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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
I finally read this whole thing in one shot- LOVELY!

Such a different take, love your sense of humor and the the pacing of this.

 Your ISHRA is definitely different  but no less appealing then the ones we see on our screens.  Love your constant updates, looking forward to the next one!

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RomComFan

I finally read this whole thing in one shot- LOVELY!

Such a different take, love your sense of humor and the the pacing of this.

 Your ISHRA is definitely different  but no less appealing then the ones we see on our screens.  Love your constant updates, looking forward to the next one!

THANKS VERY MUCH!!

I guess some will say the essence of ISHRA is the two kids and her being a dentist and all...
But I had had it... I have speculated and worried and lamented about everything related to them...
Ashok Shagun Mihir Sooraj Mihika dont do anything for me anymoreCry

THANKS FOR LOVING THE HUMOR... I just wanted it to be breezy and casual, yet serious about all the workplace stuff


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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 6:06pm | IP Logged
Part 13

Sugar bin and Night vision


He bent down to look at the kohl stain on his tee... she leaned on the wall with her eyes shut, 
lips swollen with passion, her face flushed, and her whole being shaking... 
she felt like she was the sugar bin and Amma was pouring the monthly purchase into it...
or like the bucket filling up with "just right" heated water from the geyser on a cold cold morning... 
or she is laying in the midst of loose jasmine at Paatti's house center hall.. in Madurai... eneveloped in scent, 
as Amma and Paati frantically strung it before she crushed it all
Or standing in the balcony when the July rains poured in frenzy...
Her heart continued to race... she had held his watch on the wrist...as he grabbed her chin for the secnd kiss... she continued to hold it NOW...
Her face felt like it was on fire... his beard burn... all over her jaw... she knew how he moaned... she didnt know how he laughed or smiled or chatted or grinned... but she knew HOW HE MOANED

Her left hand gently felt her waist... tracing the path of the carress she had TWO, no three precious pieces of real estate on her, her waist, her mouth, her nose... and her hair and her neck and her scalp
She felt like she had run miles... from some danger... except... she had run INTO ONE


He didnt ask her if he could kiss... he didnt flirt... he walked up hovered and kissed
IS THIS HOW HE DOES THINGS IN LIFE?
Ayyo! Rama! Seriyana Rakshasan (true devil)
"You try that one more time I will kill you" she said... the FIRST PASSIONATE THING she ever said to him
He looked at her deeply and said "I trust... YOU WILL"

The knock happened again...
She opened her eyes and found him right there...
He lifted his left hand, to show her that she held on to it...
"Oh!!!" she let go as if she was holding his zipper...

The help paused... and left for the INSIDE
THE PLUSH LIVING ROOM...
R&B didnt nod... just served himself... sandwich soup and what not...
He didnt offer didnt force her to eat... She was MADDD
Ashamed at herself ashamed she would walk into his house and have him take advantage... NOT THE ISHITA IYER SHE KNEW or Appa knew
The thought of Appa, made her panic "You were HOLDING HIS WATCH FOR 4 MINUTES, APPO USEFUL A TIME AVADU PATHU IRUKALAM, IDIOT you held his watch for 4 minutes"
she screamed at herself
She looked all over the walls for a clock... ofcourse not NOT ONE... the rich people dont need to know TIME... WHERE WOULD THEY HAVE TO BE, WHAT WOULD THEY HAVE TO DO?
"I need to go home" she said furious...
He looked up from his phone and sandwich
she felt like walking up to him and dumping the sandwich on his head and watch the mayo trickle down his eyes...
He just ATE
His phone rang... he didnt get it
She walked over and asked him "Time kya hua hai"
"10:10" he said flatly
"Eat" he said
"NO, U WILL THEN CHARGE ME FOR FOOD"
She saw a HALF SMILE?Shocked CLEFT... A DIMPLE... A DIMPLE? ON HIS LEFT CHEEK?
"OH GREAT!! As if 6'3" and a head full of hair and Papaji being top 100 wealthiest in Delhi, and a CLEAN SET OF TEETH IS NOT ENOUGH?"
"Romba anyayam" "Cruel" she cursed God...

He ate unmindful
"Saapatu Raman, ennoda food saptuduvaan" "HE WILL EAT MY SHARE TOO" she cursed
She grabbed a sandwich and a plate and sat down... the mayo stung her lips... he saw that... 
as slow color rose from some where near her neck all over her face, defying gravity...
They saw each other for the 7th time?
When the next knock happened...
"Sir ki gaadi aa gayi" "Sir nahi aaye" he said...
She jumped out of the couch... quickly shoving down the food, by washing it off with a glass of whatever she found on the wheelie cart
She flew thru the lounge... to wear her strappy pink heels... her newest Metro acquisition... he watched startled as she wore her foot wear.. 
she didnt tell him Iyers didnt wear shoes in the house...

She frantically circled the car hoping to zap the locks and have it open for her...
He was handed the keys by a help, he unlocked it...
She grabbed her purse...like it was contraband of some kind...
She waved at the guard at the gate... he hesitated but didnt walk by
Mujhe cab chahiye.. she said
He was in his car with his lights turned on, her laptop bag was in the back seat
"Mr Bhalla, I just need my iMac" she said

"I will drop u home" he said...
GREAT! APPA WILL BE IN THE BALCONY AND THAT IS ALL I NEED
"No" she said
He waited tuning between stations...
"I should just get off around the block from home" she thought

Got in... and he drove... fast and QUIETLY
When he got on to Malcha Marg, "where to in Sector 12" he asked
"D II 887" she muttered
He drove as if he knew... and then turned into the Secxtor 12 block near Dhaula Kuan...
She made hand signs... and waved to stop...
She got her stuff out, he stepped out.. "Its THAT ONE" she pointed lying ... 
"It says 970-1024" he said dryly...
Kannula velakennai potripa amma, Mom must have applied castor oil in his eyes, he can see so well, or ivan oru hes a vampire he can see in dark... Rakshasan"
He walked BY HER... BY HER... until she got to hers...there was no light at home... just in Periappa's room where the nurse would be reading
Her car was also not parked by the front lawn of 888...

Do you have the 5 bucks you owe me" HE ASKED
PAAVI she cursed out loud... (Paavi transalates to sinner)

Coming up... her thoughts








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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
Damn girl! You have me hooked to R&B and II like some kind of drug addict! Tell me there's more for tonight! Will be waiting eagerly for it Nisha!  

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nividances

Damn girl! You have me hooked to R&B and II like some kind of drug addict! Tell me there's more for tonight! Will be waiting eagerly for it Nisha!  

Thank you

U are not alone

The author is hooked tooCry

I do this like its Grad School homework
I NEVER did Grad school home work like this
The first thing I do when I return from work is write...

Columbia will be up and she will kill me if I dont post

I cheated her by not quitting my job and posting all day

Abhi atleast shaam ko dhoka nahi de sakti

I will post more tonite...

It doesnt take me long... I start writing and it just flows...Big smile

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR BEING ADDICTED
IT GIVES ME A REASON TO WRITEEmbarrassed

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
What a wonderful update. I have to say, I love the Tamil included in here... makes it that much more special and appealing to me!

 I love the  thought processes... it reads very realistic.

As for your previous comment about the essence of ISHRA, I guess that's part of it as well- but ISHRA are also the snappy comebacks and the undeniable attraction. 

I love our ISHRA, of course but I completely understand wanting  to get away from the crazies on our screen for a while, thanks for sharing your distraction process with us!Smile

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
Hum aaa Gaye Dancing

Nisha Ji aapke wajah humei kal bahut beizzati sehni padi! 
Aaj jurmana bharna hai 


Oi aashu ugh gayi kya?? 

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
This 5 rupaiya no baara Anna has become the Cupid


Why do guys always eat After making out? 
Because they get MORE hungry!!!!



Hahahah nah
Get it??!!! 

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