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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Just saw payal's note.  I completely agree,  each part is red twice,  first read is like hungry eating- checking for what's happening in the story n second time it is enjoying ur actual word play :)

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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nisha0604


OMG!! THANKS SO MUCH Payal

I cannot believe the kind of things you say about it

MAKES IT SO WORTH MY WHILE TO WRITEEmbarrassed
Its that one beat that just pop... I know what u meanEmbarrassed

JUSTT FOR THAT LOVELY COMMENT ANOTHER UPDATE...
 

@Bold: Does this mean every time I comment on an update, I'll be rewarded with another update? Evil Smile ROFL

Now I will sit here impatiently hitting refresh every 5 minutes. 

Thank you. Seriously. 




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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
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I am the Pavlovian dog...

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^ Noted. 

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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 4:56pm | IP Logged
Part 35
Time Allotment and Vampires


Blushing OR ROFL


What if Ranjan had walked in on them?Shocked
Nothing short of suicide was warranted on that one... or Manny... she thought I was gorgeous enough to be a model,
 I pooh poohed her and told her I was a serious accountant, who only found herself floating and sliding over her "R&B"DeadAngry

What if the kids had come out... she knew when she entered the house... he phone buzzed with a text from Akka "Have u reached?"
It was 6:42...
When she sat in his car it was almost 8
She knew she had chai and took a quick Tamil lessons for Manny downstairs
That puts the encounter at 20 minutues
TWENTY GLORIOUS MINUTES? OR MORE? 23 or 22?
He got his first finger kangi
He sat on the day bed/couch checking his messages as she wore her clothing

IDIOT NOT CLOTHING JUST HOODIE... JUST HOODIE... OVER HER SOAKED TEEEmbarrassed
Zipped up into her wind pipe... the cold moist reminder a erotic badge... on her cleft...
He looked like Shravu, sitting on the couch content... at geting his POST NAP SNACKBlushing
RakshasanEmbarrassed


when Akka would visit when Shravu was younger, 
he would take an afternoon nap and when he was up, Amma would give him some sweet in a cup, a piece of burfi or some chakli
He would sit on the couch and eat slolwy... 
she would go crush him, pull his cheeks and kiss him, making him cry tipping his lil kinnam (bowl) over all over the sofa
"He JUST WOKE UP DI" Akka would wail
"I didnt ask him to be so adorable, you should have made a less adorable kid" she would say smugly
Feeling the toddler's cheeks


She wore orange bangles with her suit yesterday... he broke a couple... it lay on the day bed...

He PICKED IT UP, "DO U WANT IT?" look
YA I AM BUILDING A SHRINE... I WAS MISSING 6 PIECES"
Rakshasan
She gently bent down and found her scuncie... and tied her hair
He didnt look at her adnmiringly or helped her

It was like just another afternoon in that house
Like she belonged there...
SHE HATED HERSELF FROM THAT POINT ON...
I AM AN ADDICT... UVE TURNED A BORING IYER GIRL INTO AN ADDICT
Rakshasane.. U DEVIL
She cursed
Her voice was still sleep drugged
After all the moaning and groaning on the couch?
there was a love bite way below her collar bone... way way below is all she would sayBlushing
She wont pin point the location like Google maps... accuracy as an Accounting skill she hated today...
She held his sweats at various points in time to launch herself off the couch or swing herself on top of him..
He grabbed her hand a couple times and saw her freshly manicured dark pink nails
"I KNOW THEY DONT MATCH" she muttered hoarsely

He sent them back to his waist...
He probably expected her to use some rare designer shampoo, her sunsilk must have horrified him...
GOOD" she muttered...

"i will leave shortly" she texted Akka with shaking fingers
"You dont have to look at the whole thing, just the first 7 rows he said on his call...AND THEN SPOKE IN FRENCH!
He sounded SO SEXY IN THAT VOICE... he sounded sexy BREATHING
Rakshasan... HE WAS SEXY WHEN HE WAS INVISIBLEEmbarrassed


. he stood up she noticed kohl on his left sleeve and a smudge on his open V
Prayed Manny was not home
She sat down for a bit...
He disappeared with the call

the kids HAD NO CLUE
She sat down and shut her eyes... and felt every erogenous zone... it had become her part time job
Her index finger was the lucky employee... she was sore and achy...tender and throbbing
there was no part of her that hadnt rubbed on him today
Not only her face, but her whole being was flushed
Like the kids in RK Puram mixed red dye in a drum on Holi and dunked their friends in... she was bathed in red
she felt the simple gold bead of a nose ring... tried to stroke it as he had... she couldnt get it right
It was not arousing her
She opened and curled her toes
Without toe rings without touching them without using his hands he had sent her to paradise and beyond

"II" he had muttered on her many many timesEmbarrassed
She hadnt said his name once... just spoken a few words in Tamil
Nothing scared him, no threats... no intimidation no blackmail...
None of their clothing had come off... other than her hoodie and she was a gooey mess
She wondered how long she would last if he started undressing her

she felt like crying and laughing at the same time
They bayed for each other's blood at work
They couldnt keep their hands to themselves outside of it
Appa texted her "where are u kanna?"
She turned A SOLID RED...
She ran her hand on her head... her bindi was missing too...
"Picking up Shravu?"
"At Bhallas? ON THE COUCH, JUST GOT DONE MAKING OUT... LOST MY BINDI, HAVE NO KAJAL LEFT...
My entire body's blood supply is threatening to explode from their veins...
Padutharan Pa, "He troubles me SO MUCH" she said aloud huskily
I smell like himn and he smells like me...
HE SAID HE DIDNT KNOW I WAS GOING TO BE HERE...
HE WANTED TO SEE ME
A gurgling atom of joy swiftly slid down her whole body

He returned with the keys... and saw her frozen on the couch... a help appeared
"something to drink?" he asked

YOUR BLOOD she mutteredEvil Smile
AND HE IS SUPPOSED TO BE THE RAKSHASAN?ROFL



Edited by Nisha0604 - 02 January 2015 at 4:59pm

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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 5:58pm | IP Logged
Seriously.. I LOVE your banter here.  And your chapter headings are just the cherry on top of this amazing sundae.

So they both have  both 'marked' the other huh?  Seems to me they are opening up to each other in their own way, loving it.

The fact that I am in my old navy tracks while reading this just made me laugh...LOL

As to your previous comment I have felt that many of the romantic scenes of late have been more pandering to the audience then anything genuine or suitable to what's happening .  I am not complaining really KP & DT are awesome and they always manage to make the most of it... but it seems obvious that some scenes were inserted simply for the sake of including a romantic scene.

  But I choose to put that aside and try to enjoy the emotions being expressed by ISHRA... but  we do get  genuine scenes like today's that somehow makes it easier.  

And about that couch embrace scene- definitely pandering, but adorable still. But it looked really painful, poor KP- I am sure he had neck and back issues after filming that!.

Okay enough of that- let me get back to your story... LOVING it!  Smile




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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
i am officially addicted to your story :-)
I so wish we got to see a confident ,cool R&B in the serial too but thats too much to ask . so your update in our way out in the current state of shagun mess..
I really like the progress and this whole we cant keep our hands off each other chemistry.
I reread your updates .Thanks once again for this story!!!ClapClap



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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
Ada paavi he completely took her by surprise... n he looked content like SHRAVU... n thanks for letting him talk di. awesome updates yaar...

Aur agar Aapharcomment ke bad updates doge toh main logout hi nahi karoongi...;)

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