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zaya ss: mujhe haq hai(thread 2 *chapter 17 up(18/3)) - Page 24

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amazing pri...๐Ÿ‘
tuny mjhy rula dia...*wiping tears with dupatta*๐Ÿ˜ญ
aliya jal gai...but hmara hero bhi end time py aa gya.๐Ÿ˜‰
waiting for next chpter.๐Ÿ˜›
update soon...๐Ÿ˜Š


or han sun!!!!chudail
tu n mjhy pm ni kia๐Ÿ˜ก

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Mumma u brought tearns in my eyes
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Hello guys..

Sorry for the late update..

Was busy with my new syllabus

Hehheheh i am in senior most class na

Okey no bakbak

Here's the last chapter...

...

 Chapter 17(last)

 "Nahi" said a voice from behind

Everybody looked at the source of voice

Zain was standing ..

Osman was shocked

Osman: beta tum yahan.. tumhe aaram chaiye.. jao idhar se

Zain: nahi uncle .. maine yahin rahoonga.. maine allah ko hazir nazir mankar usske saath uss pakh mashjid mein yeh vaada kiya tha ki haar shukh aur haar dukh mein uska saath doonga.. aur aaj jab use meri jaroort hai mein use akela chood doon?? Yeh mere vaade ke saath naainsafi nahi hogi?? Kya voh allah mujhe iske liye maaf karega? Nahi naa.. layie doctor khahan sign karna hai??

Osman was speechless hearing zain..

Doctor: yeh lijiye

" ek minute" said ghulam from behind

Doctor shahab inse mileye yeh hai delhi ke top surgeons.. they will help u in operation-said osman

Doctor: thanks sir.. so shall we begin the operation?/

Other doctors: sure

Zain signed the papers

Zain: doctor ek minute mein aliya se milna chahta hoon..

Doctor: acha jaldi kariye.. nurse get him ready

Zain:aye qazi shahab andar aayi

Osman: zain qaazi shahab??

Nafeesa: osman uncle jane dijiye use.. aaj woh apni  aliya ko apna bana ke rahega

Osman smiled

Nafeesa: chalo ayat..hospital ko decorate bhi toh karna hai.. aaj nikkah hai idhar

Ayat:haan bhabhi chaliye

They left

Zain went inside

Aliya turned her face to look at the person who entered inside

She was shocked to see zain there and quickly turned her face

Aliya: zain tum chale jao

Zain: nahi aliya aaj nahi.. mein tumhe esi halat mein nahi chod ke jaaskata

Aliya: nahi zain.. mein ab wapis sundar nahi jisse tumne pyaar kiya tha..

Zain: nahi ali...

Before he could speak he was cut off by her

Aliya: pull the sheet zain ..

Zain: nahi aliya.. maine tumhe pyaar tumhari beauty ki wajah se nahi balki tumhare saaf dil.. tumhara elders ke liye respect.. tumhari har choti se choti cheezse pyaar kiya

Tears made way from her eyes

Zain wiped them

Aliya: zain

Zain: nahi aliya.. qaazi shahab aayiye

Aliya: qaazi shahb??

Zain: haan hamara nikkah apne time pe hihoga

Tears were brimming in her crystal eyes

Qaazi shahab: zain ghulan haider kya apko aliya Abdullah se nikkah qabool hai?

Zain: haan

Qaazi shahab: aliya Abdullah kya apko zain ghulam haider se nikkah qabool hai?/

Aliya: haan

Qaazi shahab: Mubarak ho aaj se aap biwi shauhar hain

Both of them had a smile  one depicting sadness and other too reflecting the same

OUTSIDE THE ROOM:

Doctor: ward boy nayi dulhan ko jaldi se operation theatre laya jayeye

Ayat , fahad and nafeesa were done with the decoration

Doctor: waise toh maine kahi baar dowry ke liye apni daughter in law ko jala diye woh case dekha hai par aaj pehli baar hamare hospital mein esi shaadi hote dekha hai

Everybody smiled looking  at the doctor

Doctor: chaliye doctor rida  and naina...

Aliya was taken inside and the operation soon begin

Everybody were tensed and were looking at the operation theatre for someone to cme out and they could ask about aliya's condition

Soon the light turned from red to green and doctor rida and doctor naina came and congratulate abdullah's and haider's as the operation was successful

Doctor : dekhiye mr.abdullah ab aliya apko apki nazron se dekhegi.. woh bas apki

Zain cut off the doctor in between

Zain: i know doctor

Ghualm: waise hamari aliya ko kab discharge mil jaayega doctor?

Doctor: within a month sir.. and waise bhi udhar delhi mein dr. Rida and dr. Naina toh hogi hi

...

The one month was a very beautiful one for zain and aliya

Zain used to take uttermost care of aliya.. he used to tell her stories... make her eat food.. used to connect her with his family

Never left her alone till nurse came for dressing her wounds

...

After 1 month

Aliya was resting when zain came in

Zain: aliya get ready ghar jaana hai

Aliya opened her eyes slowly

Suraiya came and stood by her bed side

Suraiya: haan aliya chalo uss ghar mein jhahn tumhari ammi apni beti ke liye intzaar kar rahi hai

Tears pooled around aliya's eyes

Suraiya: nahi meri baachi.. mujhe maaf karde

Aliya: nahi maami

Suraiya: mami?? Nahi aliya ammi

They both smiled and for aliya it was her happiest day

...

Within a month Abdullah's house was renewed and was decorated to welcome their dear daughter

...

Qaazi shahab: kya apko yeh nikkah qabool hai??

Haan said zain

Qaazi shahab: aliya Abdullah kya apko yeh nikkah zain ghulam haider se qabool hai?

Aliya: haan

Qaazi shahab: Mubarak ho Mubarak ho

They performed the rituals and everyone blessed the couple

...

In haider's villa

Zain and aliya were standing near the window seeing the moon

Suddenly there was a knock on the door

Zain: kon hai

Murse: sir woh dressing

Zain: aaj mujhe dejiye

He closed the door from behind and carried the tray to her

Keeping the tray on side table he made aliya to lay on the bed and dressed her wounds

The moon who was the witness of this beautiful union shied and hide himself in the cloud

...

So guys

How was it??

Finally i ended

This chapter was dedicated to my chudail beti alina

Love u darling

Lots of love

priya

 

 

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc end.
Keep writing moreEdited by Sobtian... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful chapter
really loved it
oh its ended
will really miss this story
keep writing !
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was beautiful
loved the way Zain told usman about the promise he have made to Aaliyaโค๏ธ
said it was the last chapter๐Ÿ˜”
I loved to read this story it was awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing part ...
Loved it <3
Very well written ...
Zain is sooo nyc ..he did nikaah in hospital :)
Awesome ss !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi mumma
Aja chudail hug de
Apne apni beti ki baat maan li or jaldi update di

Ab new concept pe likhna shuru kardo
Mama warna sweet beti ko chudail mode main ane main time nahi lagta

Tata
Love
Beti
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww it was just fantastic itna caring hubby zainu I luv u for this ๐Ÿ˜ณ N thxxx for such a beautiful ending loved it!!!!  Hayee aise shadi humne bhi kahi nhi Dekhi doctor saaahb ๐Ÿ˜†... 
Keep writing more!!!!!!! 
Zaya is the word which bind us  together... Haina??? ๐Ÿ˜†btw 
Loved the whole  journey... Do write more. 

Bbye take care 
Luv annie ๐Ÿ˜ณ