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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
Part V

Its's morning, Aazoo calls up Alvira and tells her that she has some work and is stepping out of the house and won't be there for Breakfast. 
Alvira: Itni subah subah , kya kaam hai?
Aarzoo:Aunty, its something urgent aake bataoongi.

Aarzo leaves.
On the breakfast table, Saahir is looking for aarzoo. Alvira comes and sits beside him and starts eating. 
Saahir: Ammi... Aarzoo nahi dikh rahi.
Ammi: Usse koi kaam tha isiliye bahaar gayi hai
Saahir( pauses for some time): Kab tak aaegi?
Ammi: Woh toh bataya nahi

Aazo goes to Mr Mehra's office, she meets a friendly lady ( the HR girl), who hands over the offer letter.
HR Lady: Tum agley week se start kar sakti hoo,
Aarzoo: Says thank you. ( thinks her family is coming back tomorrow)
HR Lady: do you need help with anything else?
Aarzoo: Nahi shukriya.. she turn around to leave but then stops and turns back-
Aarzoo: Kya aap humari makaan dhodhne mai madad kar sakti hai, humara abhi walla ghar yaha se bahut door hai
HR Lady:(thinks for a while) calls up someone and then says "Perfect"
HR Lady: Good news aarzoo, Company ka flat abhi khali hai, agar tum chaho toh 3 mahiney ke liye wahaa shift ho sakti ho.
Aarzoo is super happy: thank you so much, mai kab move ho sakti hoo?
HR Lady: Mai aaj usse clean karake ready karwa deti hoo, tum kal 10:00 baje tak move kar sakti ho.
Aarzoo: thank you so much. Thank you

She leaves the office and comes back to Niyamat house.

While she's entering the house she sees Sahir, looking at her.
Sahir rushes to her; Tum kahaa thi?
Aarzoo ignores him.
Sahir pull Aarzoo towards him- ( with soft expression)- Aisa mat karo Aarzoo? mai..
Aarzoo(pulls away): aur aapne jo kiya? mere zazbaatoon ka majaak udaya/ mera yakeen tod diya--
(She realizes she doesn't have to explain anything to him). turn around and calls out to Alvira, Alvira Aunty.

Sahir pulls her towards him  with her back on the wall-touches her cheek with his soft fingers, Aarzoo mai tumse mohab...
Aarzoo: Bas ab kuch nahi and runs towards Alvira's room
Sahir follows-

Aarzoo: alvira aunty.
Alvira is not in the room, sahir enters the room and closes the door

Sahir: Tumhe meri baat sunanani padegi-
Aarzoo Zaki tumse pyaar karta hai( Aarzoo is shocked) , usne Samira se nikah karne se mana kar diya tha , woh sirf tumse nikaah karna chahta hai- aur rehman saahab ne deal poori karne ke liye Zaki Samira ki shaddi ki Shart rakhi. Niyamat house, Saiyaara sab girvi hai iss deal ke liye.

aarzoo- is silent and then says- toh apni Deal bachane ke liye aapne humari feelings ka sauda kar diya
Zaki humse nikaah karna chahta hai per kya aapne jaana chaha ki hum kya chahte hai?

Hum zaki se pyaar nahi kartey, aur unke saath kabhi nikaah nahi kartey , kabhi nahi-  aur uske liye aapko humare saath pyaar ka naatak karne ki koi jaroorat nahi thi-

Sahir is silent , he grabs Aarzoo's hand: aarzoo jo maine kiya woh bahut bora tha aur mai bahut sharminda ho. Per mujhe nahi lagta ki woh... pyaar ka "naatak" tha. Mai tum se sach mai pyaar..

aarzoo gets up: Please Sahir sahab  ab kuch mat kahiye.

There's a knock on the door, Aarzoo runs and open the door.It's alvira

Alvira: Kya ho raha hai?


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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by itsmeshingi

Part V

Its's morning, Aazoo calls up Alvira and tells her that she has some work and is stepping out of the house and won't be there for Breakfast. 
Alvira: Itni subah subah , kya kaam hai?
Aarzoo:Aunty, its something urgent aake bataoongi.

Aarzo leaves.
On the breakfast table, Saahir is looking for aarzoo. Alvira comes and sits beside him and starts eating. 
Saahir: Ammi... Aarzoo nahi dikh rahi.
Ammi: Usse koi kaam tha isiliye bahaar gayi hai
Saahir( pauses for some time): Kab tak aaegi?
Ammi: Woh toh bataya nahi

Aazo goes to Mr Mehra's office, she meets a friendly lady ( the HR girl), who hands over the offer letter.
HR Lady: Tum agley week se start kar sakti hoo,
Aarzoo: Says thank you. ( thinks her family is coming back tomorrow)
HR Lady: do you need help with anything else?
Aarzoo: Nahi shukriya.. she turn around to leave but then stops and turns back-
Aarzoo: Kya aap humari makaan dhodhne mai madad kar sakti hai, humara abhi walla ghar yaha se bahut door hai
HR Lady:(thinks for a while) calls up someone and then says "Perfect"
HR Lady: Good news aarzoo, Company ka flat abhi khali hai, agar tum chaho toh 3 mahiney ke liye wahaa shift ho sakti ho.
Aarzoo is super happy: thank you so much, mai kab move ho sakti hoo?
HR Lady: Mai aaj usse clean karake ready karwa deti hoo, tum kal 10:00 baje tak move kar sakti ho.
Aarzoo: thank you so much. Thank you

She leaves the office and comes back to Niyamat house.

While she's entering the house she sees Sahir, looking at her.
Sahir rushes to her; Tum kahaa thi?
Aarzoo ignores him.
Sahir pull Aarzoo towards him- ( with soft expression)- Aisa mat karo Aarzoo? mai..
Aarzoo(pulls away): aur aapne jo kiya? mere zazbaatoon ka majaak udaya/ mera yakeen tod diya--
(She realizes she doesn't have to explain anything to him). turn around and calls out to Alvira, Alvira Aunty.

Sahir pulls her towards him  with her back on the wall-touches her cheek with his soft fingers, Aarzoo mai tumse mohab...
Aarzoo: Bas ab kuch nahi and runs towards Alvira's room
Sahir follows-

Aarzoo: alvira aunty.
Alvira is not in the room, sahir enters the room and closes the door

Sahir: Tumhe meri baat sunanani padegi-
Aarzoo Zaki tumse pyaar karta hai( Aarzoo is shocked) , usne Samira se nikah karne se mana kar diya tha , woh sirf tumse nikaah karna chahta hai- aur rehman saahab ne deal poori karne ke liye Zaki Samira ki shaddi ki Shart rakhi. Niyamat house, Saiyaara sab girvi hai iss deal ke liye.

aarzoo- is silent and then says- toh apni Deal bachane ke liye aapne humari feelings ka sauda kar diya
Zaki humse nikaah karna chahta hai per kya aapne jaana chaha ki hum kya chahte hai?

Hum zaki se pyaar nahi kartey, aur unke saath kabhi nikaah nahi kartey , kabhi nahi-  aur uske liye aapko humare saath pyaar ka naatak karne ki koi jaroorat nahi thi-

Sahir is silent , he grabs Aarzoo's hand: aarzoo jo maine kiya woh bahut bora tha aur mai bahut sharminda ho. Per mujhe nahi lagta ki woh... pyaar ka "naatak" tha. Mai tum se sach mai pyaar..

aarzoo gets up: Please Sahir sahab  ab kuch mat kahiye.

There's a knock on the door, Aarzoo runs and open the door.It's alvira

Alvira: Kya ho raha hai?


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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Part VI

Alvira: Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?
Aarzoo: aunty hum aapko he dhoondh rahe thay- Ammi aur kal aa rahe hai socha aapko bata day.
Alvira: Arey achcha hai, waise mujhe tumhari ammi se bahut si baatein karni hai( she looks at Sahir, who has his eyes fixed on Aarzoo)
Aarzoo: Achcha aunty chalte hai
Sahir looks at her and move his hand( exted his arm) to try to stop her. aarzoo leaves.
Alvira turns around and asks Sahir-  Kamra lock kyu tha Sahir? 
Sahir: stays Quiet,  looks on the floor - says "pata nahi" and walks away
Alvira is left staring.

In the living room Aarzoo meets Zaki.
Zaki :Jahaa aaaraa
Aarzoo ignores go ahead but then turns back to him
Aarzoo: Zaki, aap humare bahut achche dost hai, aapne humari hamesha humari madad ki hai. Aapki wajah se he sachai umare samne ayi hai aur hum iske liye hamesha aapke ehsaan mand hogay.
Per zaki Rishton ka tana bana aisa hota hai, ki ek rishtay mai lagi choat aur kaafi rishton ko zakhami ker  de deti hai. 

She decides to move but come back and say- Zaki ek dost ki hasiyat se keh rahe hai- Samaira se nikaah karna aapka faisla hai per ek bachche ko baap ka saaya milna he chahiye. Pita ki kami kya hoti hai, yeh hum se behtar kaun jaanta hai.  

She touches Zakis shoulder softly and leaves.

Tabhi Kurti Appa and Anam come into the scene.
KA: Aaj mai bahut khush ho.. Sahir sahir

Everybody gathers,
Alvira: Kya hua KA aap shor kyu macha rahe hoo
KA: Lo Begum, Shor? Yeh toh meri khushi hai-
Anam: Dr. khurana ka phone that woh kab se tumhara (looking towards Sahir) phone try kar rahe hai per, tum phone utha he nahi rahe ho.(Sahir- looks at his phone). NY hospital se saari formalities poori ho gayi hai, Zeenat ko ab kissi bhi waqt NY leja sakte hai.
KA: Looks at Sahir, hai na ek dum badhi wali khush khabari and she starts dancing. Tabhi KA looks at Lost Aarzoo.
KA: kya hua aarzoo? Zeenat ko nahi jaanti- Humari Choti begun , Sahir ki biwi-




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Posted: 31 March 2015 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Sadly Humsafars didn't go through as I thought it should- but it inspired me to write:)
Here the link to what I have written so far- would appreciate your inputs, thanks friends!

http://sejaluday.blogspot.com/

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Posted: 31 March 2015 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
I read all six parts in one go itns nice. Do continue please its really nice.

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Posted: 06 April 2015 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
Thanks much.. 
I have added another chapter.

Will be updating it often now:)




Edited by itsmeshingi - 06 April 2015 at 4:23pm

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