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New story | KOI AAP SA | PART 3 UPDATED

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Prolouge

A girl is playing in a big park with her mom.
After some time her mom engage in talks with
her friend and girl saw a puppy & start
following him and lost in the crowd. When
she cant see her mom there she start crying.
A boy who is sitting on bench near her came to her and asked her
Boy - kya hua kyun ro rahi ho?
Girl - mamma mil nai lahi(rahi) hai. Lagta hai
woh kho gayi hai.
Boy (smiled at her) - woh kho gayi ya tum?
Girl (sobbed) - pata nai muje.
Boy - koi baat nai hum dono unhe dhund
lege. Tum rona band karo aur chalo.
After searching in the park, the girl point a
lady who is searching her daughter.
Girl - MAMMA!!! MAMMA!!!
Girl's mom - Aashi kaha chali gayi thi tum. Kyn har waqt muje pareshan karti ho. Kaha chali
gayi thi?
Mahi - hum toh yahi the,aap hi nai the yaha.
Girl's mom - ha ha tum hi sahi ho aur baki sub
galat. Aacha ye kaun hai ab ye bhi bata do?
Mahi - ye mele fliend(frd) hai inho ne hi aapko dhunda hai.
Mom - thank you beta aap isse yaha lekar
aaye. Waise aapka naam kya hai.
Aashi - aale hai maine to naam puacha hi nai.
Fliend (frd) aapka naam kya hai.
Boy - par aapne toh puacha hi nai ki main aapka frd hu ya nai aur decide kar liya toh aap
muje kisi bhi naam se bula sakti hai.
Aashi - aacha toh main tume VISHI kahkal
bulaugi. Aashi ke VISHI. Kyn kaisa laga.
Vishi - bhut acha laga.
Aashi - Mamma acha name haina.
Mom - ha bahut acha hai. Ab ghar chale. Say
bye to ur frd.
Aashi - bye vishi kal miloge na humse.
Vishi - jarur miluga aashi. Bye Yes the girl name is Aashi and she is 3 year old
and boy is Vishi age 7 yr old. Uss din ke baad woh dono roz milte aur bhut
khelte. Ek din vishi ne kaha ki kal uska
birthday hai toh aashi khush ho gayi aur nxt
day vishi ke liye uska gift lekar aayi jo unki
jindgi ban gaya. Aashi - happy bilday vishi. Abse main har bal
tume aise hi wish kalugi.Dekho main tumale
liye gift lekal aayi hu.
Vishi - thanku dear bt gift kyn muje wish kiya
wahi kafi hai.
Aashi - alle ye gift hum dono ke liye hai. Dekho isme 2 chain aul ek locket hai. Mumma ne
bataya tha ki ye locket 2 peice me devide ho
jata h toh ek tun lakho(rakho) ek main.
Meet - thanku my cutiepie. Unne kya pata tha ki ye unki aakri mulakat
hogi aur fir kismat unhe kuch samah ke liye
juda kar degi. AFTER 20 YEARS Girl in her early twenties standing on terrece
with a locket in hand.
Girl - happy birthday vishi. On the otherside a man is lying in his bed with
another part of locket.
Man - kaha ho tu aashi, tumne muje aaj bhi
wish nai kiya.kaha chali apne meet ko bina
bataye?

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INDEX
PROLOUGE - ABOVE
PART 1 - BELOW
PART 2 - BELOW
PART 3 - PAGE 2


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interesting and nyc prologue 


Edited by risha8 - 30 December 2014 at 6:57am
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HAPPY NEW YEAR

KOI AAP SA

Part 1

 

MUMBAI

Ek ladki kuch bacho ke sath barish mein khel rahi thi. Aur uske maa usse andar bula rahi thi.

Garima - khushi!! khushi beta andar aa jao. Tum kabse barish mein khel rahi ho thand lag jayegi beta. Kabhi toh meri baat maan liya karo.

Khushi - bus maa 5 min

Garima - pichle aadhe gante se tum 5 min hi kar rahi ho.

Khushi - ye last 5 min bus abhi aa rahi hu.

Garima - tekh hai.

After sometime khushi came inside & went to change her dress.

Garima - khushi aaj khane mein kya banau aaj jo tu kahegi wahi banega.

Khushi - maa kuch tekha aur chatpata banana. Aur sath mei AACHU!!

Garima - kya hua? Sardi lag gayi na. Maine kaha tha barish mein mat khelo.

Khushi - maa kuch nai AACHU hua h. Kuch deer mein AACHU tekh ho AACHU jayugi.

Garima - ha muje pata hai ki tu kitna tekh hoti ho. Ruko mein abhi tumare liye adrak wali chai lekar aati hu. Aur kabardar jo yaha se uthi toh mujse bura koi nai hoga samji.

Shahi - kyn meri bachi ko daant rahi hu. Waise bhi kal chali jayegi toh sabse jyada tum hi isse miss karogi.

Garima (emotionally)- tabhi toh main bol rahi hu kyn itni dur jana hai isse. Yaha ke clge mein bhi toh admission le sakti hai.

Khushi - maa plz aap firse ye emotional rona mat suru karo. Muje aacha nai lagta.

Shahi - ab bus bhi karo garima usse rula kar bejna hai kya?

Khushi - maa aap toh janti haina ki mera dream tha waha padna  (ST - aur kya pata muje woh bhi mil jaye jiska maine saalo se intzaar kiya hai).

Garima - phele shyam banglore chala gaya ab khushi ja rahi hai. Itne bade ghar main akele kya karugi?

Khushi - offo maa, aap samji nai main aur bhai aapko papa ke sath romance ka mouka de rahe hai.

With dat khushi ran out of door.

Garima - khushi ki bachi ruk tuje main batati hu muje romance karne ko bol rahi ho. Kaha ja rahi hai ab?

Khushi - jaha roz jati hu. Jaldi aa jaugi.

At the same time in delhi, a man is sitting in the park and drown in past.

 

Flashback

 

Aashi(in complaining tone) - Vishi tum hamesha humse phele kaise park aa jate ho? Hum jitna bhi phele aaye phele nai aa pate. Aisa kyn

Vishi - kynki muje tumse milne ki jaldi hoti hai isliye main tumara yahi intazaar karta hu.

Aashi - par fir bhi kabi toh hume phele aane do na.

Vishi - tekh hai kabi aisa din bhi aayega ki tum mujse phele yaha is park mein aakar mera wait karogi.

 

Flashback end

 

Man - main aaj bhi uss din ka wait kar raha hu Aashi jab tum mujse phele yaha aakar mera wait karogi.

After sometime man went towards his home where his family waiting for him with disappointment in his heart for not finding her.

 

In new delhi

Next morning at 5:30 am in a palace like mansion. A man is working on his laptop wearing only a baggy trouser in his study. He has a perfect body and sharp feature. After dat he went to his room to take shower n ready for office. At sharp 8 he came to dinnertable for breakfast with his family.

Man - good morning everyone.

nani - gud morning Arnav bete.

Aakash, payal & nk - gud morning bro.

nani - hariprakash breakfast serve karo.

Arnav - aakash kal jo meeting thi woh kaisi rahi.

Aakash  - aachi thi. Unhone deal sign kardi.

Nani - aakash Arnav kabi aap dono business ki baate chod sakte hai.

payal - nani ye kya kah diya aapne. Agar ye dono breakfast dinner par business ki baat na kare toh inka din pura nai hota.

Nk  - right bhabhi. Kyn nani (wink at her)

Arnav - NK!!!

Dadi - kya nk, aur payal sahi kah rahi hai. Ab woh chodo aaj evening ko ngo mein ek funtion hai aur aapko aana hai.

Arnav - nani aap toh jante ho ki main evening ko nai aa sakta kynki ( nk cut Arnav talk )

Nk - kynki muje apne secret jagah par apni secret gf se milna hai.

 

Iss baat ko sunkar sabhi hasne lagte hai aur Arnav ko gussa aa jata hai.

Arnav(angerly) - nk limit mein raho warna tumare liye acha nai hai. Aur nani main nai aa sakta.

With that Arnav went out for office.

Nanii - nk aap baar baar Arnav ko kyn tang karte hai. Aap jante haina woh kaha jate hai fir bhi.

Nk -kya karu nani bro hamesha serious rahte hai toh main unka mood badalna chahta hu bus isliye. Sorry nani aage se nai hoga.

In the car

Arnav - kaha ho tum Aashi? Kyn chod kar chali gayi tum muje. Main har roz ye sochkar park jata hu ki tum muje milogi par tum kabi nai aati. Plz aa jao Aashi plz aa jao mere pass

 

PRECAP

A driver standing outside a car and khushi went to him.

Khushi - excuse me driver uncle sorry apko aise roka. Kya aap muje ye address bata dege? Maine kitni deer se dund rahi hu mil nai raha pata nai kaha chala gaya?

Arnav suddenly lift his head from laptop to see who talk just like her.

 

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT AND GIVE ME UR VIEWS

CHAHAT




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PART 2

 

Arnav - kaha ho tum aashi? Kyn chod kar chali gayi

tum muje. Main har roz ye sochkar park jata hu ki

tum muje milogi par tum kabi nai aati. Plz aa jao

aashi plz aa jao mere pass.

Arnav - pata nai kyn par aaj kuch toh badalne wala hai. Woh kya hai ye main samaj nai pa raha?

 

 

IN MUMBAI AIRPORT

 

Khushi - maa plz rona band karo sab hame ajeeb tarah se dekh rahe hai.

Garima - hadd hai ab main apni beti ke dur jane par ro kar mann bhi halka nai kar sakti.

Shashi - garima tum ro kaha rahi ho tum toh puri ganga jamuna baha rahi hu.

Garima - aap toh bus chup hi rahiye. Agar aap chahte toh khushi delhi jane ki jidd nai karti. Ab main usse bine dekhe kaise rahugi.

Khushi - maa plz kyn aap mera jana muskil kar rahi hai. Aur delhi dur thodi hai jab aapka mann kare mujse milne aa jana ya main aa jaugi.

Shashi - kitni smart beti hai meri. Chalo ab jao tumari flight ki announcement ho gayi hai. Aur pahuchte hi hame phone karna.

Khushi - ji papa. Aap jyada pereshan mat hona. Lavanya toh hai hi delhi me mere sath. Chalo bye main chalti hu. (hug her dad and side hug her mom ) Bye maa ye melodrama chod kar toh romantic ho jau dad ke liye.

Garima - khushi tuje toh main chodugi nai.

Khushi (shouted) - BYE MAA AUR MERI ADVICE YAAD RAKNA.

 

In Delhi at AR company

 

Arnav is working in his cabin and a knock came

Arnav - come in.

Aman - gud morning sir.

Arnav - gud morning aman. Kuch kaam tha.

Aman - ji sir, hamari jo gurgoan wali branch hai waha kuch material check ke lite client aane wale hai toh aapko jana hoga.

Arnav - hmmm. Tekh hai kitne baje aa rahe hai woh log?

Aman - afternoon mein aa rahe hai. Agar aap abhi jayege toh unke aane tak waha pahuch jayege.

Arnav - tekh hai aman. Meri ek meeting hai mr. Shah ke sath hai uss tum postpone karwa do.

Aman - okay main abhi mr. shah se baat karleta hu.

Arnav - ok den u can go now.

Kuch deer baad arnav cabin se nikal ja raha hota hai aur sheetal uske piche jati hai.

Sasha - ASR aap kahi ja rahe hai.

Arnav - ya gurgoan wali branch par kyun tume kuch kaam tha.

Sheetal - no ASR maine toh aise hi aapko bahar jate dekha isliye puacha.

Arnav (irritatedly) - agar tumara interogation ho gaya ho toh jakar apna kaam karo aur muje bhi kardo.

Sheetal - sorry ASR.

 

At Delhi airport

Khushi plane landed and see cameout with a hope to find him.

Khushi - dekho vishi aaj tumari aashi wapis aa gayi tumse milne par pata nai tum kaha ho vishi.

Suddenly arnav ko aisa ehsaas hua jaise koi apna usse pukar raha hai.

At airport khushi call her friend lavanya to enquire where is she?

Khushi - hello lavanya, where r u dear?

Lavanya - hey khushi, sorry yaar main nai aa payi. Muje abhi abhi clge mein ek assignment mila hai aur woh aaj hi submit karna hai. Muje tuje kafi deer se try kar rahi hu par tera phone not reachable aa raha tha.

Khushi - its ok dear tum apna project karo. Hum ghar par milte hai.

Lavanya - par tum ghar kaise jaugi?

Khushi - taxi se bus tu muje address message karde.

Lavanya - are u sure tum chali jaogi? ya main clge bunk karke tume lene aau.

Khushi - nai koi jarurat nai tum kaam karo main aa jaugi. Ok bye see u soon.

Lavanya - okay main abhi address msg karti hu.

Khushi taxi hire karke airport se nikal jati hai. Meanwhile arnav gurgoan pahuch kar apna kaam katam karke wapis office jata hai tabhi usse sheetal ka call aata hai.

Sheetal - sorry asr main aapko disturb kar rahi hu bt muje abhi mr. Kapoor ka call aaya tha woh design mein kuch change karna chahte hai aur aap se baat karna chahte hai abhi video conference par.

Arnav - tekh hai.

Arnav ( to driver)- kaka car ko side mein park kardo muje ek video call karna hai.

Driver - ji arnav baba & Park the car and went outside.

Khushi also reach near her destination when the driver told dat the tyre of his taxi is punchured and he can't take her forward.

Khushi - koi nai bhaiya main koi aur taxi le lugi.

Taxi driver - uski koi jarurat nai hai madam yaha se kuch dur par hi aapka address hai.

Khushi - tekh hai and paid him and went out with her luggage.

After roaming for 15 min khushi didn't find the address and see saw a driver standing outside a car and khushi went to

him.

Khushi - excuse me driver uncle sorry apko aise

disturb kiya. Kya aap muje ye address bata dege? Maine

kitni deer se dund rahi hu mil nai raha pata nai kaha chala gaya?

Arnav suddenly lift his head from laptop to see

who talk just like her.

Arnav flashback

 

Boy - kya hua kyun ro rahi ho?

 

Girl - mamma mil nai lahi(rahi) hai. Lagta hai woh kho gayi hai.

 

Boy (smiled at her) - woh kho gayi ya tum?

 

Girl (sobbed) - pata nai muje.

 

Flashback end

 

arnav driver - jarur beta. Yaha se aage se left jakar pheli society hi hai.

Khushi - thanku uncle. Main nayi hu issliye pata nai tha.

 

In the car arnav is try to see the girl face bt see is facing her back to him. Khushi went frm there when see felt a pull on her dupatta and see turn back and arnav saw her face.

Khushi dupatta was struck in arnav's car handle. She tried hard bt can not take it out.

In car arnav is stunded to see an angelic face and her attic. He had a sudden urge to go out and help her and to his own surprise he went out and take her dupatta out frm handle and face her.

 

 

PRECAP

Khushi - thank u aapki iss help ke liye. Actually main yaha nai hu aur jaha muje jana h waha ka pata nai mil raha toh thoda tension ho gaya.

Arnav - its ok. Kaka tume waha tak chod dege.

Khushi - nai iski koi jarurat nai hai main chali jaugi aapko problem hogi.

 

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT

Chahat

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nice story.. so aashi is back for her vishi.. loved the start.. best wishes and happy writing Koi Aap Sa Smile
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Part 3
arnav is stunded to see an angelic face and
her attic. He had a sudden urge to go out and
help her and to his own surprise he went out and
take her dupatta out frm handle and face her. Khushi saw arnav and both look in eachother eyes. Aisa lag raha tha jaise unn aakhone mein ek duraro ko dhund rahe ho. Unka eyelock khushi ke phonecall tuta.
Khushi( on call) - hello!!
Other side - ***
Khushi - nai maa abhi ghar nai pahuchi hu.
Other side - ***
Khushi - maa aap tension mat lo main bus pahuchne wali hu jakar phone karti hu.
Other side - ***
Khushi - ha ha promise mein pahuchkar call karti hu.
Khushi(to driver) -thank u uncle address ke liye and she drop her phone.
Arnav lift her phone and handover to khushi.
Khushi(to arnav) - thank u aapki iss help ke liye. Actually main
yaha nai hu aur jaha muje jana h waha ka pata
nai mil raha toh thoda tension ho gaya.
Arnav - its ok. Kaka tume waha tak chod dege.
Khushi - nai iski koi jarurat nai hai main chali jaugi aapko problem hogi.
Arnav - problem nai hogi muje kuch kaam hai tab tak kaka tume chod aayege. Itne luggage ke sath tum manage nai kar paogi.( to driver) kaka inki help kardo tab tak main apna kaam katam kar leta hu.
Driver is surprised with arnav behavior and thought jo insaan apni family ke alawa kisi ko importance nai deta woh aaj ek ladki ki help kar raha hai.
Driver - ji sir.
Khushi - thanku. Maine suna tha ki delhi walo ka dil bada hota hai, aaj dekh bhi liya. Waise mera naam khushi hai. Khushi Gupta.
Arnav - nice to meet u miss khushi. My name is
Suddenly arnav phone rang and he attend call.
Arnav - yes mr. kapoor aap skype par online aa jayiye hum wahi baat karte hai and get in his car.
Khushi - arre ye toh chale bhi gaye aur bye bhi bolne nai diya.
Driver - chale beta.
Khushi - ji uncle. Main aapko bhi paresaan kar rahi hu.
Driver - nai beta isme paresani ki koi baat nai.
Dono baate karte karte building tak pahuch gaye. Khushi again thank the driver and the driver return to arnav aur khushi building mein chali gayi.
In car driver return and arnav is talking to mr. kapoor for some 40 minute and den tell to driver to drive car toward KM.
Arnav soch raha tha ki kyn usne uss ladki madat ki? Usne kabi kisi ladki madat nai ki siway aashi, par kyn usse aisa mehsoos hua ki woh ladki kuch jani pahchani hai. Usko ek pal ke liye laga ki woh uski aashi hai par nai kismit usse uski aashi se milana hi nai chahti.
Ghar pahuch kar woh sidha apne room mein chala gaya jaise usske liye kuch mayine hi nai rakhta ho.
Arnav - kaha ho aashi. Kyun aisa lag raha hai ki tum mere bhut kareeb ho par main tum tak pahuch nai pa raha hu.
Khushi on other hand reach her flat and call her mother to talk.
Khushi - iss se phele aap apni sawalo ki jhadi suru karo main bata du main ghar pahuch gayi aur main bilkul tekh hu.
Garima - tu muje kisi din heartfail karwa kar rahegi.
Khushi - maa aap kyn aisa bolti hai mera dil tot jata hai.
Garima - toh tu kyn tension deti h muje. Ghar se itni dur gayi hai toh aur fikar ho gayi hai muje.
Khushi - maa aap fikar mat karo main koi chui mui nai jo apna sahi galat na samaj saku. Chalo ab main phone rakhti hu. Raat ko phone karugi.
Khushi (selfthought) - main phele mein bhi choti choti batao par ghabra jati thi par muje himmat mere vishi ki baato se milti hai aur main aage badhti hu.

FLASHBACK

Vishi aashi ka wait kar raha hota hai, par aashi pure 30 minutes late aati hai aur woh bhi rote hue. Vishi usse dekhkar paresaan ho jata hai.
Vishi - aashi kya hua tum ro kyn rahi ho kisine kuch kaha kya?
Aashi - nai pal(par) muje bhut dal(dar) lag laha(raha) tha toh lona(rona) aa gaya.
Vishi - dar kisse aur tum late kyun aayi.
Aashi - hum late hue kynki gadi ka tyle(tyre) karab ho gaya tha aul(aur) hame laga tum chale gaye kynki late ho gaye.
Vishi - bus itni baat ke liye itne aashu. Hame problem se darna nai chahiye balki unko face karna chahiye taki hum problem ko bata sake ki hum weak nai strong hai. Samji meri bhudhu princess.
Aashi - ha mere prince.
FLASHBACK END

Khushi dekho vishi tumari aashi aaj bhi tumari baato ko follow karti hai. Bus jaldi se tum muje mil jao.

PRECAP - Lavanya - kaha kho gayi khushi fir se apne secret love ko yaad kar rahi ho kya?
Khushi - lavanya tum muje kyun tang karti ho?
Lavanya -kyn na karu usske liye toh tum yaha delhi aayi ho aur
main kuch bolo bhi nai.

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT
CHAHAT

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