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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Hey Guys !! 


Here I tried an OS on our current track of Office... As all of us feel, it is highly mokkai nowadays... So I thought of writing an OS... Please read and share your feedback! 


"Thank You Madam, for your assistance throughout this process... " Karthik says with a dull face to the divorce lawyer that has been handling his and Raji's official separation case. 

"I am sorry Karthik. Enakku enna solradhu nnu theriyala... Raji ah visarichen nnu sollunga... Ivalo perfect couple ah irundhu... Ippo romba kashtam ah irukku... Anyways, I did my job... Good Luck for your future Karthik." The lawyer sighs these words. 

"Thanks madam. Naan indha documents Raji kitta kuduthuduren... Apparom idhukku mela formalities irukka?"

Karthik gets on his bike while talking. 

"Nothing Karthik... Naan apparom ah Raji kitta phone la pesuraen... Take Care..." 

He nods saying okay and gives a tight smile, as he reverses the bike and leaves. 

At KR's home where Raji is sitting on the bed reading a book... 

Karthik comes searching for her, and opens the room to see Raji on the bed... Karthik stands there for a while, but Raji doesn't notice... Or pretends as if she doesn't know that he is here... Without option, Karthik clears his throat to initiate the conversation, and finally she looks up. 

"Adhu vandhu... Lawyer office kku poi irundhen... Uh she gave me the official papers..." 

Raji's eyes widens in shock. "Enna solra? Ava en kitta onnume sollala?" 

Karthik stammers... "Adhu av- avanga dhaan rendu perukkum ore time la indha papers kuduka vendaam nnu nenaichaanga..." 

Karthik turns around for a split second and wipes his eyes... Then turns back and walks towards her to hand the papers... Raji looks up at his face... The grief, shock, disbelief within her pools her eyes. Karthik firmly closes his eyes for seconds, then took a deep breath, and held the papers out to Raji... Just as she raised her shaking hands, her fingers swiftly brushed upon Karthik's while receiving the papers... Both look into each other's eyes, with love, and grief that they will not be together again. Tears started rolling down her cheeks... 

"Kolladhe di... Kashtam ah irukku... Ennaiyum aluga vachudaadhe... Pch..." his heart talks within him, yearning to talk to Raji... 

He turns and starts walking out the room... 

Raji thinks, "Karthik enna paaru Karthik... Please da... Karthik please... " 

Karthik spins without a second thought as if her words rang in his head... As if God heard her wish... Both lock their eyes... Karthik asks, by merely just a whisper... 

"Kooptiyaa?" Raji shakes her head saying no... He sighs and starts walking... 

This time, Raji calls him... "Karthik..." 

Just as the first time, Karthik turns around with hope... 

"Hmm?" 

"Avalodhaana Karthik?" She asks with a heartful of pain... 

He couldn't bear hearing those words from her... A tear falls from his eyes... 

"Raji ennaku nee venum... Nee illama Karthik illa... Mudiyala di... Raji eppayum Karthik kku venum..." His heart screamed... But he couldn't utter those words... Something stopped him... 

Without making a sound... He walked out the room, out the house... Took his bike and started riding in high speed, while trying hard to hold his tears... Soon, he parked his car on Besant Nagar Beach... After a while, he makes a call... 

"Vishnu... Nee konjam Besant Nagar Beach kku variyaa?" Asks in a tedious tone... 

Vishnu suspects something is wrong... But doesn't show that and responds, "Varen daa.. Adyar la dhaan irukken... Innum ten minutes la anga iruppen... "

Karthik... "Thanks da..." 

Raji at home... Starts sobbing... Talks to herself... 

"Karthik naan unna ippo piriyuradhu sandhosham dhaane? Ippo vaadhu ennoda torture illama nimadhiyaa vazhu... Ippo kudiyum enkitta pesa pudikala la? I don't know how I feel... Appadiye oru kathi eduthu kuthura maadhiri eh irukku... It hurts... I am hurt... My feelings and my heart is hurt... " 

She lifts a pillow, and starts sobbing in it... Meanwhile... Vishnu comes to Karthik... 

"Machaan... Ennada aachu? Un voice eh phone la seri illa?" Vishnu asks Karthik with concern.

"Vishnu... Inimel Raji ennaku kediyaadhu daa..." Karthik starts crying... 

"Ennada solrae? Correct ah solludaa..."

"Lawyer official divorce papers kuduthutaanga daa..." 

Vishnu.. "Dei alugaadha daa... Kashtam ah irukku la... " 

He goes to Karthik and hugs him tightly... With affection and support to his best friend... 

"Vishnu mudiyala daa... Raji illama naan eppadi daa? Naragam ah ippo ve irukku daa... Onnume oda maatengudhu daa... Full ah Raji Raji Raji nnu dhaan manasu la ketkudhu..." Karthik pours out to Vishnu with misery... 

Vishnu feels despaired and he wipes his tears on the backside for Karthik, while hugging him...

Trying to be strong, "Dei Karthi dei... Modhala aluguradha niruthu daa... Nidhanama enna pannuradhu nnu yosipom..." 

"Vishnu... Sethudalaam pola irukku daa... Inga irundhu... Raji illama konjam konjam ah saaguradhu kku... Ore dhadiyaa poi sernthuralaam... " Karthik says with deep anguish...

Vishnu gets shocked, and without knowing how to express it, he pushes away Karthik... 

"Poda po... Adho anga paaru kadal... Anga poi vilundhu saavu... Ennaku enna vandhuchu? Pesuraan paaru pechu... Dei ennada nenaichuttu irukke un manasula? Periyaa thiyaagi ivaru... Appadiye wife kaaga uyir ah viduraaru... Idho idhe edathula unnakku oru sellai panna solren... Innum ennada pannitu irukke? Poda po... " Vishnu cries... 

Karthik... "Sorry daa... Edho solla poi naan paatukku olaren... Nee irukka varaikkum indha Karthik iruppaan..." 

Vishnu hugs Karthik again... "Manichudu daa... Nee appadi pesinadhu manasu ketkala..."

Karthik and Vishnu talk for sometime, and finally Karthik comes to a decision... 

"Vishnu... New York la resource thevai nnu Vishwanathan Sir sonnarula? I am going to take that offer da... Temporary client dhaan... Project oru one year... Poittu vandhaa mind relaxed and fresh ah irukkum... Ingaye irundhen naa... Raji ah paarka mudiyaama paarthu sethuduveno nnu bayam ah irukku..." he says with a clearness in his voice after a long time... 

Vishnu thinks a while then says, "Correct dhaan da... Nee poiyuttu vaa... Oru change ah irukkum... Naan idhukku arrange pannuren... Flight ticket two days la unkitta irukkum... Indha saturday nee depart pannura maadhiri paarthukuren..." 

"Thanks da... Naan ennoda documents laam naalaikku Office la tharen... " 

Vishnu nods... Then both leave to their homes... 

Next day at work, Karthik walks past Vishnu after giving him the documents, and Raji comes to Vishnu right after Karthik left... 

"Vishnu... En Karthik nethiku veetula documents, baggage laam ready pannitu irundhaan?" Raji asks with confusion...

"Adhuvaa Raji... Oru change ah irukattum... Divorce kku apparom avanukku oru change venum nnu kettan... Adhaan New York la resource thevai la... Anga one year polaam nnu..." 

Raji's eyes fill with tears... She cries and says... 

"Enna vittu forever poganum nnu mudivu pannitaan la? Appo naanum poraen... Avanoda illa.. Mela poraen... Eppadi Karthik illama naan irukka mudiyum?" 

Vishnu slightly smiles... "Nethu enkitta vandhu idhe dhaan avanum sonnaan... Unga rendu perukkum dhaan oruthar oruthar venum la? Apparom enna Raji?"

She stammers... "Adh- Adhu theriyaadhu Vishnu... Karthik ah paarkama laam ennala irukka mudiyaadhu... En uyir ah engayo enna vittu poradhu kku... Naan mothama poiduven..."

"Pesama irunga Raji... Indha maadhiri laam pesaadhinga... Kashtam ah irukku... Neenga venum naa one year Kovilpetti kku ponga... Appa kuda... Apparom family oda irundhuttu vaanga nga."

"Hmm... Yosikuren Vishnu... Maybe that is a good idea... Amaa... Karthik ah vittu pirinju irukkura vali avalovaa theriyaadhu appo dhaan... " She thinks and walks to her cabin... 

Both Karthik and Raji don't talk at all that week... They felt too guilty to even see each other in the eyes... There was a prevailing silence present, which made both feel a lot of pain in being separated... But neither wanted to talk... 

On Saturday... Karthik boards the flight, and Vishnu leaves after sending him off...

Raji ponders upon Karthik's departure... She talks inside herself with much agony... 

"En Karthik? Appadi enna naan thappu panniten? En manasu en kitta illa Karthik... Kashtam nnu sollitaa adhu romba chinna vaarthai... Ennoda feelings ah explain panna... Enna vittu eppadi poganum nnu unnaku thonichu daa? Mudiyala Karthik... Full ah aludhutaa apparom better ah irukkum nnu nenaichen... Nethikku full ah aludhen... Night full ah aludhen... Ippiyum aluguren... Appadiyum tears vandhutte irukku da... En uyir ah nee eduthutu pora daa... "

"Alaadha Raji please... Pl--" Karthik talks inside himself...

"Excuse me sir... Would you like any drinks right now?" the Air Hostess asked... 

Karthik wakes up from sleep... 

"No thanks... " He replies... 

"Cha... It was a dream... Raji unna vittutu eppadi irukka poraen nnu theriyala di... Enga paarthalum nee theriyura..." 

Raji thinks... "Munnadi ellam Karthik naa enna nenaichaalum correct ah solliduvaan... Ippaiyum avanala kandu pudika mudiyumaa? En Karthik kku theriyumaa? Naan avana pathiye nenaikkuradhu?" 


Yes. Karthik did hear Raji... Even though they were miles away from each other... Telepathy... Works perfectly for these soulmates... But this time Karthik thought it was a dream... 


After twenty-four hours, finally Karthik reached his hotel. He received his room key and walks to his room... 

"Ennamo theriyala... Raji nenaipaave irukku... Ava en pakathula iruka maadhiri eh irukku... Anaa... Ava eppodhum ennoda dhaan irukka... Eppaiyum iruppa... After all... Ennoda uyir ava dhaane... Ava illama naan eppadi?" Karthik smiles thinking about his Raji... 

Finally he reached his hotel room... Opens the door... Leaves all his baggage near a table... Just as he was about to head to the restroom to freshen up... He turns around... And...

Karthik couldn't believe his eyes... He rubbed his eyes to make sure that what he saw was really true... His face was dumbstruck with all emotions at the same time. After a few seconds, he came out of the trance...

"Ra- ..." He was interrupted...

"Niruthu Karthik... I am done with you... Endaa... Kadaisiyaa oru Goodbye kudiyum sollanum nnu thonalai la? Naan avalo vendaadhavala poiyutten ah? Un kooda ivalo naal vazhndhadhu kaavadhu sollitu poi irukkanum la... Nee inga dhaan varen nnu therinjum... I was restless... Idiot... Unakaaga oruthi uyiroda irukka nnu nyabagam irukkaa unnaku?"

Karthik starts smiling... His cute smile... Now he is the person, only person who is ruling the world... His Raji... He is speechless... And eccentrically elated... 

"Sirikaadhe da... Unakku dhaan naan thevai illaiye... Apparom en divorce papers envelope la dairy milk vachu irundhe? Huh? Enna veruthute la? Anaa--"

Karthik says... "Ra--" He is interrupted again... 

"Shh... Naan first pesi mudichuduren... Adhaan... Inimel iva vendaam nnu dhaane inga varadhukku mudivu pannina? -- Sirikaadhe korangu..."

Karthik tries hard to not smile... 

"Anaa naan unna verukala... Unna ennaku pudikum Karthik... Unna mattum dhaan pudikum... Ippo open ah solren... I Love You... Only you... Forever you... Raji oda uyir Karthik kitta dhaan irukku... Adhu illama naragam... Mudiyala Karthik... Indha six months unna pirinju eppadi irundhen nne puriyala... Idhukku mela nee illai naa paithiyam pudichudum... I will die... Avalodhaan... I love u Karthik... "

Raji starts crying...She cries with all her heart... She pours her anguish right there... 

"Chup... Stop crying..." Karthik yells at her in a demanding voice... 

Raji gets startled by his command, and sobbed silently while looking at Karthik... Then...

Karthik starts giggling hard... Raji looks at him with a frown and scrunched eyebrows, with really cute and innocent face... 

Karthik slowly stops... Grins at her and extends his arms... Raji sees what he did and blinks slowly... In shock and confusion... Then it all came to her... 

Raji giggled and jumped from the bed and into Karthik's arms... She hugged him tightly as if she will never let go of him anymore... Karthik did the same, with his cute smile... 

"I love you my sweetheart Raji..." said Karthik with such pleasure and a fulfilled heart... 

"Me too..." Raji blushed... 

"But seriously... I am really sorry Raji... Naan neriyaa sodhapi irukken... Enna manichudu..."

"Naanum dhaan Karthik... At least... We can lead a new life together... Never too late... "

Karthik giggles at her comment. 

Soon both got ready to go see the Manhattan of New York... Karthik called for a taxi... In the waiting time...

Raji opens up the divorce papers envelope and takes out the dairy milk... Both share the chocolate and have fun eating it. Karthik rips the envelope and throws it away in the trash... 

"Sari Raji... Nee eppadi inga vandha? Nee kovilpetti poga porae nnu Vishnu sonnan?"

"Adhu oru periya flashback... Short ah solren... Adhu nee kelamburadhu kku before night, unakku flight la edho aaiyuduchu nnu dream vandhuchu... Apparom Vishnu kku phone panni sonnen... Karthik ah poga vidaadheenga nnu aludhen... Unna apparom paarkavae mudiyadha maadhiri aaiyuda kudaadhu nnu sonnen... Appo dhaan oru two hours naanga pesi indha plan kku vandhom... Nee three flights yeri varanum nnu sonnaru... Ennaku oru connecting flight dhaan... So plan panni eppadiyo unakku munnadi vandhutten..." 

"Ppah... Oru night la evalo periyaa plan... But I love u Raji... I am really sorry... En mela dhaan thappu... Ippo kudiyum paar... Nee dhaan indha conflict ah solve pannura maadhiri aaiyuduchu... I am sorry..."  

"Karthik please stop... Past is past... Unna maadhiri oru husband kaaga uyir ah kuda kudukalaam... Now it is a new beginning... For both of us... " She smiles while saying that...

"Oh yeah... Appadi naa okay dhaan... Mr. and Mrs. Karthikeyan in New York for the next two weeks... Vacation Trip..."

Karthik cutely winks at his wife... Raji blushes and smiles, with all the overjoy that she has right now... Raji goes and gives him a hug... Karthik smiling with love... 

The screen zooms out from them... To the miniature peephole outside the door... 

"Parrah... One week la joint adichutaangale..."

"Amaa Vishnu... Sari knock on the door... "

Vishnu knocks... KR come to open it... 

Karthik in surprise, "Machaan?" 

Raji is in surprise too... But for something else... 

"Lakshmi !!!!!!" Raji yells with joy... 

Both hug with the affection after a long long time... 

"Sari Vishnu... Eppadi daa?" Karthik asks with a smile... 

"Airport la da... Unna paarkuradhu kaaga naanum pinnadiye vandhen... Appo dhaan JFK airport la Lakshmi vandhaa... Parthom... Pesinom... Aludhom... Serndhuttom..." Vishnu says... 

"Amaa... Pinna Vishnu kku eppodhum Lakshmi dhaane?"

Vishnu cutely smiles and winks at her... 

"Taxi vandhuduchaam... We all shall go now... To Manhattan..."

KVRL felt extremely elated and ecstatic... They all faced a hard phase of their lives... It's all for good, as they will have the best life coming forth together... 


THE END ! :P



Edited by SushK16 - 27 December 2014 at 10:02am

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Me first hahaha shall read and comment Sush 
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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 10:11am | IP Logged
OH MY GOD!!!! romba ronba romba romba Nalla irundhuchu!!!!
WOW! Hats Off!! 
KR patchupEmbarrassed
Lakshmi comebackBig smile
VL patchupDancing
Our Fantastic Four Back!!Clap
Ipaady ellam namma director kaatta maatara??Cry

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Sush firstly a big thanks to you for your OS Smile
Ok so the divorce papers came i was like omg omg Shocked and then mind voices came i was like athan ulla avalo irukule approm yethuku intha ego and then you described everything perfectly i could visualise the scenes absolutely loved itSmile

Karthi feeling and crying in the beach to vishnu, vishnu getting upset and feeling for karthi and supporting karthis decision and when you said karthi was going US i was thinking aiyo appo avolothan and raji going to kovilpatti was like nooo but twistu vechinga paaru LOL 

the mindvoices of KR loved it raji feeling for karthi, karthi feeling for her, the telepathy loved that bit, both knowing what each other say so cute... and then karthi coming to the room and seeing raji and laughing when raji was shouting hahahha
and then karthi shouting at raji for a second i was confusedConfused and then he started to laugh hahaaROFL

you brought lakshmi back yayBig smile thank you when you wrote one week la joint adichitangaa... bit i was confused didnt understand till raji screamed lakshmi brought a smile on my face thanks sush... Smile

KRVL all in Manhattan supera irukum - maybe you could continue the next part in ManhattanTongue

oo one thing karthi going USWink Manhattan to hahaha brought them to your area hahaha

really enjoyed your OS thanks Sush this is for youClapClap

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 10:45am | IP Logged
What a super story..ClapClap
Brilliant Happy End.. emotional but also really nice Smile

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS,Sush...Fantastic...ClapClap
nicely narrated our Fav KR feelings...no words to praise it..EmbarrassedLOVELY
VL um sernthachu...short n sweeta...
well done,job,Sush...
but kavala pada thervaiyila,sathiyama ithu maathirilam directorala eduka...edukarathu enna,yosikakoda mudiyathu...
neenga kalakiteenga,sush...super..ClapClap

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
Wow !! It's a Fantastic one Sush Clap

Mostly I had been skipping the episodes this week., and you brought this OS at the right time and gave a feel good experience Embarrassed Thanks for that..

wooo... Lakshmi also there Day Dreaming loved that part as well..

but one thing.. namma serial la avlo seekkiram rendu perum ego va vittu kudukka maattaanga.. nice to see the reunion atleast here.. Smile

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
Oh wow... nice OS...
Our Awesome foursome here... wonderful...

KRVL are all rocking in ur story... nicely narrated the feelings our our Hero... 

Thank u Sush, for this super OS

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