war between US --- FAN FICTION---- CHAP 5 UPDATED

Priya

@asya_luver

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

hi guys, i know i have discontinued all my ffs..

but i am badly missing old shq.. so i'm writing ff ...full of twists ... :) ... tasks... their fights!.. and also about girl's rights

and i promise i will not discontinue this one!

FOR INDEX SCROLL DOWN :) :) HAPPY READING

characters are same as show

but sanyukta wears jeans and shirt

prologue

yoyo - rd paaji ... karan paaji ke fite aane ki entry par hain red signal...

rd - kyun?

yoyo - ek ladki aa rahi hai, sanyukta aggarwal..

sanyukta - aa rahi nahi aa chuki hai.. 😉

rd - look ... yeh mere dost karan ki seat hai.. so chup chap .. fite se chali jao ..

sanyuktaa - nahi jaungi .. kya kar loge..?

rd - i will make your life hell!

sanyukta - oh! really? i bet u can't..

rd - don't mess with me!

sanyukta - i will mess with u!... 😉 kya karloge?

vd - yeh kya ho raha hai?... get out!..

vd - and who re u?

sanyukta - sir.. i am sanyukta aggarwal ..

rd - last rank?... 😉

sanyukta - last 2nd rank... 😲😲😲

lots of love

priya/himanshi whatever.. it doesn't matters to me now :D

please give ur suggestions!

Edited by priya_31 - 8 years ago

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samridhi

@samridhigoodiez

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res..
I will read it only if u complete this one..

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Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez
Res..
I will read it only if u complete this one..

i'll surely complete this one (y)😊😊😃

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Priya

@asya_luver

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

FOR INDEX

CHAPTER -1 -- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117705999

CHAPTER -2 -- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/117739969

CHAPTER - 3 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118006898

CHAPTER - 4 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118044198
CHAPTER - 5 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118087724

Edited by priya_31 - 9 years ago

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Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: moonlight3094
nice

thank u !

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nyc thought dear 😊
continue for sure

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

Seems intrstng
Would luv to read it

Bt plz this tym for sure complete it

Update soon wtng

Luv u
Keep smiling

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Zumi

@Zumi_Vamp

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

I dont think SADDA HAQ TRACK IS BORING!!
Well, I dont have CHANNEL V on my television.. >TABHI TADAPTI HU MAIN SADDA HAQ DEKHNE KE LIYE<
My URGE TO SEE SADDA HAQ IS NEVER GOING TO GET LESS..
Coming to YOUR FF..
Well.. You always write good yarr..
You dont need suggestions from us.. You just penned it down whatever comes to your mind..
This was short.. I need a BIG FAT one CHAPTER.. LOL
#Zumi

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Priya

@asya_luver

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Paramharshita
I dont think SADDA HAQ TRACK IS BORING!!
Well, I dont have CHANNEL V on my television.. >TABHI TADAPTI HU MAIN SADDA HAQ DEKHNE KE LIYE<
My URGE TO SEE SADDA HAQ IS NEVER GOING TO GET LESS..
Coming to YOUR FF..
Well.. You always write good yarr..
You dont need suggestions from us.. You just penned it down whatever comes to your mind..
This was short.. I need a BIG FAT one CHAPTER.. LOL
#Zumi

thank u so much!..

next time , i will give big fat :D chapter ... :)

and spoilers dekh kar mera dimag ghum gaya ... :P :D ... isliye SHQ ko boring kaha ... :P :D

sandhir breakup .. aane wala hai

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Priya

@asya_luver

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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER - 1

yoyo - rd paaji, karan paaji ke FITE aane ki entry par lag gaya red signal

rd - kyun?

yoyo- ek beautiful- si ladki aa rahi hai -- sanyukta aggarwal

sanyukta - aan rahi nahi aa chuki hai 😉

rd - look yeh mere dost karan ki seat hai, toh FITE se chup chap chali jao..

sanyukta - i'll not go.. kya karloge?

rd - i'll make ur life hell!

sanyukta - oh really? i bet u can't

rd-don't mess with me

sanyukta - i'll mess with u .. kya karloge?

vd - kya ho raha hai ?

yoyo - WAR

vd - and who are you?

sanyukta - sir.. i am sanyukta aggarwal

rd - last rank?

sanyukta - last 2Nd rank

rd - meine toh guess kiya tha

sanyukta - 😡

vd - shutup both of u.. and get lost

in night

rd came in sanyu and kaustuki 's room

kaustuki - mera bag kahan le kar jaa rahe ho?

and rd ne kaustuki ka bag window se bahar phenk diya

sanyukta - u moron. yahan kaise aaye... i'll shout

rd covered her mouth

rd -jaise kaustuki ka bag phenka hai, dheere -2 tumhe college ke bahar phenk dunga!

kaustuki shouted --- ehhh

sanyukta - kaustu tu itni zor se chilla bhi sakti hai?😲😲😲

sanyukta - guts hain toh door se jao!

kaustuki -sanyu yeh sach mein door se jaa raha hai...

sanyukta - ab girls kya sochengi?... ki rd kyun aaya tha?

1st girl - sanyukta rd tumhare room mein kya kar raha tha?

sanyukta - kuchh nahi.. tumhe jan na zaroori hai?

2nd girl - chod naa ... dimple luv shuv ka mamla hai... sanyukta hum warden ko nahi batayenge.chill!

sanyukta - wht the hell? yeh kya tha??

rd messaged sanyu

' yeh toh sirf trailer tha , movie abhi baaki hai'

kaustuki -

next day

karan messaged rd

' rd teri wajah se mera 1 year waste go gaya.'

mein jaa raha hoon..bye

rd - i'll not leave u miss sanyukta aggarwal!

sanyukta - bhai i am not coming for sure!

rd - matlab yeh bhaag kar college aayi hai!

sanyukta - bhai jo karna hai kar lijiye! but i'm not coming... u can't force me

sanyukta ne jaan bhuj kar blast kar diya! ( yeh scene copied hai show se )

sanyukta - finally mein ghar nahi jaa rahi hoon!

rd (in mind)- iss sanyukta ne blast kiya .. and

include mein bhi ho gaya ...

guy - farzi engineer.. vd ki lab mein blast kar diya

rd - shut your bloody mouth!

in class

rd ne sanyukta par paper ball phenki.. but accidentally vidushi ke lagi

uss par likha tha ---

BAHAR AAO --- JALDI

vidushi - sir... may i go to washroom?

teacher - sure!

vids - hi rd!

rd- what?..😡

vids - kya kaam tha?

rd- tumse ?

vids - haan.. tumhi ne toh mujhe bahar bulaya..bhul gaye?

rd- get lost!

vd - wanna join dream team ?if yes ... 6 machines hain.. and dream team mein jo aana chahte hain rukein ...

1 . randhir

2. sanyukta

3. kaustuki

4. vidushi

5. jiggy

6 sahil

vd - okay guys ... so mujhe yeh machines kal tak repair chahiye!

vidushi - yeh kya musibat hai!

all were working except -- vidushi

vidushi - rd, kuchh samaj nahi aa raha ... can u please help?

rd - get lost!

vidushi - whatever!

in night

rd - abhi tak pura nahi hua? :D

sanyukta - pehle tum khud ki machine test karlo

rd - test karne ki zaroorat nahi... i m genius

sanyukta - whatever!... yeh! mine is working!

next day

vd - rd your machine is not working! farzi engineer...!

and sanyukta aggarwal .. your machine is perfect!

rd- but sir.. how is this possible?

vd- mujhe kaise pata?

precap- rd shouts at sanyukta..

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