Yaadein (AR-ARSH FF)imp note again

hey guyz...hi m priya...
m a silent reader for most of the ffs...
m a huge arsh fan...so want to write a fic on them...this is my very first attempt on writing...i hope u all liked it...criticism n suggestion all r welcome if at all u guys want me to continue...
so here is the prologue...

we see a very crowded station...that is of mumbai...n a girl is shown claded in a simple salwar kameez with the braided hair...n wearing specs. waiting outside the station...c is checking the time again n again n looking very nervous as if waiting for someone...n just den we hear a voice of a guy...
guy-golu chal hume taxi mil gayye...
girl-hmmm
then he takes the luggage n sat in the taxi...
girl- kya hum mahi di ke ghar ja rahe hain...
guy- nhi hum pehle tujhe hostel chorenge...fir jayenge...
the girl was looking at the view and just praying to get back her maahi di...
n on the other side...
a big bunglow is shown...n a master room...where a guy is sleeping...half naked...on his front...with his arms on a half naked girl...

so yeah...here i finish my prologue..
i know it was v boring...bt it was my first attempt...hope to make the further updates interesting...if at all u guyzzz want me to continue...thnku...will be waititing for the response...
n yeah its a romantic fic...with little bit of twist...


CHARACTERS

SHILPA
Edited by pri.29793 - 8 years ago

INDEX
Part one and part two https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117766759
part 3

https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4266073&PID=118250665&#p118250665
part 4
https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4266073&TPN=6&#p118457021
part five
https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4266073&PID=118524616&#p118524616
part six
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119238099
part seven
https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4266073&PID=119508290&#p119508290
part eight
https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4266073&TPN=12
part 9
https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4266073&PID=120583018&#p120583018 Edited by pri.29793 - 8 years ago

Interesting starting... Edited by RihooHaws - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

<font color="#9900ff">Interesting starting...</font>

<font color="#9900ff">I m looking forward...</font>

<font color="#9900ff">Continue super soon...</font>

<font color="#9900ff">take care...</font>

hey thnku so much...

Originally posted by: priyanki

hey thnku so much...

a very intresting concept plz do cont soon

interesting hai continue karoo :)

nice 1...
do continue...

Originally posted by: harshiakshi

a very intresting concept plz do cont soon

thnks a lot...

Originally posted by: Laddoo.Phaddoo

interesting hai continue karoo :)

thnku :)