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Yaadein (AR-ARSH FF)imp note again - Page 2

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29priya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: ..ASR.lover..

nice 1...
do continue...



thnku...
vl cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: RihooHaws



<font color="#9900ff">u r most welcome...</font>
<font color="#9900ff">I m lookking forward for the first part...</font>
<font color="#9900ff">take care...</font>




hey thnku so much for the encouragement
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...
A new arsh ff...
Awesome start...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon...
And please pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice concept...i think here shilpa is a village type girl...continue soon ...pm me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow...

A new arsh ff...
Awesome start...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon...
And please pm me



hey thnku so much...
will surely pm u..
.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: lekshmiarsh93

Nice concept...i think here shilpa is a village type girl...continue soon ...pm me...





thnku so much...:)
sure
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting concept..! 
Looking forward to the update..! !
Thanx fo rpm.!
continue soon
29priya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
thnku so much for the awesome response...and special thnks to rihoohaws...

PART ONE
tring...tring...
tring...tring...
the guy sleepily opened his one eye with the loud ringtone of his mobile...and streched his arm to find his mibile...
on the other side...
guy2-(was fuming n said all this in one breath)abe saale kaha h bey...kabse call kar raha hu...aur tu ghore bech ke so raha h...main kabse se tujhse kuch puch raha hu...aur tu koi jawab hi nhi de raha h...
guy1-(in the sleepy tone)...kya kaam h tujhe...jo early morning mujhe pareshan kar raha h...
n then snuggled more with his partner n kissed her shoulder...
guy2-(while taking a deep breath n controling his anger)...are yaar aaaj meeting h hamari imp client ke saath ek ghante main n u r sleeping...
guy1-yaar chilll rahoool...itni tension kyu le raha h...everything is settled...I have checked everything and relax...I vl be there in half n hour...
and den he cut the call without waiting for his reply...
"ammy u should get up baby u have an imp meeting to attend n till den i will prepare the breakfast" the girl said while getting up from the bed n quickly wore his shirt which was lying around the corner...n threw the jeans at his face...
"lemme sleep some more ratz...and anyway u didnt let me sleep at night"..armaan said while pulling the blanket on his face...rats just opened her mouth to retort but knew there is no use...so she just pulled his blanket n warned him to gey ready fast...n after freshning up moved out of the room...            ...***********...
taxi driver- lo aa gaya aapka hostel
the girl n guy got down n paid the fare.

"sun maine sab arrange kar diya h...tu yahi rahegi kuch din...aur gar koi prob ho to call me...hmm"
thnku tulu...:).tu mere liye kitna kuch kar raha h...the girl looked down n wiped her tears...
are ye kya keh rhi h tu...ab main kya apni dost ke liye itna nhi kar sakta kya.
and then to lighten the atmosphere he said...'aur ye mujhe na tu tulu na bulaya kar...bht wierd lagta h'with fake anger...
she giggled and said...'acha to theek h...tu mujhe golu na bulaya kar...shilpa bulaya kar...fir main vi tujhe atul bulaungi'...while pointing her finger at him...
acha ji aisa h...
haan aisa hi h...
then they both laughed...
aur tu hamesha aise hi haste rahe...
shilpa smiled n asked...'tu kaha rahega atul'
dekh tu meri chinta na kar...main yaha boys pg main rehta hu...aur yaha mujhe choti job vi mil gayi h...aur jaise hi free hota hu tujhe call karunga...
avi tu andar jaa aur warden se mil lena...wo tujhe room dikha degi...theek h...
..
shec went inside the building...
n an old lady asked her if she is shilpa...shipoanodded her head went inside with her...the lady was walkink in front of her n telling her the rules n regulations while walking ahead of her and then stopped in front of a room...n told her to go inside said she vl be sharing the room with one more girl..
shilpa just nodded her head n the lady scruitinized her from top to bottom n left...shilpa opened her room n was left scandalized n shocked...
to be continued...

i seriously dont know what i have written...i have written whatever came to my mind...hope i have not written any rubbish...
uhhhmm...so yeah whaterver it is...here is the first part...hope it is worth reading...
suggestion n criticism all r welcome...if there is any queries u can clear with me...i would love to answer u all...
n last thnku all for giving ur precious time to read dis...

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Posted: 9 years ago
One more ARSH FF thanks yaar .
Great updates nice start
Plz update soon nd do pm me plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...continue soon...plzzz dont take sooo much time for next update...