FF Ek ladki thi deewani si chap 35 on page 124 21/12/15 - Page 65

Posted: 8 years ago
it was smallπŸ˜†
but I loved it!😳
Posted: 8 years ago
Nice chapter but i don't want that jodha forgive jala easily i want a strong punishment for him for his sin and his regret for his action and his has to pacifie jodha and it should be great deal
plz update soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting Update! πŸ‘ Loved the way Jo just ran and hugged Jalal... Wonder what guruji's reaction will be but want Jalal to have a harsher punishment for his sin.
Update soon! πŸ˜Š
Edited by RitikaGarg8 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update purva
loves the way jalal was concerned about jo.
its too hard for him to digest the fact that his young,bubbly,innocent begum transformed into mature ,brave woman.
he somewhere misses his old jo
purva i really loved these lines
Ek Ladki thi deewani si
Khul ke hansa karti thi
Muskurahto se uska yarana tha
Shararato ne uska har kadam pe saath nibhaya tha
Jheel k kinare mujhse mila karti thi
Bag se aam churati thi
Taarifh karo to sharamati thi
Paas jao to bhag jati thi
Aaj kho gaya uska andaaz
Uski har ada gayab hai.
Khata hamne ki aur saza usne paayi
.
thank god jalal asked zakir to follow jo and help her secretly if she needed.
wow jalal being savior saved the women who was forced to sati pratha.
and won jo's heart .
aww she hugged jalal ,hope she forgives him soon and go back to agra with her love.
maham's evil deeds should be revealed soon and punished severly.
thanks for update
update next chap asap
Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update di continue soon
Posted: 8 years ago
superb update di
thanks for the pm...
Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome chappy purva di πŸ‘
jalal was the saviour and jo is vry brave but jalal cares her a lot
do continue soon and plz update ur ss as well😊
thnks 4 the pm diπŸ˜›
Posted: 8 years ago
superb chapter...it was sweet of jalal to send a person behind jodha to take care of her...and jodha never knew sati tht is strange she is a rajput it was in thr blood to die with thr husband...anyways jalal came on right time to save the lady and jodha...
Posted: 8 years ago
nice chapter... but i think it was shorter than ur usual updates...

so what now? Jo back to Agra with Jalal?
Posted: 8 years ago
Very nuce update
Jodha returned to ashram yo fulfil her resposibilities...jalal also dint forget his duty this time sending someone to see thru jodha teaching her destination safely
U touched a sensitive n cruel  issue of older days..hope jalal finds a permanent solution to this problem further
Coming to jodha wat is her decision now...will she help as commner or queen

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