nothing happened. She wanted to beat him in his own game. The look abhi had on his face when she left was priceless. She thought it was worth it.


THE END

All kinds of comments, bad, good, worst, shoes, tomatoes, eggs all are welcomed..  Sorry for my hindi there will be lots of spell mistakes.

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Hi happy to be first to like and first to comment ..great great ...wanna see Abhi in this situation
write again please you have a talent Big smile
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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
OMG OMG OMG AWESOME!!! well done bhanu!! loved the intensity of abhi being in pragya's position and totally frozen in surprise. and her lines were so great! and so cute that she just wants him to change. like how she couldn't tell him about the red day lipstick, but here she actually did speak up, and in such a fab way. LOVED it, do write more and often!!

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sudanindia2014

Hi happy to be first to like and first to comment ..great great ...wanna see Abhi in this situation
write again please you have a talent Big smile

Oh Thank you for the encouragement sudanindia2014 (sorry, don't know your name)Embarrassed.. will try to write more..Smile

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -mina-

OMG OMG OMG AWESOME!!! well done bhanu!! loved the intensity of abhi being in pragya's position and totally frozen in surprise. and her lines were so great! and so cute that she just wants him to change. like how she couldn't tell him about the red day lipstick, but here she actually did speak up, and in such a fab way. LOVED it, do write more and often!!

Thank you mina.. Smile will try to right more.

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
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Oh my!!! This is fab!! I loved it so much!! <333333
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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhanu_frn

Originally posted by sudanindia2014

Hi happy to be first to like and first to comment ..great great ...wanna see Abhi in this situation
write again please you have a talent Big smile

Oh Thank you for the encouragement sudanindia2014 (sorry, don't know your name)Embarrassed.. will try to write more..Smile


Sorry forget to write my name .. dazzled by your fab work I guessBig smile  Hi I'm Nuha .. saw you in the AT today but we did not talk .. welcome aboard

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