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OS: Nahi jeena tere baajo

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Hi guys,

After seeing the new promo and subha's comment I imagined the following scene and thought of sharing with you guys..
Hope you will like it Smile

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Suraj brought Sandhya in RM on every other person's request but they are still not in talking terms.
The day is the God Bharai for meenakshi.
Meenakshi is getting ready in her room and Emily is helping her as both are happy because Sandhya is back.
Chotu is running here and there in excitement.

BB has given different works to everybody.
Suraj is to make sweets and pack for every guest. Sandhya is to decorate the hall. Chavi is to sharpen and paint her nail etc etc.. BBsa and herself to watch Sandhya from the corner of the window. Chaturi is still not back from her village.

Sandhya is standing on the stool and putting flowers in the hall.

Suraj made lots of sweet boxes and came to RP. Since the number of sweet boxes are huge, his face is hidden behind the sweet boxes and he too was not able to see thing properly..

He enetered into RM and shouted meenakshi and emily to pick the sweet boxes. But meenakshi is busy in making herself pretty and catches emily that if she goes away, who will do makeup to her.

When both did not come he shouted BB. But BB wanted him to call Sandhya and hence she did not respond.

Sandhya heard suraj but ignored and started doing her work. She did not know that Suraj's hand is full of boxes.

He got frustated and shouted San.. Embarrassedhe stopped thinking why should I call her to help me. he can put sweet boxes himself in the hall.

In frustation he went very fast to the hall and collided with the stool Sandhya is standing. Sandhya got disbalanced due to stool and Suraj got disbalanced while protecting sweet boxes and fallen on top of Sandy. Their head collided strongly and both shouted a little in pain. Suraj was lost in Sandy's eyesEmbarrassed. He came to senses when Sandy pushed him a little. They both sat rubbing their own heads instead of each others.

Suraj again started watching Sandy and remembered that they should collide head once again. He slowly moved his head towards her. Sandy suddenly saw his head coming towards her and moved her head away and started rubbing her head.

After watching her wife for some time, Suraj picked her face in his both the hands and collided with his head quickly. He quickly got up and walked away. Sandhya slowly raised her face and started looking at him from behind longingly.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

After few steps Suraj stopped, she quickly looked away making angry face.
Suraj looked behind towards his beloved wife and shouted in anger, "You.. You destroyed all my sweets, you will never know how much effort it takes to make all this. Guest will be comming in any minute and My all sweets are gone." And he walked away in anger.

Sandhya ignored him and started collecting flowers.

BB who was seeing all this from the corner of the window, turned and said "Hey maara Raam ji. Bas aise hi dheere dheere sab thik kar dena".Big smile
 
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Please comment.
Feel free to throw tomatos and eggs :)


 

Edited by --FM-- - 10 January 2015 at 1:40pm

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
wow too good an OS
no exaggeration
simple yet superb 

good job FM

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
I loved it! Simple and cutee! Embarrassed
Nicely written FM! Big smile

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 12:03am | IP Logged
Wow... so cute Anjana Clap

SurYa EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


I am having an OS in my mind .. but no time to write .. will try to do tat b4 reunion atleast LOL

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 12:07am | IP Logged
lol SS
iam afraid of your writings Wink

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by thala

lol SS
iam afraid of your writings Wink

So u dont want me to write akka ??Shocked


But I didnt think abt UD now .. its a normal one nly LOL

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 12:12am | IP Logged
now did i say about UD
ROFL

again you made yourself adimai (slave) ROFL

i would love to read anything from you ss
was TPing you ROFL

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pasurYa

Wow... so cute Anjana Clap

SurYa EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


I am having an OS in my mind .. but no time to write .. will try to do tat b4 reunion atleast LOL

Do write it please EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Waiting for your OS.. It has been long time since anyone wrote OS

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